Naruto Fan Fiction ❯ Blind Spot ❯ chapter 3 ( Chapter 3 )

P.L: I’m here with a new chapter for my story Blind spot.

Kisame: doesn’t that get old?

P.L: what?

Kisame: that announcing gig. I mean it’s like you say the same things over and over “new chapter for story!” it’s annoying

P.L: then you think you could do better?

Kisame: hells yeah!

P.L: you’re hired!

Kisame and Naruto cast: WHAT?!?!?

P.L: Since that bastard thinks he can do my job, I’m taking a vacation. That means all of you will have to listen to the big blue giant.

Kisame gains a predatory grin on his face

P.L: whoa slow ya roll. You have the responsibility of putting people in the story, figuring out the next scene, stop the scene from clashing with others, listen to threats and demands, additional comments, pop-up character’s, pop-up words, limiters, language barriers…

(Everyone watches as Kisame’s jaw drop from the sheer amount of work)

P.L continuing: stop characters from killing each other, keep Tobi in line, keep people in character, boundaries: if you forget those your screwed, and

Kisame: wait! I’m sorry take it back! I don’t want your job! (Runs in a corner and cries)

Suikatsu: did you have to do that to him?

P.L: it was necessary.

Naruto: why?

P.L: he was going to put me out of a job. C’mon!

Jaraiya: poetic love doesn’t own Naruto. But you know, for a small fee, I can be owned by you.

P.L: Jaraiya, if I own you, well,

Matsu: don’t do it man! She’s like totally crazy. Run man run!

P.L: back into the cage! (Hits him with tazer gun.) Here’s some A&D ointment.

Inari: you were saying?

Jaraiya: never mind

((((((((((((((((((((((((Previously))))))))))))))))))))))))))) )

“Just you and me huh Kuroi?” she asked smiling. But it faded when she seen the snoring dog roll over.

“Humph. Loyal indeed.” She snorted. She looked out the window to see a falling star.

‘I miss you Same. I miss you so much.’ Suikatsu thought as she settled in between her children dreaming of her love’s strong arms and scaly but smooth lips.

((((((((((((((((((((((((((((Now))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) ))

The sun was high in the sky, birds were chirping and Kisame’s eye was twitching. Why it was twitching, well…

“I can’t find my scythe! Who the fuck has it!” Hidan yelled.

“Where is my paper?” Konan cried

“I can’t find my clay!” Deidara whined.

“Pocky. Missing.” Itachi said slowly, like it was a foreign word.

“How the hell did 2 million yen disappear?!?!?!” Kakuzu growled

“Now where did I put my puppet?” Sasori whispered to himself.

“Tobi can’t find his Kunai!” Tobi cries to Zetsu.

“…” everyone watches Zetsu to see if he misplaced anything. He stayed silent and blinked at the rest of his group.

“I guess he ain’t missing anything.” Kisame commenting.

“We are pretty close to the border of Taki. Maybe someone robbed us.” Pein said with his eyes closed.

Everyone stopped talking and stayed quiet for a minute. Everyone started laughing at the same time.

“Yeah…right…someone steal…from us!” Deidara laughed.

“Hey Kisame.” Tobi called.

“Yeah?”

“Where’s Samehada?” everyone watched as Kisame’s smile fell.

((((((((((Miles away))))))
“Best game of robbers ever!” Tsuki yelled, pumping her fist in the air

“Hey Tsuki, do you think we should have stolen from them? I mean they are shinobi right? And why the hell am I holding the scythe and sword?” a little boy complained


“Hey grow some back bone Yuki! You want to switch with Kuroi? He’s holding a puppet!” Tsuki yelled at her brother, holding a huge sack with everything else they had stolen from the weird group in the forest. Yuki had wondered where his sister had gotten a sack from.

“We got to hurry up. Momma might wonder where we are if we’re not in time for our chakra control and Taijutsu lesson.” Yuki said pushing on at the thought of his mother.

