Naruto Fan Fiction ❯ Final Straw ❯ Maelstrom ( Chapter 2 )

[ X - Adult: No readers under 18. Contains Graphic Adult Themes/Extreme violence. ]

Kuroi-Yasha: Hello one and all! Sorry this took so long and that it's so short, however I'm having a very hard time in my life right now, things aren't going well for me and I'm finding it hard to keep going, but I'll make it thru...hopefully. Anyhow, the next chapter will be longer I promise this is more of a filler, but it's needed so bear with it please. I'm saddened to say that I only got two reviews on FF.net, but 4 on MediaMiner, and an AWSOME 6 on AdultFF.net so that makes up for it.. Anyways, here we go with Chapter 2, responses to reviews will be at the end of the chapter. YONDER!!!
ATTENTION!!!! READ BEFORE CONTINUING!!!There will be a major time skip in the beginning of the chapter, however as is my writing style, I will always go back and explain everything at a later time. Also Hinata will not be the kind, shy girl...not by a long shot. However I am making this a Naru/Hinata story, it'll just take a while so bear with it if you want to or else stop reading now. For those familiar with my writing style, you'll notice that things are very different in this chapter. No, this is not the wrong chapter, nor did I forget to place certain things. Just bear with it if you're interested, if not stop reading now.
LEMON-LIME ALERT!!!! THIS CHAPTER CONTAINS THIGS OF A VERY SEXUAL NATURE!!! DO NOT READ IF YOU ARE UNDER 17!! ITS RATED M FOR A REASON!!!
Disclaimer: I do not, in any way shape or form, own Naruto. I do however own a Hinata figure that is about 2 inches tall that I purchased for 8 dollars....pretty sad eh? Nor do I own “No More Lies” By Iron Maiden. But I wish I did.
He could feel it.
Her desire.
Her lust.
Her need.
“N-Naruto-kun...”
He shuddered slightly at her plea, his name...always before said with contempt or disgust. Now dripping with passion. He craved more...he needed more.
Bending low he captured her soft lips in a slow kiss. She squirmed, he knew she hated yet loved it when he took his time with her. She made his life hell, she loathed him with an unmatched passion, yet she wanted only his touch. It was a very peculiar situation. To hate someone, yet love them at the same time. Regardless, who was he to resist her, a measly hanyou such as himself. No, he would please her, then she could hate him. For now all that mattered was the need, the want.
Releasing her lips he latched onto her neck as he ripped her snug shirt off her body. She gasped at his roughness and disregard, she was sooo turned on at that moment. Roughly he gripped her breast with his right hand, his claw just barely touching her nipple, she loved being at his mercy. With both of her small wrists in his one hand he continued licking and bitting her sensitive areas, he growled deep in his throat, her arousal was thick in the air, and it wasn't making it any easier for him.
“O-Onegai...N-Naruto-kun...”
Having had enough, he released her hands as he removed the last of her garments with as much unnecessary roughness as possible. She loved when he was excessive. He didn't give her a chance to say anything as he roughly shoved himself inside of her tight opening. Her moan of pleasure was music to his ears, he didn't need any of the foreplay, but it was nice and hell, he got his pleasure, why shouldn't she?
His pace left no doubt that he was not a gentle lover. He could be, she knew all to well that he could do things to her that she couldn't even imagine, but right now she didn't care. All she needed was pleasure, and with rough sex always delivered. She wasn't disappointed. He groaned at her her tightness as he lifted her off the mattress and pressed her against the wall, her moans could only grow louder as the slight pain from being slammed against the wall magnified the pleasure she felt.
“K-kami...AH!! N-Na-NARUTO!! ONEGAI!! MOTTO!!”
He could feel the sweat dripping of his brow as he pushed himself to go faster, if his princess wanted him to go faster, he'd go faster. His claws were digging into her hips as he struggled to keep his grip on her, the sweat on her lithe body making it hard to keep the pace. Snarling he thew her onto the bed as he flipped her onto her back and re-entered her from behind. Her moans were making it hard for him to keep from releasing his seed into her, but damned if he would cum before her. He increased the roughness of his thrust as he licked the blood off of his claws, the sweet taste made him want more as he leaned down and sunk his fangs into her neck. The coppery liquid filled his mouth and she could only moan with her at the taste. Of coarse she was moaning because his fangs released a euphoric liquid into her body that intensified her pleasure and dulled her pain. Being a hanyou had its up sides.
