Naruto Fan Fiction ❯ Reborn ❯ The past, the tornado and Koi ( Chapter 9 )
[ P - Pre-Teen ]
By: demoncell 
Ummm Just jumping around a bit I guess. I know who naruto's parents are. Can anyone tell me what's with the whole Itachi being blind thing is he or isn't he?
Anime/Manga: Naruto Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Drama / Action | Type: Alternate Universe | Uploaded On: 09.18.2007 | Pages: 2 | Words: 1.8K | Visits: 297 | Status: Work In Progress
Ummm Just jumping around a bit I guess. I know who naruto's parents are. Can anyone tell me what's with the whole Itachi being blind thing is he or isn't he?
Anime/Manga: Naruto Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Drama / Action | Type: Alternate Universe | Uploaded On: 09.18.2007 | Pages: 2 | Words: 1.8K | Visits: 297 | Status: Work In Progress
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto
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REBORN
CHAPTER 9
The Past, The Tornado and Koi
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"Please I'm begging you stop that tornado" pleaded Sasuke
"Why should I" came Red Shadow's voice. The tornado is three feet away
"Because I have a one year-old nephew to take care of"
"Why should I care". Two feet away
"Because he's all I have left of my brother, and the only hope for the survval of the Uchiha clan"
"What about you" One foot away and Sasuke is bruised and beaten from the rocks.
"Who would want a cold hearted monster"
"Don't sell yourself short". With those words the tornado stoped three inches from Sasuke.
Sasuke fell to the ground unconsious and beaten.
"what did you do to Sasuke" screamed Sakura.
" I stopped the attack before it hit him, I don't want him dead he still has to find his way"
"You're a monster" screamed Ino.
"I was born a monster" said Red Shadow in a quiet voice so that only Kakashi and Grey Light heard it.
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At some house near some forest
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"Well this is it" said Jiraiya.
He and Asuma were standing outside of a cabin. There were training dummies in the side yard and a bottle on the porch.
"Where did I put his bottle" came a Kurenai's voice.
"I think it's out here" said Jiraiya.
"Huh, Jiraiya what are you doing here" came Kurenai's voice.
Kurenai walked out and gapped for about three seconds. In the blink of an eye she was at Asuma's throat with a kunai.
"Who are you and why are you impersonating Asuma" spat Kurenai.
"Easy Kurenai, believe it or not this is Asuma" said Jiraiya kindly (kindly not perveted kind either).
"B..but how" asked a now crying Kurenai.
"I was given a second chance at life" said Asuma with tears in his eyes, "so I hear i have a son".
With that Kurenai backed off his throat.
"His name is Koi Sarutobi"
"So you gave him my name"
"Of course why don't you come in and see him"
"Gladly"
"well I'll just leave you two alone then" said Jiraiya as he disappreared in a cloud of smoke.
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With Tsunade and Naomi
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"So Naomi, Jiraiya said you had three kids" said Tsunade
"Tou-san lied then, I had four kids Kaa-san". said Naomi looking at the sky
"Four"?
"Though Kakashi was adopted he was my fourth child".
"I see" said tsunade, "Mind telling me what that family was like"
"well Arashi was hyperactive but serious when he needed to be and he has a stash of Ramen in the cabinet with a major lock on it".
"Hmmm" said Tsunade.
"The twins Diachi and Taya loved to cause trouble" , "They used to beat the Third with sticks when they were old enough to run and had tempers yet they were sweet".
"They sound like me".
"You don't know the half of it".
"Kakashi was very quiet in public, but at home he seemed more at ease", "He and Arashi were always sparring and believe it or not played tag".
"Kakashi playing tag, Nooo" said a non-believing Tsunade.
"Yes and sometimes we all would play tag", "It usually ended up with Kakashi getting beat with sticks by the twins".
"What's with the twins and sticks" asked Tsunade laughing.
"I don't know but it was very funny" said Naomi laughing. She suddenly stopped laughing though and her smile faded.
"What's wrong" asked Jiraiya who had just appeared in a cloud of smoke.
"Nothing, I was just thinking how I never got to know Naruto".
"He was hyper-active" said Jiraiya.
"And Cocky" said Tsunade.
