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| "The Seals!" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: iguana girl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2009 14:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
i think you sould just contenue with the storie.
| Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: August 06, 2008 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What happened to chapter 4? Why cannot I access it? Fix the links please! The villagers are idiots! I'm shocked the kids aren't psychotic like Gaara. IF the kids were really Kyubi, then Leaf would be a crater...
| Reviewed By: iguana girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2008 10:16 CDT
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this is so amazing!!! will they be put on the same team?? and will itachi go dark faster?? to many queshtons and so little time....
| Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: August 04, 2008 19:41 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hm, IF Hana never forgave Tsumae for disowning Kiba, then what does Itachi, Mikoto and Hinata's mom think of their kids/brother being disowned? Since if I recall right, sasuke and Kiba were born in July, but i tohught hinata was born months after Naruto! Without Sasuke around to adore Itachi, Itachi would fall in darkness quicker and harder! I wouldn't be shocked if he snapped earlier...Does Neji know that Hinata is his younger cousin, I doubt some Branch members would shut up about one of the 'Demons' being a Hyuga! PLEASE have the Shinobis be smarter to see the difference between a Jailer and a real Demon!
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