| "The Love Nest" Reviews/Comments [ 122 ] |
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Reviewed By: thebigW [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 13:49 EDT
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Really liked Kit's and Naru's chapters. Keep going.
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 18:58 EDT
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Damn! What are you? Mormon?!
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Reviewed By: whitebear33 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 15:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
chapter 10 please. though is spelled like this thought.
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Reviewed By: whitebear33 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 14:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you need help with your spelling you can ask me.
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Reviewed By: Marine Brother Shran [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2006 00:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sugoi! Sugoi desu! Despite the fact that it was lemon, that was a beautifully written lemon. I love how Granny has told her story to every girl. Now to see what you have in store for good old Keitaro. Cheers ^^ Ja ne
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Reviewed By: tomdj1701 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 16:58 EDT
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Great update.
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 16:42 EDT
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Nice work, but i found an error.... "a part of each others" I dont think there is supposed to be an "S" at the end, but other then that, i lovved this new chap.... can't wait for how this is going to turn out.
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Title: nice update
Reviewed By: sailorvista [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 22:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice update and I can not wait to read more and see how the story turns out
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Reviewed By: tomdj1701 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 11:42 EDT
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nice update
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Title: Koalla and Mitsune's chapters
Reviewed By: Peacemaker [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 03:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A fantastic job on both of your two newest chapters. The story is moving along nicely and we are almost to Naru, yeah. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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Title: Movin' right along...
Reviewed By: thebigW [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2006 20:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice twist to Kit's background. Of course she's lived with some kind of hurt for some time now. She's the oldest girl, yet for some reason fearful of moving on. She hides it well. In the previous chapter, Su's effigy of Kei oddly reminded me of Helga of "Hey, Arnold", who has Arnold's "head" in a shrine in her closet. But unlike Su, she only kisses it... Weird, eh? Ciao. W.
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2006 19:27 EDT
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Man, you continue to impress...... Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: tomdj1701 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 20:55 EDT
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Nicley done, hope you update this one soon.
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 21:42 EDT
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Just adding this to my previous review..... Nice new chap..... but kinda..... short or something..... that and one question.... Was Su a necromancer? or did you just put that in as another of her strange powers, like what the red moon does to her, well anyway its still a good story and please try not to swamp my inbox by updating each and every chap at once, ok?
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 18:06 EDT
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............. Dude...... you spammed my email inbox, ya know that? that was annoying but atleast i know you're still alive, so its ok anyway I don't really see any changes other then small additives, gramatical changes, and very subtle changes and you're still on my top 5 list! But could you kinda not update them all in one day? I dont like havin my inbox spammed......
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