Naruto Fan Fiction ❯ A Sad Live Deserves More ❯ Chapter 2 ( Chapter 2 )
[ X - Adult: No readers under 18. Contains Graphic Adult Themes/Extreme violence. ]
'What time is it?' is the only thought that ran through Naruto's head as he looked out the window. 'Well it's close to morning. AAAAH, do I go or not? She was so nice. I'll go if it's just to see her one last time.' with that thought he threw on a pair of his orange pants and a black under shirt and sneaks out. 'All those pranks helped my stealth tremendously. Well I better hurry'
'Where is he?' was the thought running through Haku's mind at that time. 'It's ten minutes till dawn and he still isn't here. Did he already kill himself? I was kind of hoping to play again. AAAAH what am I thinking! When he finds out what I am he'll get angry. I wonder how old he is. He's definitely older then the other two. A hell of a lot cuter too! AAAAAHHHH!!! Here I am thinking perverted thoughts about someone that is trying to kill them self!' caught in his own thoughts Haku didn't notice Naruto walk into the clearing.
'She hasn't noticed me. Is she thinking about last time? She's blushing slightly. Well the only way to find out is to ask!'
"Good morning Haku." was all he said and her head instantly swung to face him. He could also see her get slightly redder but then she shook her head as if to clear away a thought.
"Good morning Naruto. I'd like to talk to you some more. Care to join me?" Haku asked as he sat with his back against a tree. 'I hope he didn't see my erection. I'm not ready to explain that one just yet'
"Sure, but I'm not sure you going to like what I'm going to tell you." sitting across from Haku Indian-style he gets comfortable. "Um Haku. I've decided to tell you why the villagers hate me. If you hate me after I tell you know that I don't blame you. Just promise you'll listen all the way through."
Haku noticed how stressed he seemed to be so without warning he pulled Naruto next to him and just hugged him. "It must pain you allot to tell someone this. I don't know what you could say to make me hate you but I promise to listen to the hole story."
Bowing his head he started. "Well what do you know about the Yondaime Hokage?"
"I know he was one of the most powerful ninja's to ever live. I mean he stopped Iwa from concurring Konoha and that he killed a demon." Haku saw Naruto stiffen has he mentioned the demon.
"Well your mostly right." resting his elbows on his knees and placing his head in his hands he continued. "Haku, nobody can kill a demon. It's impossible. The only way to stop it was to seal It." at this moment Haku knew where this was going but let him continue. "And you can't just seal it into anything. No the only option was a new born. I don't know how he chose it but I was the lucky one. He gave his life to seal the Kyuubi no Kitsune into me. I carry a demon that killed thousands. They see it instead of me. Do they realize that I'm not it? Or is its misery so important they have to condemn me. Does his sins out weigh my innocence?" he turned to look Haku straight in the eyes. "Do you fee dirty for touching me? Do you want to gag? Do you want to kill me? Your eyes yesterday told me you cared. What will the tell me today?"
'He holds the Kyuubi? That's why they hate him? What gives them the right? Don't they see they were hurting a little boy?'
As Haku was thinking Naruto saw anger in her eyes. With a sigh he stood and walked to the middle of the clearing and started the hand seals that would end his life.
'What's he doing? Oh god this must be what he was talking about! The technique that will kill him! I must stop him!' without further thought Haku dived at Naruto, tackling him to the ground to stop the seals. "DON'T YOU DARE! Don't you see if you kill yourself they win?"
Naruto was surprised. 'She stopped me? But I saw the anger and hate in her eyes. All I see now is fear, fear and something else.' "Why shouldn't I let them win? I saw it in your eyes Haku. The same hate and anger! I thought you might understand but I was wrong. But don't fear. When I die I take him with me! You don't have to fear his release! Now leave me!" his eyes where closed so he never saw it coming. When he felt her lips on his he stared into her eyes. Gone was the anger and hatred. All that remained was compassion and a softness he's never seen.
"I do not hate you Uzumaki Naruto. The burden was placed on you without consent. They have no right to hate you. What I fear is that they've broken you beyond repair. I fear that you will hate me for what I Am." as Naruto stared at him he could only cry.
"Haku. Why would I hate you?" Naruto was confused. Haku didn't hate him, but Haku thinks I might hate her. "How could I hate someone who accepts me? I don't think there is anything you could say that would make me hate you."
Haku realized that he was sitting on Naruto's hips and quickly stood and turned his back to Naruto. "What if I told you I wasn't a girl?"
Naruto to his credit just stood and hugged Haku from behind. "I couldn't care less. Just the fact that you accept me tells me that you're not a bad person. So what if you're a guy. I mean it's a surprise but I don't think any less of you."
"You don't feel disgusted? Yesterday, what I did? You still don't care?" twinges of hope where hidden in the despair in his voice.
"No, I quite enjoyed it ether way. I was hoping you'd let me return the favor." to say Haku was surprised would be a vast understatement. But then worry still hi him.