"But he always knew how to cheer people up when they were sad or afraid" said Jiraiya.
"And he always kept his promises, even to strangers" said tsunade thinking back to the time when she and naruto were at the hot springs and when they met in Tanzaku town.
"He sounds a lot like Arashi" said Naomi.
"Sounds, acted, goofed-off, trained and ate just like Arashi" said Jiraiya with a sad smile on his face.
"Greeeaat another Arashi just what I needed" said Naomi in a sarcastic tone.
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Back with the fights
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"Alright then let's move on to the next match" said Anko.
"Sakura and Lee" said Kakashi.
"Ahhh man I have to fight my own girlfriend" pouted Lee.
"Girlfriend, when did you two start dating" asked Neji.
"About two weeks ago" said Sakura.
"Ok Sakura go easy on me" said Lee.
"Awww where's the fun in that" whined Sakura.
"I guess you're right lets do this then" said Lee ready to go.
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Back with Naomi, Tsunade and Jiraiya
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"Since I was not there I never got to see..." Jiraiya trailed off.
"What Naruto looked like before the fox" asked Naomi.
"Yes" said Jiraiya sadly.
"Here" said Naomi taking out a photograph, "Arashi took it just before he left with Naruto.
In the Photo was Naruto with one patch of white bangs and no whisker marks. His eyes were a silvery blue instead of a dark sky blue. He was smiling in his mothers arms.
"I think he was cuter then" said Jiraiya.
"I like his eyes" said Tsunade.
"What did he look like afterwards" asked Naomi.
"His eyes were a dark blue and the patch of white was gone and he had whisker marks" said tsunade.
"Sounds cute" said Naomi.
"Here's his genin team photo" said Jiraiya.
"So Kakshi was his sensei" asked Naomi.
"yep" said Tsunade.
"I wish we would have been able to let Kakashi know that Naruto was his brother" said Naomi.
"Maybe he wouldn't have been so sad then" said Tsunade.
"Well when I go into town he's sure to recognize me" said Naomi.
"I can't wait to see his face" said Jiraiya and Tsunade in unison.
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With the Sarutobis
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Asuma walked into the house. The first room he saw was the living room. It had a small couch a couple entables a stack of books a tv and VCR and a comfy chair. The next room was the kitchen, it had the usual things and the counters were coverd in baby toys and bottles. They passed a bathroom and two other bedrooms and they came to the end of the hallway. This door had ducks on it.
"How did you decide on ducks" asked Asuma.
"I threw a dart at all the possibilities" said Kurenai smiling.
They walked into the room, there was duck wallpaper and well basically everything had ducks on it. The mobile was playing BaBa Black Sheep ( ironic). In the crib was slepping baby. He had brown hair with black highlights (natrual of corse). He was small but so cute. The baby sensing someone else in the room other than his mother opened an eye. His eyes were a redish brown and had a curious look in his eyes.
"Would you like to hold him" asked Kurenai.
"You mean I can" asked asuma bothe nervouse and excited at the same time.
"Of corse" said Kurenai laughing as she picked Koi up.
"Awww, he's so cute and tiny" said Asuma begining to cry.
Koi took to his father immediately. He began to gurgle and laugh and coo what seemed like all at once.
"Intersting considering he doesn't like people". said Kurenai pleased.
"Why don't you take a nap, you look tired" said Asuma.
"are you sure you'll be able to handle him" asked Kurenai.
"Well I did help raise Konohamaru Didn't I" said Asuma.
"Good point" said Kurenai and she left to take a nap in her room.
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Fights
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"All right it's the last fight" said Anko.
"Winners of the previous fights are as followed:
Red Shadow v.s. Sasuke< Red Shadow
Sakura v.s. Lee< Sakura
Ten-ten v.s. Shino< Shino
Kiba v.s. Ino< Ino
Shikamaru v.s. Choji< Shikamaru.
"Why are you restating all of that" asked Kakashi.
"Because Shikamaru slept through most of it" said Anko.
"Aright alright next up Grey Light versus Neji" said Kakashi.
"Well looks like I might lose this one" said Neji.
"It was decided the moment I was chosen as your oponent" said Grey Light.
Neji had a sudden flashback of his first chunin exams so naturally he..