Flashback no jutsu;

Suikatsu smiled as her children were downstairs already ready for the day.

“Good morning! How was your dreams last night?” she asked her twin troublemakers.

“Mama! Can we go outside? We want to play robbers!” Tsuki asked

Suikatsu smiled. “Dear, don’t you mean ninja?”

“Yeah that!” Yuki said

“Sure. Take Kuroi with you and make sure you’re home before it is 4. I want to work on the usual. Maybe Kuroi is willing to go over ninjutsu while you are out. But I want you home for chakra control and Taijutsu. You are not allowed for genjutsu until your control is better you two. Kuroi, go with them to keep them out of trouble.” Suikatsu told her dog.

“I will, mistress.” Kuroi told her, lifting his head.

“Now you go in the living room to eat.” She told her children.

“Mistress…”

“Kuroi watch them please. I have a feeling we will see someone we miss dearly.” Yuki heard his mom say.

“And don’t forget to henge!” Suikatsu yelled.

Flashback no Jutsu: Kai.

While the children are fighting, Kuroi was holding the puppet on his back. ‘Maybe they forgot I can change sizes. I hope so.’ Kuroi thought walking besides his mistress children.

“Hey Kuroi, can you grow bigger and run us home please.” Tsuki asked with the full blown puppy eyes and pout.

‘Well there goes my theory.’ He thought to himself. He sighed as he grew to the size of a buffalo. “Hold on Tsuki, Yuki. I don’t need Suikatsu to kill me for losing you guys.” Kuroi said, bending down waiting for them to get up and started to fly full speed to their home.

((((((((((((((((((((((Back with Akatsuki))))))))))))))))))

“My sword! My sword! Where is it?!?!” Kisame yelled.

“Umm Kisame, calm down. We found some tracks earlier. We can follow those until we find them.

“Let’s go get our stuff back.” he said running in the direction where the tracks led.

Everyone was running after Kisame. He was steaming.

‘How could someone take my sword? It only could be passed down through my family. If anyone else touches it, it would eat all their chakra. Who could have taken it?’ he thought running.

“Kisame look up!” Pein yelled

Kisame looked up to see a huge black cloud with two children on it. He saw a sack and a scythe and his sword. He did a couple of seals and shouted, “suiton: seppodama no jutsu!” (P.L: I don’t know if it’s the correct spelling but c’mon, I haven’t been on this site for months, give me a break!)

The children watched as three water balls the size of cannon balls head straight for them. Yuki had seen where they were aimed at, and he pushed the sword, the scythe up to his sister.

“Yuki? What are you doing?!?!” Tsuki yelled.

“Saving you! Tell mom I love her and don’t worry, I’ll be back before supper!” Yuki told his baby sister.

“Yu-Chan!” Tsuki yelled as the balls hit Kuroi’s cloud. Kuroi roared in pain as the girl watched her brother’s arm get hit and him falling off the cloud. She watched in horror as he brother sacrificed himself so she could get away safely. Kuroi was sinking also to the ground as he was knocked out. Tsuki jumped to hold her brothers hand.

“Tsuki-nee, what are you doing?!” Yuki yelled at her.

“If you die, I’d die with ya.” She said to him as he blacked out from the pain. She grabbed onto his body and made one handed hand seals. She screamed out, “Fuuton: Kaze no jutsu!” She watched as air surrounded her, Yuki and Kuroi to bring them down on the ground safely. As they landed she sighed. She laid her brother on her lap as a shadow loomed over her. She growled up at Kisame and told him, “leave my brother alone!” before she fainted from exhaustion.

Kisame watched the little girl growl up at him. He smiled at his sword before looking at the little thieves. He didn’t see the dog until it was too late. The dog bit into his hand as he reached the boy.

“YEOUCH!” Kisame yelled, pulling his hand back. The dog got up shakily before growling, “get away from them!”

Kisame looked at the dog in shock. He seen the collar and walked slowly to the growling dog.

