Naruto Fan Fiction ❯ Blind Spot ❯ blind spot ( Chapter 1 )
[ Y - Young Adult: Not suitable for readers under 16 ]
By: Nelle22 
umm Kisame and my Oc hope you like
Anime/Manga: Naruto Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Action / Adventure / Drama / Romance | Type: Alternate Universe | Uploaded On: 02.17.2008 | Pages: 3 | Words: 1.7K | Visits: 257 | Status: Work In Progress
umm Kisame and my Oc hope you like
Anime/Manga: Naruto Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Action / Adventure / Drama / Romance | Type: Alternate Universe | Uploaded On: 02.17.2008 | Pages: 3 | Words: 1.7K | Visits: 257 | Status: Work In Progress
P.L: to all my faithful reviewers I’ve decided to put my own character into the mix of stories I have created. Her name is Suikatsu and if you wish to see her pic go to my profile and click on the link. It’s a KisameXOC fic. Kisame and the Akatsuki might be a little OOC but hey it's called 'FANFICTION.net' emphasis on the fiction. I don't mind the flames but hate mail is kind ofgraderish.
Enjoy
Kisame watched the full moon at the hideout. It was august 9th. 'Her day' he thought as he sighed. He didn't care that Itachi was looking at him weird. He didn't care that Deidara stopped trying to kill Tobi because of him being Tobi. He just wanted to remember her. His water-lily. She always gave him words of encouragement. If he needed a shoulder to lean on, she gave him hers. But he could not go back. Not after what he did to her. He sighed again but longer.
"Fuck it! Kisame what the hell has fuckin gotten into you?!?!" Hidan yelled.
“Hn" Kisame grunted
Now at this point in time, everyone's seriously weirded out so they decided to try different tactics to get him to respond normally.
“hey Kisame, your moms a fish"Sasori
“I ate your pet fish inside your room"- Deidara
“You fucking stink bastard of a fish whore" - Hidan
“Ummmmmm.... your mom?" -Tobi
"Sigh. Hmm? You say something, guys?" Kisame asked lifting an eyebrow.
Somehow, Tobi acquired a bright green spandex suit, bright orange legwarmers, a chunin jacket, bowl cut and super eyebrows.
"CURSE YOU AND YOUR HIP WAYS....." BAM
"If you even finish that..." Itachi let the threat hang
Kisame looked around and sighed. He wanted to see her.
“Leader. If I may..." he started
Leader lifted a hand for him to continue.
“I want to go back to mist. For someon-thing. Something yeah." Kisame corrected.
"Kisame speak" leader demanded
'Sigh I knew it' he thought
“I want to visit someone who I was close with." Kisame asked straightening out.
"No"
"But-"
"No"
"Leader I-"
"No. not for some two-bit whore that spre-"
"SHE'S NOT LIKE THAT!" Kisame yelled slamming his fist into the wall.
Everyone knew that Kisame wouldn't dare go that far to Pein. But for him to be that angry over a woman was unheard of.
“Kisame who are you talking about?" Deidara asked softly as she touched his shoulder. (I don't care. in this fic only Dei-Chan is female. Konan doesn't count.
“Suikatsu. She was my first. I loved her ever since I met her as a kid. She always knew I was in trouble and tried to get me out of everything. But she couldn't always help Me." he said with a hollow chuckle.
"Why" Tobi asked
"She was blind. And I hurt her"
XxXxXxFlashback no jutsuXxXxXx
Kisame walked around the town wearing nothing but rags. As an orphan, he was always looked down upon. But no one would adopt him because of his looks. He kicked a rock and heard someone fall and groan. He ran to see a black haired boy on the floor.
“Oh dammit, hey kid are you ok?" he yelled as he picked him up by the arm.
'Strange. Little wrists. Maybe he didn't eat yet... oh my god!'
