Naruto Fan Fiction ❯ The Seals! ❯ The Meeting Caused by Flames ( Chapter 3 )

[ Y - Young Adult: Not suitable for readers under 16 ]

Still need a beta
A/N: constructive criticism is helpful but just insulting my spelling doesn't really help me since I use several spell checks as it is and if you are gonna say that at least give me a couple examples of where I messed up. I mean really come on I said I don't have a beta already I just don't get why people do that I know spell checks can miss details now and then but really from what the review I just got said it would have to be an error every line and I know it isn't that bad or else people wouldn't like the idea because they wouldn't understand it.

Well sorry that you had to sit through that but I don't understand some people sometimes><.
but some of you have given review that I like so I am just gonna be updating as often as I can also if I ever for any reason don't update for one month feel free to yell at me to update because at that point I either have severe writers block or am yelling the same at myself. Also don't forget your opinions matter I feel like my readers should have a say (however small) in how the story folds out and any ideas on how things could turn out will be appreciated.

I didn't get any reviews to respond to (other than the one who sent me on my rambling rampage) pry because I just updated last night but hey that is a good thing two chapters in two days.><

I don't own Naruto or any of the Characters if I did things would be a lot different…..probably

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The man stood over the Hyuuga Heiress and his own son waiting for the others to return he had to make sure his plan was going to work. He knew that if one of the children wasn't able to be part of the ceremony he wouldn't have enough time to modify the seals again. Even though he knew he had to wait it was killing him he knew that every second more shinobi were killed in the Kyuubi's rampage. He couldn't help but sigh, “What happened to make you to this, if only I knew I might be able to save both of us and the children”

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recap with more detail: the world was suddenly on fire everything was burning and suddenly there was another shout and then there was even more fire as they were all sent flying easily crashing through the fire weakened walls..

Naruto POV(I will say this once for those who don't know POV stands for point of view):

The sound was everywhere the burning it was one of the loudest noises he had ever heard he couldn't feel his legs but everything he could feel felt like it was on fire even though he had checked and it wasn't. So is this it he thought I had hoped I would be older when I died and maybe in a really cool ninja fight. He laughed but as he did it turned into a choking cough that wracked his whole being over and over once it stopped he started sobbing he didn't want to die he wanted to spend more time with his friends and with the people he considered family. He didn't know why people always hated him and his family they hadn't done anything to deserve this he just hoped the others weren't as beat up as he was maybe they would be able to get out and then they would live more for him. Just as he thought this the ceiling groaned loudly and started to cave in the fire going with it creating a literal wall of fire as it went.

Kiba POV:

The smell was horrid the dust, the ash, the burning, and the blood. His head was pounding and everything he saw out his right eye was red he wasn't sure what had happened but he knew first of all he had to find Akamaru. He knew he couldn't be far he could still catch his scent even through the smoke and he had been in his arms when he had been sent flying he quickly spun around to see where his companion was. That turned out to be a bad idea he must have hit is head hard because halfway through the turn he lost his balance and fell back to the ground. Then lying on the ground he saw him Akamaru was lying on the ground not more than three meters away he could save him then something horrible happened there was a loud groan as the from the ceiling. He instantly knew what was going to happen from what his sister had told him about injuries caused to pets during fire one of the worst stories she had told him was about a fire in a house where the roof had caved in covering the animal in burning debris. He quickly got up as far as he could the room still spinning around him he began crawling towards Akamaru he could feel the glass and wood gouging into his hands as he moved but that didn't matter he had to get there. Only one meter left and then there was a crashing sound he knew the roof was coming down right above him from the sound of it in his desperation he shouted the name of his companion even though he knew it was no use the dog wasn't conscious, “Akamaru!”

Hinata POV:

The heat was like nothing she had ever felt it felt like she would imagine hell would feel like it burnt everything her eyes hurt every time she opened them, it felt like they were on fire. From what she could see when she did open them it appeared as though she was lying in a room that the fire had already moved through everything was black and ash was floating everywhere her back was so hot it hurt so much. She couldn't figure out what was wrong with her left arm she couldn't move it she thought something was on top of it but she couldn't tell with all the ash. Then something horrible happened she heard a horrible cracking noise and she knew that the fire was in a room above her and that the floor wasn't about to stop it from coming back to where she was. She knew she had to get out but she couldn't move her arm out from under it. She could see the light from the fire in the room above her she was starting to panic she started clawing at whatever it was on her arm she could tell that it was one of the heavy doors from the kitchen. Now she knew what it was she knew what to do she grabbed the edge and tipped it to the side hoping that the doorknob was still there and it started to tip the doorknob was causing it to tip when she lifted it right. She got her arm out but something was still wrong it hung uselessly at her side she took a step towards the window her way outside when there was a horrible crunching sound as the ceiling gave way.