“K-k-Kuroi?” Kisame whispered.

The dog looked at the man and sniffed. Kuroi’s eyes widened as he limped closer to the man. He sniffed his hand and whimpered.

“Master?” Kuroi whimpered as he fell to the ground, all his energy gone. Kisame eyes are huge with shock.

‘If this is Kuroi, then who are they? Did she marry someone else?’ he asked himself he made water clones to pick up the groups things and ran back.

(Remember people, they have an unbreakable henge on, so they look like Suikatsu only, but with Kisame’s sharp teeth.)

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Suikatsu was washing her clothes when a dish fell off of her counter. She ran over to look at it. It didn’t break but crack into spider web lines throughout the glass. Her eyes widened as she whispered, “Tsuki. Yuki. Oh no!” she put the plate back and ran out her house yelling for her children. When she didn’t see them she fell to her knees and sobbed into her hands.

“Oh Kami no. I already lost one, don’t let me lose them please!” she cried

“”””””””R 21;”with Kisame and others”””””””””” ;”””””””

The group was looking into the sack to find all of their things. They found all of Tobi’s Kunai (it had his name on them) Kakuzu’s yen and his calculator, Deidara’s clay, Sasori’s puppet cleaning kit, Konan’s papers, and all 150 boxes of Itachi’s pocky. The rest they found near the kids.

“Does anybody else have anything missing?” Pein called out. As everyone shook their heads he sighed. “Alright, what are we going to do with our little pickpockets?”

“They are just children.” Tobi said.

“Children with the balls to sneak into an s-class missing Nin camp, which I might add, undetected?!?” Hidan yelled. Yuki stirred and opened his eyes. He blinked at he was looking to dark obsidian eyes. He started as he was picked up by the front of his shirt.

“Why?” the man spoke.

“Why what?” Yuki said shaking.

“WHY MY POCKY?!?!” the man yelled, red bleeding into his eyes.

“Zetsu!” Konan yelled. Zetsu flung a senbon with sleeping potion on it into Itachi’s neck, making the Uchiha fall to the ground sleep. Yuki fell on his arm and cried out from the pain. Kisame went over.

“Hey kid. You okay?” Kisame asked picking him up. Kisame heard him sniffling. He looked to see tears building up into the boys’ eyes.

“Hey kids don’t cry!” Kisame said shaking his head. He watched as the little boy started to cry out loud.

“Wahh!” Yuki cried holding his arm

“Umm it’s okay?” Tobi called to him making cry more.

“What’s wrong with him?!?!” Hidan yelled

“What wrong little one” Deidara asked, pulling the boy on her lap. She stroked his head as his tears fell into her cloak. When he started to calm down, she pulled him back to wipe his face with a wet rag.

“Now tell auntie Dei what’s the matter.”

“My arm hurts and my sister won’t wake up. My dog won’t get up either.” Yuki said sniffing.

“Why don’t you come with me and auntie Ko to go get Zetsu and look at your arm okay?” Deidara said picking the boy up. She felt him nod in her arms. She looked back to the bewildered men. She scoffed at them and walked away with the child to Konan and Zetsu. Kisame looked at Tobi and Hidan as they all shrugged it off as a mother’s intuition, and walked towards the girls.

“So what’s your name?” Zetsu asked. When he didn’t get an answer he looked to see the boy looking at him in awe. He shifted uncomfortably as he touched his plant-like shell.

“Cool!” the boy said making everyone’s eyebrows raise.

“At least we know this one is a boy, can’t tell with all that long hair, and bangs.” Kakuzu said, recounting his money.

“Now leave Zetsu alone before he decides to eat the hand you have out.” Konan said, making Yuki’s hand snap back to his body.

“Can you tell Auntie Dei your name?” Deidara asked lifting his head towards her.

“My name is Yuki. Tsumi Yuki.” He said making Kisame’s head snap towards him. Kisame ran over with frightening speed to question him.