The little boy was really a girl. Black hair framed a heart-shaped face. Full red lips with chubby cheeks that haven't shed its baby fat. A pert nose sat on high cheekbones. Dark eyelashes framed pale blue eyes. Her eyes shifted towardsvoice as she put cool slim fingers on his face. It was then he noticed.
‘what’s a blind girl doing out here?'
"Hey are you ok miss?" he asked again
"No" a quiet voice answered.
“Well can I take you home? Is there anything I can get you?" he asked starting to panic
“u-um no. ah- I mean um thank you very much..." she trailed off because she didn't know his name
“Ah Kisame. Hoshigaki Kisame."
She
“Tsumi
XXxXxXFlashback no jutsu: kaixXxXxXx
Kisame smiled at their first meeting. “She was the only one that I actually talked to. I went on to traveling the land of waves. Leaving her behind. Trying to become a shinobi. I left her to defend her. She had a dog that I could have sworn was a demon. Besides me, he attacked any other male that came towards her. Ah Kuroi was his name."
“So what of the girl?" Sasori asked his arm around Deidara's waist.
Kisame frowned. “Her family found her after I had been picking to be one of the seven swordsmen of the mist and took her away. It took me nearly 3 years to find her and when I did, I couldn't even believe what happened to her."
XxXxXxX Flashback no jutsuxXxXxXxX
"same-kun, I need to tell you something" a young woman of 19 called to her friend.
"Sui-Chan? Daijobu? Do you need anything?" Kisame at age 21 asked
The young woman looked into the direction of where her friend's voice was coming from. She got up and placed her hands onto his face. She felt each scale and Gils that made up his skin. She felt as his surprisingly warm face leaned into her questing hands. She choked back a sob as she passed his lips. She pulled her hands over her face and cried.
“Suikatsu? What? Are you okay?" as he gathered her into his arms.
"Oh god Same-kun. They disowned me! I can't even go back to them and get my things. They did it to me because I refused to marry some arsehole they wanted into the family. They almost tried to kill me!" she cried into his shirt. He felt each hot tear as they melted into his skin. He held her tightly, afraid if he let her go, she'd run.
“It’s okay." he whispered
"NO, it's not okay!" she yelled as she started to hit him. It didn't hurt because she never was cut out to be a kunoichi.
“Why?" he asked holding her hands
“Because" she whimpered
She looked up into his face and told him. “I am in love with you Hoshigaki Kisame." she stated as she pressed her lips into his.
XXxXxXxFlashback no jutsu: kaixXxXxXx
Akatsuki looked at him with various expressions. Most of all: sadness
"So, what happened next?" Konan asked, voiced hushed by the atmosphere
“I, well... we had gotten together. We had done it..." he was interrupted by Tobi
"Did what?" was the seemingly asked innocent question
"I’ll...uh tell ya when you're older." Kisame said, clearly being uncomfortable with that.
"Come on" Sasori said.
“Then I had to do the most hated thing I ever, ever regretted." Kisame said solemnly
“Well..."Pein asked
“I had to kill her."
XxXxXxFlashback no jutsuxXxXxXx
Kisame woke up to a darkened room and tied limbs. He tried to move but his restraints dug move into his wrists. He heard lock being opened and the door opened to bright lights. As Kisame squinted he could see a figure moving closer.
“You are hoshigaki, no?" a masked figure asked.
"Yes" he rasped
"We are hiring you to do an assassination job for us. Should you agree, you will be paid handsomely for it, should you refuse, well, it will be done anyway." you could hear the smirk in his voice.
Kisame could have sworn he heard that voice somewhere. Though he needed to get back to his woman, he nodded despite the nagging feeling in his head. And his blood ran cold at the next sentence.
“Good. You’re to kill...Tsumi
XxXxXxFlashback no jutsu: kaiXxXxX
"I couldn't kill her. She was my life, everything I could think of. She made me feel like I could take on every Kage and win with every smile she gave me. So I did what I could." he said looking wistfully out the window.
“what, what the hell did you do?!?" Hidan shouted.
