Love Hina Fan Fiction ❯ Young Girl ❯ Note from the Author! ( Chapter 2 )

A/N: Hmm… I see what you mean, dear reviewers. But you see, the problem is that… well, writing lemons is fun, but also kind of… embarrassing, you know what I mean? I'm not new to writing in general, just writing lemons, which I find a lot more difficult to work with for several reasons. Anyway, I'm working on rewriting the chapter to see if I can get it less mechanical and more personal, but I'm not sure it turned out much better. And don't worry; I consider your reviews constructive criticism (very helpful too, if I do say so myself), not flames.

 

Oh yeah, and to Ausir, I also saw the thing about the clothes but was kinda lazy to go back and redo it then upload it again lol… but I'll change it this time XD

 

And yeah, the age for legal sex in Japan is 13, but it can vary in different places. For example, in Tokyo it's illegal for two people to have sex when one is over eighteen and one is below thirteen… or something like that.

 

Anyway, since I'm not really satisfied with the second chapter, I'm gonna take it down and redo it to a new and (hopefully) improved lemon.

 

So, dear readers, I'm afraid this is see ya later until I can fix the chapter!

 

I know I'll get this whole “smut” thing right some day…

 

XD