Suddenly she stopped as she gripped the bedsheets as her knuckles turned white from the intensity of the orgasm that rocked her small body. She threw her head back as her raven hair flew back and spread like a curtain, her pupil-less eyes awash with pleasure, her small cute lips in took the shape of an O as she let out a silent scream of pleasure. Her walls, already unbearable reached a new level of tightness, releasing his grip on her neck he threw his head back and let out a low growl/moan as his member was milked by her muscles, his thick seed coating her walls.
He let go a shuddering gasp as he fell against the bed. His eyes closing from the aftermath of his orgasm as he took long shuddering breaths. Opening his eyes as a soft pressure landed on his body, cerulean met lavender as his lips formed into a genuine smile. “I love you hime.” She gave him a heart filled smile as her hand went into his blond locks, “I love you too Naru-kun...”
A gasp left his lips as pain erupted in his chest, looking down he saw the black glint of the kunai in his heart. His eyes never left her lavender orbs as she leaned down and planted a soft kiss on his lips. “And that's why you have to die...Sayonara koi...” He could only stare as the second kunai came at his throat. The loving smile never leaving her lips.

Naruto opened his eyes as the first traces of sunlight entered his decrepit apartment. Again he'd had the same dream, or was it a fantasy? 'That's one fucked up fantasy...it fits me just fine.' Rubbing the fatigue from his eyes he rose slowly from his shoddy mattress. The dream was not a new one, hell he hadn't had a regular dream since he could remember.
Sighing the young blond made his way to the window as the morning fog passed by his view of the ocean. One could say many things about Wave country, but it was beautiful...in a morbid sort of way. After Gato had taken control of the small country and forced it into an economic stranglehold, things had gone straight down the shitter. Still though, Naruto found that despite the poorness of his home he enjoyed the people, they valued human life more than petty possessions and were always willing to help anyone who was in need, giving from the few they had.
'Its almost time kit...'
The Uzumaki sighed as he turned his back the view, and instead proceeded to gather his few scant belongings. 'So it's time to go back to Konoha huh?' He couldn't suppress the evil smirk that formed on his lips, while it was true that he couldn't get his revenge on the village that had forsaken him just yet, he could count this as a form of reconnaissance mission. His major contact and only friend thus far that wasn't his guardian had informed him that he'd been assigned a mission in which he had to protect a bridge builder from Wave, and was to meet up with him to return to Konoha as per the Sandaime Hokage's request. 'I'm surprised the old man's still alive.' The young boy thought as he smiled at the memory of the old man who had always been so kind to him, and had been the one to save him from his almost certain execution.
~-~-~-~Flash-~-~-~-~
“Uzumaki Naruto, do you know why you have been brought before this council?”
The child in question, no older than 9 shook his head as he stared in awe at the sheer number of people in the room, the fact that the majority of the people in the room were looking at him with glares of barely restrained loathing were not missed though.
“So you do not admit your guilt to viciously assaulting the Inuzuka, Uchiha, and Hyuuga heirs?”
This however instantly got the blond's attention, slowly anger began to cause the young child shake indignantly. “I did no such thing!” He spat at the elderly man who had spoken to him, “It was a spar set up by Mizuki-sensei in order to gage our talents. However for some reason I was the only one put up against three people an...”
“LIES!!!”
The roaring voice of outrage had come from one Fuugaku Uchiha who had shot out of his seat. “My youngest son Sasuke was viciously mauled by this demon! I demand retribution!!” The Uchiha head roared, much to the approval of several of the other members of the council. Most other clan heads remained silent however as they had already accepted the fact that even if they wished to help, they had already been overruled by the majority of the council.
Sarutobi sighed at the turn of events, unfortunately he couldn't help young Naruto this time, the council had made sure that his power was limited to shinobi and not to Academy students. 'I'm sorry Naruto, I have failed you again.'