“I created a blood clone of her, and staged her death. She never knew. I knocked her out and carried her somewhere near Tsuchi and gave nearly a large set amount of money. She should be still there. I just want to see her, if not hold her again." Kisame said.
Nearly the entire Akatsuki member's looked at Pein for his answer. And to them he gave.
“all Akatsuki, we leave at high noon." with that he walked away
P.L: okay, I know I’m supposed to be doing my other stories but this was on my brain for like ever. So I will start on 'A Little Love Won't Hurt You' or ALLWHY for short. Now that I think about it, check out my profile for some other updates and links to my OCs.
-Ja Ne
Enjoy
Kisame watched the full moon at the hideout. It was august 9th. 'Her day' he thought as he sighed. He didn't care that Itachi was looking at him weird. He didn't care that Deidara stopped trying to kill Tobi because of him being Tobi. He just wanted to remember her. His water-lily. She always gave him words of encouragement. If he needed a shoulder to lean on, she gave him hers. But he could not go back. Not after what he did to her. He sighed again but longer.
"Fuck it! Kisame what the hell has fuckin gotten into you?!?!" Hidan yelled.
“Hn" Kisame grunted
Now at this point in time, everyone's seriously weirded out so they decided to try different tactics to get him to respond normally.
“hey Kisame, your moms a fish"Sasori
“I ate your pet fish inside your room"- Deidara
“You fucking stink bastard of a fish whore" - Hidan
“Ummmmmm.... your mom?" -Tobi
"Sigh. Hmm? You say something, guys?" Kisame asked lifting an eyebrow.
Somehow, Tobi acquired a bright green spandex suit, bright orange legwarmers, a chunin jacket, bowl cut and super eyebrows.
"CURSE YOU AND YOUR HIP WAYS....." BAM
"If you even finish that..." Itachi let the threat hang
Kisame looked around and sighed. He wanted to see her.
“Leader. If I may..." he started
Leader lifted a hand for him to continue.
“I want to go back to mist. For someon-thing. Something yeah." Kisame corrected.
"Kisame speak" leader demanded
'Sigh I knew it' he thought
“I want to visit someone who I was close with." Kisame asked straightening out.
"No"
"But-"
"No"
"Leader I-"
"No. not for some two-bit whore that spre-"
"SHE'S NOT LIKE THAT!" Kisame yelled slamming his fist into the wall.
Everyone knew that Kisame wouldn't dare go that far to Pein. But for him to be that angry over a woman was unheard of.
“Kisame who are you talking about?" Deidara asked softly as she touched his shoulder. (I don't care. in this fic only Dei-Chan is female. Konan doesn't count.
“Suikatsu. She was my first. I loved her ever since I met her as a kid. She always knew I was in trouble and tried to get me out of everything. But she couldn't always help Me." he said with a hollow chuckle.
"Why" Tobi asked
"She was blind. And I hurt her"
XxXxXxFlashback no jutsuXxXxXx
Kisame walked around the town wearing nothing but rags. As an orphan, he was always looked down upon. But no one would adopt him because of his looks. He kicked a rock and heard someone fall and groan. He ran to see a black haired boy on the floor.
“Oh dammit, hey kid are you ok?" he yelled as he picked him up by the arm.
'Strange. Little wrists. Maybe he didn't eat yet... oh my god!'
The little boy was really a girl. Black hair framed a heart-shaped face. Full red lips with chubby cheeks that haven't shed its baby fat. A pert nose sat on high cheekbones. Dark eyelashes framed pale blue eyes. Her eyes shifted towardsvoice as she put cool slim fingers on his face. It was then he noticed.
‘what’s a blind girl doing out here?'
"Hey are you ok miss?" he asked again
"No" a quiet voice answered.
“Well can I take you home? Is there anything I can get you?" he asked starting to panic
“u-um no. ah- I mean um thank you very much..." she trailed off because she didn't know his name
“Ah Kisame. Hoshigaki Kisame."
