Naruto Fan Fiction ❯ Are you really that lonely? ❯ Blue eyes ( Chapter 2 )

Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto sighs never will

Reviews:

From: gothangel123

This is so sad! But I love it! Keep going!

Hatake-Kakashi86: I'm glad you like it! Thank you for reviewing

From: lilbunnyfufu

Good! Now a few thing that needs some clarifacation (sp?). What

triggered the sudden mental breakdown? Naruto seemed like he just woke up and

snaped. Did something happen to trigger the event?

Hatake-Kakashi86: In time you'll see what triggered his anger. But I'm glad you liked this fic, thank you for reviewing!

From: inu's-girl-forever

aw poor naruto he thinks no one loves him. don't worry naruto i lvoe you to glomps naruto. you have to see the brighter side of things naru-chan like how sasuke-chan likes you to tear and to the author make naru-chan happy i tell you or i'll send my zombie bunnies after you

Hatake-Kakashi86: Don't worry in time Naruto will become happy. No need to send your zombie bunnies after me! Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you liked my fic!

From: NaruNaruChi-San

yay! so good! i love this! can you please read my naruto fic? i would love it if you didi!

Hatake-Kakashi86: I'm glad you like it! I read your fic as you asked and I really liked it keep up the good work!

From: Blai

I like the idea and concept of the story, and everything is pretty

good.

But the things you had the characters say are a bit too blunt. Like

this:

"The only thing that seems to make sense is that Naruto believes noone

cares for him. He probably thinks no one will ever love him." the

silver haired ninja picked the blonde up. "I'm taking him to the hospital

you can visit him whenever you'd like.""

and then later you have Tsunade say the same thing pretty much.

From Naruto's reactions and emotions when he cut him self in the start

of the story you can tell he feels no one loves him, so starting it

just pushes the obvious on the reader again and is just a bit.. well

unneeded.

Just my thought I hope I didnt offend you. I look forward to your

updates!

Hatake-Kakashi86: I get what your saying. Maybe I emphasized too much on Naruto being lonely. Thank you for pointing that out, you see sometimes i get distracted and lose focus but now that you mention it i did repeat myself alot. I honestly didn't mean to bore you. But i'm glad you liked it well enough to review and share your thoughts with me.

From: kira-fan

I like it a lot, but put more detail. My stories suck because i don't have detail. My teacher told me so. But even so, it's WAY better than mine.

Hatake-Kakashi86:I have the same problem with not giving enough detail, do me a favor and don't doubt yourself, Hell i have some who LOVE my fics to death, and other's help me correct my mistakes. Thank you though for reviewing and i've thrilled you like it!

From: WindDragon0131

that was great. keep going. i'll wait for the next chapter but update soon.

Hatake-Kakashi86: Thank you! I'm so glad that you like it! I'll try to update soon, i'm so busy w/ four stories at once ontop of school, etc, etc.

From: aivivi

cool little story... continues with yaoi... Ok!

Hatake-Kakashi86: gasps it wouldn't be the same w/out yaoi! Seeing how that's all I write. but thank you for reviewing i'm glad you like it!

Are you really that lonely- Chapter two

Naruto's POV

Was it that I was sick of Sasuke's pity that I attacked him? Was it because I hated him always being one step ahead of me? Or was it that I was terrified he would hate me when he found out how I truly felt about him? Seeing the look of disbelief upon Sakura and Kakashi's face as I lashed out at Sasuke truly hurt. When Sasuke threw his kunai at me I prayed it would pierce my heart to end all this pain. I just want it to end, this agony is killing me.

3rd person POV

"Will he be okay?" Sasuke asked the nurse as he looked at his hospitalized comrade.

"His wounds are already healed, there should be no reason for him to still be in this coma." she replied

"Then why hasn't he woke up yet?" Sakura whispered softly as she walked over to the blonde's side gently stroking his cheek.

The nurse smiled sadly as she saw Sakura's act of compassion for Naruto.

"The doctor believes the coma is self influenced. There must be some reason he doesn't want to wake up."

Kakashi remained quiet taking all the information in. He hated seeing his student like this and to make matters worse, Iruka was a nervous wreck. Constantly worrying about the blonde's health.

He looked at the Uchiha heir, a sad look in his visably eye. The boy hadn't left the kitsune's side. The prodigy held the trouble maker's hand, his thumb caressing the soft tan skin under his fingertips. Trying to comfort, and coax his love to open his bright blue eyes.

"Naruto come back to us." Sakura sobbed. Tears rolling down her pretty face. "We all miss you, please come back to us."

Sasuke looked at the girl amazed at her words and her sudden show of emotions toward their team mate. He hadn't realized how much she cared for Naruto.

"Listen to Sakura, Naruto" Sasuke whispered gently "Everyone misses you, no one hates you. In fact they look up to you." swallowing back a sob "You inspire everyone to be the best they can." closing his eyes together tightly to avoid tears, "do you... do you remember your dream to become hokage?" he choked out. "How can you accomplish such a dream lying in a hospital bed?"

Kakashi looked at his students, he walked over to the blonde's side as well. He pulled the blanket down, and lifted the teens shirt up a little bit, exposing the seal, which had now spread to cover the boy's whole abdomen.

"Fight the kyuubi Naruto," he spoke in a gentle voice "I believe in you."

"Nh..Kakashi-sensei?" a soft mumble came.

Those bright blue eyes opened and looked at those around him.

"How long have I been out?" he asked

"A couple of weeks." Kakashi answered " Are you feeling any better?"

Naruto nodded his head and looked at Sakura, giving her a small smile to let her know that he was okay. She smiled warmly back at him. Naruto looked at Sasuke, he gave him a nod of thanks as well as a small smile.

"I'm glad you came back to me." Sasuke whispered as he pulled Naruto into a tight embrace.

Naruto felt the heat rush to his face, as he realized he was in Sasuke's arms. Something he wanted for a long time. He couldn't help but truly smile as he embraced Sasuke just as tightly.

A/N: sorry for such a short chapter. I've been kinda busy w/ school and such but here's the second chapter as you wanted. Please review and tell me what ya think! Also much thanx to those who reviewed before! I hope you review again and truly enjoy this fic. Give me some suggetions, opinions and of course constructive crisitsim!