"Naruto, I appreciate you words but you still don't understand. I'm not a boy either." Naruto was so confused that he let Haku slip from his embrace.
Naruto watched as Haku slowly removed her pink kimono to reveal the most beautiful body he has ever seen. Her figure was something out of a dream it was flawless. White alabaster skin, round full breasts, smooth stomach, hide hips, and long sensuous legs the seemed to go on forever. The only thing that contradicted that fact that she was female was a fully erect penis just above her slit. Naruto snapped out of his stupor to see Haku looking away from him. 'She is afraid ill hate her for this?'
(AN I'm going to refer to Haku as a girl from now to stop confusion)
Naruto stepped up to the goddess in front of him and gently moved her chin to face him. "Haku, your beautiful and don't let anyone tell you otherwise. There blind to see the goddess before me."
Tears of joy wear streaming down her cheeks. 'He thinks I'm beautiful.' "Thank you Naruto. You don't know how much your words mean to me. But there is something else I have to tell you. I was the hunter-nin that saved Zabuza."
Shock and confusion run rampant though his mind. 'She's Zabuza's accomplice? If that's so then why didn't she kill me? So many questions.' "Why." was all that he could say.
"When I found you yesterday I thought you were dead. When I went to check for a pulse you tried to run, and that's when I say your eyes. They spoke of endless pain and sorrow. It made me remember my past. I was hated for my bloodline. It was hated so much my father killed my mother and tried to kill me to end it. I killed him with my powers. I killed my own father and the rest of the mob. From that day on I lived on the streets, digging through trash for cloths and something to eat. That is when Zabuza found me. He makes no allusions to have feelings or to care. I was told outright I was to be his weapon, but I didn't care because someone wanted me. Someone needed my help. But most importantly I was no longer alone. After hearing your tale I knew I wouldn't be able to kill you. I would be like killing myself. What am I going to do Naruto? I can't betray Zabuza. He protected me, and gave me a reason to live. I just don't know anymore." Haku let loose all the tears she's kept inside and just cried into his chest. Caught in his own thoughts he just sat against the tree and held her in his lap.
'Haku is Zabuza's weapon. I will have to fight Haku. But I couldn't hurt her. But the mission will fail if I don't fight. I would be condemning this country to slavery if I stand aside. Can I let a country of innocent people die because I have finally found someone who understands? If it was just a matter of betraying my village I could do it, I mean the old man and Iruka would understand. But could I live with letting Tazuna die.' "Haku, I don't want to have to fight you. But I can't condemn this country to slavery at the hands of Gatou. He is an evil man that hurts innocent people. But neither can I harm you, the one person that truly understands me."
Haku just looked into Naruto's eyes, "do you think we could of been together if things were different?"
"I'm sure of it." they both just continued to shed tears holding onto each other.
"Naruto, can we be together, just this once?" Haku's answer was Naruto's lips being pressed to her. She felt him nip and suck at her lips, slowly rolling them so she was beneath him.
Tilting her chin up he stared straight into her eyes, "Haku, know that I love you no matter what." before she could respond he return to lips with twice the passion of before. Tongues collided and battled for dominance, as hands roamed each other's bodies. Naruto's kisses made there way to her ear; "Now it's my turn to give you something you deserve!" her moans were answer sufficient for him as he made his way down her neck biting her collar hard enough to leave a mark the sensation of his teeth against her skin was lick a flash pure pleasure. Noting her mewling at his bite he continued his journey of the angel beneath him. As his lips climbed her breast his hand traced are the other. He couldn't get enough of her skin. It was so smooth and soft as if to hide power concealed beneath the velvet exterior. With a devilish smirk her nipple into his mouth tracing his tongue around it before biting it slightly. Awarded with her moans that turned to whimpers as he blew across her abused flesh. Making sure as to not leave out the other breast he attacked it with the same ferocity as his hand traveled her stomach wrapping around her hardness. He smirked again when he felt her heartbeat double.
"Naruto yo...ahhh." her thoughts skipped as he gently squeezed her as his tongue made it was over her navel. Suddenly Haku looses all ability to for a coherent though as his lips pressed against her head. Leaving butterfly kisses down the underside to her womanhood. Spreading her lips he explore her ever fold with his tongue. Enjoying the chorus of mewls, moans, and whimpers.
Haku was in absolute bliss as she ran her hands through his hair. She didn't believe the body could experience such pleasure. She arched her back and screamed his name to the heavens when he found her little bundle of nerves. After her reaction he seemed to take special care to that particular part. When she felt his mouth leave her she whimpered with want and need. When she suddenly felt his mouth around her, her eyes snapped open but all she saw was white.