“Kid, don’t lie to me. What is your mother’s name?” Kisame said looking into his eyes. The boy was scared, so what did he do? Survey says, Cry!

“WAHH!” And let there be waterworks. The Akatsuki sighed, back at square one. As they were talking and crying, Tsuki woke up with Kuroi. She seen her brother crying so she just assumed they hurt him.

“Hey what did you do to Yuki-oniichan?!” she cried by her brother’s side in an instant. Kuroi just yawned and padded over to Kisame as he nipped his hand.

“Why is master troubled?” Kuroi asked, making the twins eyes widen.

“Kuroi, what did I tell you about the master stuff? I haven’t been your master in 5 years.” Kisame said, patting the hellhounds head.

“Near 6 and master is master until mistress tells me otherwise. Also, mistress is crying for her young.” Kuroi said lying on his belly.

“Kuroi?” Yuki asked

“Is momma going to use it?” Tsuki finished shaking a little.

“She is on her way as we speak, behind you.” Kuroi said watching as the shadows rose behind the children.

“Oni hijutsu: shadow walk.” They feminine voice said as the shadow dispelled. The Akatsuki watched as the 5’6” woman pick up the two kids by the scruff of their shirts. The children gulped as they raised shaking smiles to the woman.

“Konnichiwa okaa-san.” They said.

“Don’t hello me! Do you two know how worried I have been?!?!”The woman raged, her blue eyes blazing.

“Yes momma.” They said, looking to the ground.

“Hey lady, take it easy on them.” Tobi said, not looking at the other member’s signs telling him not to. An enraged mother talking to two bad children, possible outcome for interrupting: BAD.

“Oh? Do you have something to say?” she said sickly sweet to the masked man. Tobi backed down.

“Now, for you two, there will be no more games. Extra Control exercises and Taijutsu only…”

“What! No fair momma!” Tsuki yelled.

“And for that, no stories for two weeks.” Suikatsu told them making the twins mouths drop.

“Am I clear?”

“Yes ma’am.”

“Good. Now has everything you might have possibly stolen given back?”

“Yes momma.”Tsuki said, not noticing her brother looking away.

“Yuki.” She said menacingly making him flinch.

“No momma.” He said, looking up to see her hand pointing to the group. He marched back up to Kisame making his eyebrow rise up.

‘What does he possibly have of mine?’ he thought. He looked down to see his locket in an outstretch hand.

“I’m sorry. It just looked like the one momma said she lost a long time ago and I thought you stole it so I took it back to give it to her. I wanted to see her smile again.” Yuki said his eyes downcast. Suikatsu looked at who he was talking and felt tears to her eyes.

‘Can it be?’ She thought walking slowly to the group.

Kisame bended down to the little boy’s level (even though he was still taller). He took the locket and put his hand on his head ruffling up the hair.

“s’okay.” He said, making the little boy smile. He was taken aback by the shark like teeth. He watched as he ran behind his mother’s leg, peeking out. He looked up into wet clear blue eyes.

“Kisame?” she whispered, trying to hold back her tears.

“Tadaima.” He said making her gasp. She ran over as he opened his arms. What he didn’t expect was to see a fist flying at him, punching him into the trees. Everyone, even Kuroi winced at the sickening crack that was heard. The twins sat near Kuroi watching this.

“Hey Kuroi?” Yuki asked.

“Hmm?”

“Who’s that man?” Yuki asked playing with the dogs’ fur.

“That would be my master, who is your father.” the dog said looking at the twins. Their loud ‘NANI?!?’ was heard throughout the clearing.

Kisame opened his eyes and held his cheek. ‘Damned woman still packs a punch’ he said walking back to his group and his woman. His head was down as she spoke to him.

“6 years, 2 months, 12 days and not a single word from you. I was knocked out and dropped off like a piece of luggage in Taki with all my bags, Kuroi, scrolls of jutsu, and money, and worst of all, ALONE AND FUCKING PREGNANT AND ALL YOU CAN SAY IS I’M MOTHERFUCKING BACK?!?!” She yelled at him making everyone wince.