Sasuke POV:
The Pain was like nothing he had ever experienced before in his young life. He was lying on a table that was pressed against one of the outer wall but for some reason he couldn't move away from the wall he had tried several times but every time he tried he felt a horrible pain in his side. He reached his hand to where the pain was and felt wood as he touched it he felt pain inside him. After the pain subsided somewhat he looked at his hand it was covered in blood even though he hadn't touched the part near him so his blood had either sprayed out on impact or he was bleeding a lot and was in a bit of trouble. That is when he looked around to see his surroundings and he saw it a window he could get out then he saw something else there appeared to be a battle between two groups of shinobi as he looked closer he saw one was Chouza, good that meant he was safe at least, next to him was Kurenai and on his other side was Itachi, in his ANBU gear Sasuke was one of the few who knew what his brother's mask was. He smiled as he remembered the times he had spent with his brother he was the only person in his whole family who didn't hate him for what was inside him; his brother was also telling him how the Uchiha clan was planning to take over the village and how he was spying on them for the Hokage. Then he shook his head now wasn't the time to be thinking about that he had to get out of this position somehow. He knew first he had to get the wood out of himself then he could go out the window it was covered with cracks so it would pry let him through it when he hit it. He grasped the wood tightly in his hand just as he was about to pull it out there was an ominous crack and a layer of dust fell from the ceiling. He looked up for a moment then looked back and pulled as he did he felt his hand become wet with his blood he gasped and rolled off the table the wood still protruding from him he had only managed to pull it free from the wall he lay there for a moment then pushed himself to his feet using the table to help just as he reached his feet there was a crashing sound as the ceiling gave way.

Chouza POV:
He had managed to grab his son as the second fireball hit throwing them out the back of the house. Once he got his bearings he set his son down who was unconscious but still alright he was about to head back in for the others when three ninja wearing masks walked around the house and stood there in front of him they were closely followed by a crowd.

The one who appeared to be the leader spoke, “You shouldn't have tried to harbor them: those demon children deserve to die. They are abominations!” at that last part the crowd roared in agreement. Then something strange happened the entire crowd fell asleep then he heard someone land beside him he didn't even have to look to know it was Kurenai he had heard much about the genjutsu prodigy from Hinata they had formed quite a bond since they had seen so much of each other in Hinata's first few years of life.

The leader bowed mockingly, “Thank you for taking care of them now we can fight without all that noise” then his eyes widened as an immense fireball took out the two men standing right behind him he knew he was in trouble as a man in an ANBU mask jumped over him to land beside the other two. His ego seemed to be gone replaced by immense anger at having been so easily put in this situation.

Chouza smiled “Looks like you lose” the masked ninja laughed “I may have lost but it doesn't look like you will be able to save those demons now you are too late.” Chouza looked over at the house just in time to see the second floor collapse on top of the first. “NO!!!!!!”

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Naruto stood there looking at the woman in the cage in the middle of the room as simple as it may seem his thoughts were why is there a woman in a cage in the middle of the room. Of course that thought was closely followed by where am I am I dead? Then he saw them the people he considered his family each one standing in front of a doorway one on each side of the cage. Then the woman spoke in an urgent tone “Come closer all of you we don't have long” they all obeyed once they were all standing in a group in front of her she spoke again, “The reason you are here is you are all about to die” they all nodded they had known that then they all looked at each other they had been hoping the others would have lived.

She looked them all over she had known this day would come but she had hoped they would be older wiser and maybe that they would have been happy enough with how they lived to refuse and die a good ,heroic possibly death. However that was not the case but she still had to make the offer Minato had made it clear that he wanted his son to live. She cleared her throat to gain their attention, “I can save you all but it will come with a price down the road”.

It was the girl who spoke up, “W-what P-price” Kiba stared at her “What do you mean what price” he shouted, “We should just be accepting we can live this way”

“W-well what if t-the price i-is that w-we d-die a-anyways later o-only w-worse” he thought about it then decided it made sense, “Ok what price” he asked

She looked at them “Well to save you I have to give each of you some of my chakra but when I do that it won't just end there after you will slowly become demons in two years you will be approximately one eighth demon with markings showing this, in 6 years you will be half demon and in 10 years you will become demons each of you absorbing two tails of my power with one of you becoming the leader of the tribe/ clan you will form and absorbing one more tail after you have done that you will each gain tails of your own though only one of you will be able to have all nine possible.”

“Wait what do you mean who are you?” Naruto asked not understanding. She smiled down at him “I am the Kyuubi and I am sealed directly inside you with my power split between all four of you”

“B-but I t-thought Y-Yondaime H-Hokage killed you” Hinata asked bravely. “No I am sorry to tell you he did not he just sealed me inside you four” there was a rumble sounding from outside after she said this, “quickly time is running out you need to decide quickly”

Sasuke spoke up for the first time, “Will we be stronger and able to protect those we care about?” the Kyuubi was quick to reply, “Yes it will but it might drive them away when you become half demon or full demon.” Then there was another rumble, “Quickly decide we haven't much time”

“We won't drive each other away I accept” they all said at the same time even Hinata without a stutter.

Then there was a blinding flash of light and they were all back in their respective rooms with the ceiling coming down on them.

Naruto POV:

He could feel his legs and everything seemed to be moving slower he stood up and walked towards a gap in the wall he stepped through it and then he walked away from the house and collapsed onto the grass and lay there.

Kiba POV:

He stood up the room was no longer red in his eye, his head didn't hurt and everything was moving slowly. He bent over and picked up Akamaru and walked over to where the ceiling had first caved in and kicked the wall it fell to pieces and he stepped out onto the grass and walked away from the building only to collapse after getting a good distance away.

Hinata POV:

Suddenly she could use her arm again she ran over to the window and used it to smash out the glass she then lifted herself out the window and walked over to the next building over then collapsed.

Sasuke POV:

He reached down and yanked the wood out; it turned out it was a part of one of the table legs he threw it at the window shattering the glass he then walked over to it as he walked his wound was healing. Once he reached the window he placed his foot on the wall and using chakra to grip it with knowledge he didn't have he flipped out the window. He walked over to a tree and lay down leaned against it then collapsed.

A/N: still getting longer the last one was four pages on Microsoft word this one is six><
well review and rate constructivecriticism is helpful and once again any ideas on where the story should go are helpful.

Still want a Beta I don't really need one