She
“Tsumi
XXxXxXFlashback no jutsu: kaixXxXxXx
Kisame smiled at their first meeting. “She was the only one that I actually talked to. I went on to traveling the land of waves. Leaving her behind. Trying to become a shinobi. I left her to defend her. She had a dog that I could have sworn was a demon. Besides me, he attacked any other male that came towards her. Ah Kuroi was his name."
“So what of the girl?" Sasori asked his arm around Deidara's waist.
Kisame frowned. “Her family found her after I had been picking to be one of the seven swordsmen of the mist and took her away. It took me nearly 3 years to find her and when I did, I couldn't even believe what happened to her."
XxXxXxX Flashback no jutsuxXxXxXxX
"same-kun, I need to tell you something" a young woman of 19 called to her friend.
"Sui-Chan? Daijobu? Do you need anything?" Kisame at age 21 asked
The young woman looked into the direction of where her friend's voice was coming from. She got up and placed her hands onto his face. She felt each scale and Gils that made up his skin. She felt as his surprisingly warm face leaned into her questing hands. She choked back a sob as she passed his lips. She pulled her hands over her face and cried.
“Suikatsu? What? Are you okay?" as he gathered her into his arms.
"Oh god Same-kun. They disowned me! I can't even go back to them and get my things. They did it to me because I refused to marry some arsehole they wanted into the family. They almost tried to kill me!" she cried into his shirt. He felt each hot tear as they melted into his skin. He held her tightly, afraid if he let her go, she'd run.
“It’s okay." he whispered
"NO, it's not okay!" she yelled as she started to hit him. It didn't hurt because she never was cut out to be a kunoichi.
“Why?" he asked holding her hands
“Because" she whimpered
She looked up into his face and told him. “I am in love with you Hoshigaki Kisame." she stated as she pressed her lips into his.
XXxXxXxFlashback no jutsu: kaixXxXxXx
Akatsuki looked at him with various expressions. Most of all: sadness
"So, what happened next?" Konan asked, voiced hushed by the atmosphere
“I, well... we had gotten together. We had done it..." he was interrupted by Tobi
"Did what?" was the seemingly asked innocent question
"I’ll...uh tell ya when you're older." Kisame said, clearly being uncomfortable with that.
"Come on" Sasori said.
“Then I had to do the most hated thing I ever, ever regretted." Kisame said solemnly
“Well..."Pein asked
“I had to kill her."
XxXxXxFlashback no jutsuxXxXxXx
Kisame woke up to a darkened room and tied limbs. He tried to move but his restraints dug move into his wrists. He heard lock being opened and the door opened to bright lights. As Kisame squinted he could see a figure moving closer.
“You are hoshigaki, no?" a masked figure asked.
"Yes" he rasped
"We are hiring you to do an assassination job for us. Should you agree, you will be paid handsomely for it, should you refuse, well, it will be done anyway." you could hear the smirk in his voice.
Kisame could have sworn he heard that voice somewhere. Though he needed to get back to his woman, he nodded despite the nagging feeling in his head. And his blood ran cold at the next sentence.
“Good. You’re to kill...Tsumi
XxXxXxFlashback no jutsu: kaiXxXxX
"I couldn't kill her. She was my life, everything I could think of. She made me feel like I could take on every Kage and win with every smile she gave me. So I did what I could." he said looking wistfully out the window.
“what, what the hell did you do?!?" Hidan shouted.
“I created a blood clone of her, and staged her death. She never knew. I knocked her out and carried her somewhere near Tsuchi and gave nearly a large set amount of money. She should be still there. I just want to see her, if not hold her again." Kisame said.
Nearly the entire Akatsuki member's looked at Pein for his answer. And to them he gave.
“all Akatsuki, we leave at high noon." with that he walked away
P.L: okay, I know I’m supposed to be doing my other stories but this was on my brain for like ever. So I will start on 'A Little Love Won't Hurt You' or ALLWHY for short. Now that I think about it, check out my profile for some other updates and links to my OCs.
-Ja Ne