"I vow to win" said Neji as he stuck his fist straight out to Grey Light.
"Funny I thought you had called him a loser" said Grey Light smugly.
"No I called him a faliure" said Neji smiling (creepy I mean come on Neji smiling as if).
"well then let the fight begin" said Anko
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So what did you guys think. I think I might be getting a little better at this (most likely not). I feel like something is still missing from the plot. I could just be imagining things. Well until then Demoncell out.
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REBORN
CHAPTER 9
The Past, The Tornado and Koi
*********************************
"Please I'm begging you stop that tornado" pleaded Sasuke
"Why should I" came Red Shadow's voice. The tornado is three feet away
"Because I have a one year-old nephew to take care of"
"Why should I care". Two feet away
"Because he's all I have left of my brother, and the only hope for the survval of the Uchiha clan"
"What about you" One foot away and Sasuke is bruised and beaten from the rocks.
"Who would want a cold hearted monster"
"Don't sell yourself short". With those words the tornado stoped three inches from Sasuke.
Sasuke fell to the ground unconsious and beaten.
"what did you do to Sasuke" screamed Sakura.
" I stopped the attack before it hit him, I don't want him dead he still has to find his way"
"You're a monster" screamed Ino.
"I was born a monster" said Red Shadow in a quiet voice so that only Kakashi and Grey Light heard it.
******************************
At some house near some forest
******************************
"Well this is it" said Jiraiya.
He and Asuma were standing outside of a cabin. There were training dummies in the side yard and a bottle on the porch.
"Where did I put his bottle" came a Kurenai's voice.
"I think it's out here" said Jiraiya.
"Huh, Jiraiya what are you doing here" came Kurenai's voice.
Kurenai walked out and gapped for about three seconds. In the blink of an eye she was at Asuma's throat with a kunai.
"Who are you and why are you impersonating Asuma" spat Kurenai.
"Easy Kurenai, believe it or not this is Asuma" said Jiraiya kindly (kindly not perveted kind either).
"B..but how" asked a now crying Kurenai.
"I was given a second chance at life" said Asuma with tears in his eyes, "so I hear i have a son".
With that Kurenai backed off his throat.
"His name is Koi Sarutobi"
"So you gave him my name"
"Of course why don't you come in and see him"
"Gladly"
"well I'll just leave you two alone then" said Jiraiya as he disappreared in a cloud of smoke.
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With Tsunade and Naomi
*****************************
"So Naomi, Jiraiya said you had three kids" said Tsunade
"Tou-san lied then, I had four kids Kaa-san". said Naomi looking at the sky
"Four"?
"Though Kakashi was adopted he was my fourth child".
"I see" said tsunade, "Mind telling me what that family was like"
"well Arashi was hyperactive but serious when he needed to be and he has a stash of Ramen in the cabinet with a major lock on it".
"Hmmm" said Tsunade.
"The twins Diachi and Taya loved to cause trouble" , "They used to beat the Third with sticks when they were old enough to run and had tempers yet they were sweet".
"They sound like me".
"You don't know the half of it".
"Kakashi was very quiet in public, but at home he seemed more at ease", "He and Arashi were always sparring and believe it or not played tag".
"Kakashi playing tag, Nooo" said a non-believing Tsunade.
"Yes and sometimes we all would play tag", "It usually ended up with Kakashi getting beat with sticks by the twins".
"What's with the twins and sticks" asked Tsunade laughing.
"I don't know but it was very funny" said Naomi laughing. She suddenly stopped laughing though and her smile faded.
"What's wrong" asked Jiraiya who had just appeared in a cloud of smoke.
"Nothing, I was just thinking how I never got to know Naruto".
"He was hyper-active" said Jiraiya.
"And Cocky" said Tsunade.
"But he always knew how to cheer people up when they were sad or afraid" said Jiraiya.
"And he always kept his promises, even to strangers" said tsunade thinking back to the time when she and naruto were at the hot springs and when they met in Tanzaku town.
"He sounds a lot like Arashi" said Naomi.
"Sounds, acted, goofed-off, trained and ate just like Arashi" said Jiraiya with a sad smile on his face.
"Greeeaat another Arashi just what I needed" said Naomi in a sarcastic tone.