He knew she wasn't expecting this. He knew most men would avoid it like the plague, but he loved her in all her glory. He could feel her nail dig into his scalp and took that as encouragement, and continued to trace every detail of her penis while applying a slight suction. He figured if it felt great when she did it to him yesterday, then it would make her feel just as good. As he slowly progressed down her length his hand found its way back to her slippery folds. Figuring she wasn't going to last he tried to take her into his throat. After a couple tries he manages to take her to her root and hum just like she did to him only he also attacked her clit with his diligent fingers. Knowing what was coming helped allot when he felt her shoot down his throat. Only gagging slightly he pulled back just so he could swallow her seed. He was surprised that it didn't taste that bad.
As Naruto started to deep-throat her, her world singled down to just her and the blonde boy between her legs, and when he started to hum just like she did to him she lost all prospective. It was like floating in nothingness while warmth explodes out from your core. When she finally came to she say his whiskered face smiling up at her.
"By your screams I would say you enjoyed that very much." his knowing smile only seemed to broaden when she blushed slightly. Reclaiming his place above her he took her lips in a passionate kiss once again battling for dominance as her hands removed his pants and boxers in one fell swoop.
Sliding her hand around him she licked his ear. "I want you to take me. To make me yours."
With a nod he positions himself at her opening. "Haku, with the I declare myself yours and yours alone." with this, said he took her lips as he took her innocence. Seeing her in pain he tries to speak only so be silenced but her finger at his lips.
"Just let me get use to it, I'll be alright." with a smile he when to kissing the mark he left on her collar while caressing her chest. After a short while she wrapped her legs around his waist. He started a slow and steady rhythm as to not to hurt her. This didn't last long as she started to plead for him to go faster. Her screams started to drive him wild as his instincts made him try to get deeper, to go harder. He bite down on his earlier make as her nails raked arose his back. They eyes meet as they hit their respective peaks. They quickly fell into a peaceful slumber cuddling into each other.
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All right, I know very Romeo and Juliet but they don't call Shakespeare a genius for nothing. People I got questions and I hope you got answers!
Question ONE How do you like your coffee?
Black?
Black with sugar?
Creamer?
Creamer and sugar?
Skip the coffee and drink creamer and sugar straight up!
Personally I like mine with 1/4 of it creamer but this isn't about coffee its about how dark you want the fic to be.
Question TWO Does size really matter?
I'm going to leave the innuendos up to you!
But I could end it all next chap or go for the gold and play out well into the next generation of kids and beyond, and do you like longer charters with longer waits for updates or would you want to get quick updates but shorter chapters?
Question THREE Did the lemon come out right?
This is something I was wondering. Should I leave out the lemons and just reference to the closeness or do you like the lemons as they are? (Just so you know if you want them to stay they won't be every chapter, I just wanted to kind of show how desperate they both are for love in general and at the ages there at the physical aspect of teenage hormones kind of helped it. I know I was at that age!)
Question FOUR What are your thoughts of what I did to Haku?
Haku has always seemed kind of gender confused so I just said fuck it lets make it even more confusing! And I wonder if anyone saw it coming? (POINT AND A COOKIE TO: Brian Darksoul for seeing it coming! Now I just need to find a way to fit the cookie into the CD-ROM drive)
Question FIVE Of Power Levels and Balance! Should Naruto be an unstoppable juggernaut or an average Joe?
This is were I wonder if he should have a blood limit, access to tones of Kyuubi's chakra, or be really smart under the mask? In this story I've all ready decided he's going to be smart but not too smart, but as to others I'm not sure. If I give him a blood limit its ether going to be a speed related on gotten form the 4th or one Kyuubi gives him.
And now for some of my thoughts and peevs!
PEEV ONE!!!!
Naruto's listed age. It says he's 12-13 just like the rest of the rookie nine, but he failed the exam twice already. Would that not make him two years older then his peers? In the manga this small fact has ALWAYS plagued me. It would make Naruto 14-15 so in this and most likely a majority of my future fics he will be what I consider his proper age.
PEEV TWO!!!
Why to they kill or toss to the side the best characters? I mean come on Haku, Anko, and Ibiki have to be some of the best examples. I personally thought they should of taken Anko on the training trip because she would be able to help him fight Orochimaru better then Jiraiya.
THOUGHT ONE!!!!
What you favorite non-cannon team? Mines Naru/Hina/Shika. The three of them would be highly capable and extremely well balanced. Naruto is the perfect TANK/DECOY unit. Simply through clones, the few good techniques he knows, and his ungodly amount of chakra he can delay if not win encounters by attrition alone. Hinata is there for intelligence gathering and tracking. In combat she goes for flaking ranged fighters while Naruto distracts the opponent with the frontal assault leaving the majority of combatants to the TANK, or possible support role as a medic. Shikamaru is team captain and strategist. In combat takes same roll as Hinata in cleanup and support.
THOUGHT TWO!!!
Cookies are the shit!
So I'd love to tally your votes and read the flames that are sure to follow a twist like this. I'm expecting a lot of
"Oh GOD I need to wash my eyes!"