“Ouch.”Zetsu said voicing everyone’s thoughts.

“Suikatsu…” Kisame said walking slowly to the mad woman.

“I HAD TO GO THROUGH 22 HOURS OF LABOR AND WHAT DO I GET?!?! A SON WITH NO FATHER TO TEACH HIM ABOUT BEING A BOY! A GIRL WITH NO FATHER TO HOLD HER! DO YOU FUCKING KNOW HOW PAINFUL IT IS TO TALK ABOUT A FATHER WHO THEY MIGHT NEVER SEE AT ALL?!?! AND ANOTHER DAMN THING!” She yelled at him running into his arms crying.

“Don’t you ever leave me again with an ‘I’m sorry’.” She sobbed into his chest as his arms held her tight. The girls thought it was romantic the way everything went. The men thought it was sad how he had gotten punched. They waited until she had calmed down before Kisame started to explain.

“First of all, I’m sorry. I didn’t want to hurt you and second of all, YOU CAN SEE?!?!” He yelped making her giggle.

“Of course I can see silly. How could I punch you?”She laughed making everyone else chuckle. She looked around and seen everyone else.

“Oh! Who are they?”

“Oh. I’m in the Akatsuki.” Kisame said making the twins eyes widen.

“No freaking way! I stole from the Deidara no Iwa!?!?” Tsuki yelled almost hyperventilating.

“Cool! I touched Zetsu! And Deidara and Konan are my aunts!”Yuki said to his sister.

“They’re my aunts to if they are yours!”She retorted, sticking her tongue out at him. The adults watched with eyebrows raised.

“They’re huge fans of yours. We’ve only been in Taki moving around so, of course they’d hear about you. It’s most defiantly cute how they idolize missing Nin. Oh, why don’t you come to my home? I think you might need something to eat. to at least freshen up, And a warm bed for you to sleep in. our home is big enough for you all.” Suikatsu said

Everyone nodded. The twins walked up to Kisame. He bended down to them and asked, “What’s up?”

“So you’re our father?” Tsuki asked

“Yep.”Kisame said smiling. The twins smiled and hugged him tight.

“Daddy!” they yelled as he hugged them back. He picked them up in his arms and walked over to Kuroi and his fiancée. They smiled at each other. He put his children on Kuroi’s back walked over to leader.

“Yes Kisame?” Pein asked

“Hey leader, could you?” Kisame said leaving that part out.

“I will do it. It’s been a while though.” Pein said smiling at the taller man.

“Thanks.”

“Hey momma?” Yuki asked

“Yes?”

“Can we take off our henge?”

“Not yet. Let’s surprise your father.” She said winking.

Konan and Deidara walked up to Suikatsu. They started talking and found out they have a lot in common. They girls and children were in the front and the men in the back.

“Hey momma?” Tsuki said.

“Yes baby?”

“Can I get my hair like Deidara-ba-sama?” Tsuki asked making Deidara turn to her.

“It’s Auntie Dei!” she said to the two trouble makers.

“And I’m Auntie Ko!” Konan said making all three woman giggle.

“That’s not answering my question!” Tsuki whined.

“Sure baby. I don’t mind.”Suikatsu said.

“Can I get mouths on my hands too?”

“Wait till you’re older.” They said as they walked to Suikatsu’s home.


[End]

P.L: ah yes they finally meet!

Sui: I’m so glad to meet Same so fast.

Kisame: I’m glad to get meeting my kids out the way.

Tobi: I’m glad Zetsu is getting a girlfriend!

P.L: yes he’s getting a girlfriend and it will be a humanized Inari posing as Suikatsu’s older sister!

Inari: why am I always being changed to something I’m not?

Zetsu: (blushes) umm…

P.L: please don’t mind him. And I’m sorry if some of the characters seem OOC but hey, they call it FICTION for a reason.

Tsuki and Yuki: review!