Original Stories Fan Fiction / Horror Fan Fiction ❯ Please Just let me die! ❯ Technicolored dream world ( Chapter 3 )

Hello again, and welcome to chapter 3. The story will really start to pick up after this chapter, so if anyone out there was wondering when the action would start, it will come full force in chapter 4. The chapters will also become a bit longer after this. Thank you for your patients, but as I said before, I'm trying to stretch what was originally a very short story into a few chapters.

 

As always, thank you so much for reading, and please review!

 

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*Flashback*

 

“What the fuck do you two want from me?!” Erin screamed breathlessly.

 

“Nothing but you yourself.” The man in black smiled.

 

*Flashback*

 

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“A John?” The hopeful part of Erin's brain questioned, “If he's a John I can just tell him I'm on the rag and he'll leave me the fuck alone.”

 

“Or a killer,” The annoyingly pessimistic side answered back, “If it's killer I'll just die. I can't do a fucking thing against one of them, and with that other little piece of shit there I don't have a chance in hell. Fucking Pricks!”

 

“What's wrong with dying?” A voice from deep inside her suddenly asked.

 

“Don't kill me.” She breathed, but the words seemed hallow somehow. That little voice had a point.

 

The man in black suddenly smiled joyfully and, in a handful of quick steps, stood in front of her with his hand extended. “He want's to help you up.” She thought absently. When she didn't accept his offer his smile only widened.

 

“Now why would I ever do something like that?” He asked her, the humor never leaving his voice. “I was afraid that Damien here had scared you, and it seems that I was right to worry.” He paused to throw a reproachful glance in the direction of the grey man. “He has that effect on people you see.”

 

“What the fuck do you want from me?!” She snarled for the second time. The assholes were playing with her and she was fucking tired of it!

 

“Why just as I said little one… we want you.” Erin opened her mouth to tell him she wasn't interested but he shook his head before she was able to push out the words. “No, not for sex, and not to…” he chuckled quietly to himself in a way that seemed wrong somehow, “Not to kill you. No we want you for our project.”

 

“I'm not into the kinky shit.” She lied quickly, trying to get these dicks away from her as fast as she could.

 

“I said it wasn't for sex.” He repeated, “We would like to give you a new life. I'm what I'm offering is freedom from the streets. We would like to take you in and give you a real chance.”

 

“What The FUCK?” She growled. Goddamn fucking Christians. How dare they walk into her turf and try to fix something she didn't need fixing. “Screw you mother fuckers,” she spat, “I don't need it!”

 

“Very well then…” The man in black sighted, “Come Damien.” He commanded the grey man.

 

The grey man stood swiftly as did Erin, these men might be Christians, but she didn't trust them… there was something wrong with them under the surface. As she pushed herself to her feet her shoulder suddenly stung and she brushed at it absently.

 

“We'll be here should you ever need us little one.” The man in black said, the smile once again returning to his face.

 

“Fuck off.” She growled, turning away from them and towards the streets of the city. But as she took her second step, her feet faltered, and then collapsed. She fell face first into the dusty pavement with a heavy thud. Erin tried to get back up but she couldn't move. She couldn't move and her eyes were quickly lousing their focus. The world faded into a Technicolored blur and the noises around her began to warble and distort into something unintelligible, but for some reason she couldn't bring herself to be afraid. As she fell into unconsciousness she saw two figures moving towards her. She couldn't remember who they were, but one of them had a broad smile that seemed to almost split his face in two. “You should smile back…” She thought groggily before the blackness overtook her.

 

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That is it for now I'm afraid (please forgive the cliffhanger, I couldn't help myself!)…

 

So what do you think? How is it? Is there anything you think I should change? Anything you think I could have done better?

 

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