| "The Love Nest" Reviews/Comments [ 122 ] |
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Reviewed By: sailorvista [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2007 22:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can not wait to see what is going to happen now that they read all there scrolls. Hope to see an update soon
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Title: Fresh Meat!
Reviewed By: A-Z Mark II [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 08:31 EST
Comment/Review:
Ah, a new chapter after such a long time! :) While a little smaller and lighter on lemony goodness than I might have otherwise hoped, it is a good developmental chapter for Keitaro's shifting perspective of the girls. I look forward to him ACTING on his new knowledge.
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Reviewed By: pspmario On: November 11, 2007 12:58 EST
Comment/Review:
Dude i hate cliffhangers with no ending in sight. please update soon
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Reviewed By: Innortal [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 11:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice, original, and great style. Looking forward to either Keitaro's scroll or the first pairing.
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Reviewed By: newtob exile On: June 25, 2007 16:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is on one of the best Love Hina Lemon fan fiction I have ever read. The scroll idea is very original and this fic has the potential to be a masterpiece of the X rated Love Hina fan fiction community. I await the next chapters with great expectations!
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Title: More! Now! XDD
Reviewed By: Yuashu Katsuya On: May 18, 2007 14:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cannot believe myself to be reading such a smutty fic and liking it SO much! I'm interested to see how this all comes to head. I can only hope you are but mere sentences away from finishing your next chapter! Now for the critique. I love your added back story for Kanako and Mitsune. Great job there. My only problem, however, is that you are lacking a bit in the grammar dept. Not enough to deter me from your excellent story, but enough to irk me slightly. Just remember that only the first word of a sentence and proper nouns are to be capitalized. I won't rant, but please keep it in mind. My e-mail is trumpeter987@hotmail.com. If you have ANY questions, I would be more than happy to answer them. I'm an aspiring Literature major and love to help others! Now, on with the story! Ja ne~
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Reviewed By: suicne132 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 12:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can not find any mistakes so far good work. i like it. :)
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Title: pls update soon
Reviewed By: monkeyman1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 06:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pls update soon im really looking forward to it pls update soon pls pls pls pls pls dis is a really good story your the best
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 07:16 EDT
Comment/Review:
It says 'Completed,' but what about Keitaro's scroll and vial?
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Reviewed By: Glaedr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 16:48 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Nice story, though as I'm pertty sure people before me have said, please finish it, or at least Keitaro's Scroll.
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Reviewed By: x2501 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 01:58 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Fantastic, but it feels unfinished, what about keitaro's scroll? if you could add more I'd love it.
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Reviewed By: sheadaman [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2006 03:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT WAS GOOD!!!! But it seems to me like u need to add more stuff into it... u know... keep going. It left me empty as if it was unfinished T.T.
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Reviewed By: blinkedy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2006 17:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i la-la-la-loved it! *sticks up two thumbs ^__^
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Title: Good work
Reviewed By: XoreandoX [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 22:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story i like the way you keep the story related to the show i really wish to see some updates again/soon
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Reviewed By: whitebear33 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 14:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
you need to work on spelling. other then that you did a great job. not to menchen what your story does to me. Now when we move you will have lots of time to write chapter 10 cuze that's what i want.
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