Naruto who had been trying to defend himself was silenced as the head of the council called for silence.
“Very well then, it has been decided that the defendant is guilty of all charges by the majority of the council. As a result we will now pass judgment on this...child.” Motioning to his peers he directed their attention to a screen that rolled down the wall. “Now we shall take a vote for his punishment. If you wish to vote for exile, please make the Ram seal, if you wish to vote for imprisonment make the Inu seal, and if you wish to vote for execution,” This got a cry from Sarutobi and a ghost white face from the young boy in question, “Please form the Tora seal.”
Sarutobi had had enough, “You cannot seriously begin to even consider executing a helpless child?!” Sarutobi got no response and watched in horror as the council began to make their decision. After a few moments the numbers had begun to appear.
Exile: 17/100
Imprisonment: 18/100
Execution: 65/100
Sarutobi could feel his body begin to shake with grief, anguish and anger at the council's decision.
“And so it has been decided. Naruto Uzumaki.” The boy looked up, tear-filled azure meeting uncaring coal. “You are hereby found guilty of attempted murder of 3 clan heirs, and are hereby sentenced to death.” The tears now escaped Naruto's eyes unchecked as he collapsed to his knees. “Your execution shall be three days from now at dawn. You are to hang from the Gallows. This meeting is adjourned.”
Naruto didn't even resist when he was removed from the chamber an ANBU and taken to a special cell in the Uchiha district and had several inhibitor cuffs and chakara suppressors placed on him.
~~Back at the Council Room~~
“HOKAGE-SAMA!!! YOU CAN'T LET THEM DO THIS TO HIM!! HE'S JUST A CHILD!!”
The elderly Hokage had never felt so old in his life, all the strength seemed to have just vanished from his limbs. He shook his head as tears continued to fall from his eyes, “I'm sorry Yume-san, but my powers have been stripped. I-I...I'm afraid I'm powerless.” The young woman shook her head, “No, your just not thinking hard enough! There has to be...we can't...” She stopped as she collapsed and began to sob. She had not known the child for long, but she had quickly grown attached to the young jinchuuriki. His care free and loving nature, the innocence that shined in his bright azure eyes, his fox-like smile of content or simply mischievousness.
The old Hokage merely continued to shake his head, “No, I'm sorry but we...” Sarutobi paused in mid-sentence as his mind began to put things together. “No, I couldn't...but if I don't...will he even agree..?” Yume looked up as the Hokage began to grow serious and suddenly stood. “Yes, there is no other option.”
Turning the Hokage snapped his fingers twice and a familiar ANBU knelt before his lord. “I assume you heard my ramblings?” At the ANBU's nod, he turned to face him, his eyes cold. “Then I trust you know what I am planning on having you do?” The ANBU nodded yet again, “Very well, the execute Operation: Crimson Dawn and add the new objective.” Finally the ANBU nodded one last time before vanishing.
“Hokage-sama...?”
“Forgive me.”
Neither was certain exactly who he was apologizing to.
~-~-~-~Back-~-~-~-~-
Yes, his life had gone to shit in a lot of ways, but at the same time he couldn't help but think that if he'd stayed in Konohagakure he would no doubt be more miserable than he was right now.
'Its time kit. The battle has just begun. Are you ready?'
Naruto nodded as the placed the hi-ate on his forehead. On it was the engraving of a fox with 9 tails, with two fox-like metallic horn/ears at the top. His eyes went to a deadly tone of dull ice as he pulled a mask over his face, and donned his black cloak with the spiraling swirl in the dead center of his back and blue streams of stitching in his cloak, giving it the illusion of a flowing wind.
“Yes...I...no...we...will show them the true strength of a demon.” He grinned ferally as behind him the gray sky suddenly took on a darker overcast.
The Maelstrom had finally emerged.

Kuroi-Yasha: Well, what did you guys think. I know a lot of you will probably want to kill me right now, but I promise the next chapter will be up in less than a month. The rest of what was mentioned in this chapter will slowly be explained in each chapter, so just bear with me. That being said I would kindly appreciate receiving more than just 2 reviews, so please help me out and give me a reason to keep writing ne?
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