*********************************
Back with the fights
*********************************
"Alright then let's move on to the next match" said Anko.
"Sakura and Lee" said Kakashi.
"Ahhh man I have to fight my own girlfriend" pouted Lee.
"Girlfriend, when did you two start dating" asked Neji.
"About two weeks ago" said Sakura.
"Ok Sakura go easy on me" said Lee.
"Awww where's the fun in that" whined Sakura.
"I guess you're right lets do this then" said Lee ready to go.
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Back with Naomi, Tsunade and Jiraiya
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"Since I was not there I never got to see..." Jiraiya trailed off.
"What Naruto looked like before the fox" asked Naomi.
"Yes" said Jiraiya sadly.
"Here" said Naomi taking out a photograph, "Arashi took it just before he left with Naruto.
In the Photo was Naruto with one patch of white bangs and no whisker marks. His eyes were a silvery blue instead of a dark sky blue. He was smiling in his mothers arms.
"I think he was cuter then" said Jiraiya.
"I like his eyes" said Tsunade.
"What did he look like afterwards" asked Naomi.
"His eyes were a dark blue and the patch of white was gone and he had whisker marks" said tsunade.
"Sounds cute" said Naomi.
"Here's his genin team photo" said Jiraiya.
"So Kakshi was his sensei" asked Naomi.
"yep" said Tsunade.
"I wish we would have been able to let Kakashi know that Naruto was his brother" said Naomi.
"Maybe he wouldn't have been so sad then" said Tsunade.
"Well when I go into town he's sure to recognize me" said Naomi.
"I can't wait to see his face" said Jiraiya and Tsunade in unison.
****************************
With the Sarutobis
****************************
Asuma walked into the house. The first room he saw was the living room. It had a small couch a couple entables a stack of books a tv and VCR and a comfy chair. The next room was the kitchen, it had the usual things and the counters were coverd in baby toys and bottles. They passed a bathroom and two other bedrooms and they came to the end of the hallway. This door had ducks on it.
"How did you decide on ducks" asked Asuma.
"I threw a dart at all the possibilities" said Kurenai smiling.
They walked into the room, there was duck wallpaper and well basically everything had ducks on it. The mobile was playing BaBa Black Sheep ( ironic). In the crib was slepping baby. He had brown hair with black highlights (natrual of corse). He was small but so cute. The baby sensing someone else in the room other than his mother opened an eye. His eyes were a redish brown and had a curious look in his eyes.
"Would you like to hold him" asked Kurenai.
"You mean I can" asked asuma bothe nervouse and excited at the same time.
"Of corse" said Kurenai laughing as she picked Koi up.
"Awww, he's so cute and tiny" said Asuma begining to cry.
Koi took to his father immediately. He began to gurgle and laugh and coo what seemed like all at once.
"Intersting considering he doesn't like people". said Kurenai pleased.
"Why don't you take a nap, you look tired" said Asuma.
"are you sure you'll be able to handle him" asked Kurenai.
"Well I did help raise Konohamaru Didn't I" said Asuma.
"Good point" said Kurenai and she left to take a nap in her room.
********************
Fights
********************
"All right it's the last fight" said Anko.
"Winners of the previous fights are as followed:
Red Shadow v.s. Sasuke< Red Shadow
Sakura v.s. Lee< Sakura
Ten-ten v.s. Shino< Shino
Kiba v.s. Ino< Ino
Shikamaru v.s. Choji< Shikamaru.
"Why are you restating all of that" asked Kakashi.
"Because Shikamaru slept through most of it" said Anko.
"Aright alright next up Grey Light versus Neji" said Kakashi.
"Well looks like I might lose this one" said Neji.
"It was decided the moment I was chosen as your oponent" said Grey Light.
Neji had a sudden flashback of his first chunin exams so naturally he..
"I vow to win" said Neji as he stuck his fist straight out to Grey Light.
"Funny I thought you had called him a loser" said Grey Light smugly.
"No I called him a faliure" said Neji smiling (creepy I mean come on Neji smiling as if).
"well then let the fight begin" said Anko
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So what did you guys think. I think I might be getting a little better at this (most likely not). I feel like something is still missing from the plot. I could just be imagining things. Well until then Demoncell out.