| "Please Just let me die!" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: Absolutely Fantastic
Reviewed By: MaroonWolf18 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2010 20:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I deeply enjoyed your entire story. You portrayed Erin very well. I can understand her easily. She is fierce, street-wise, strong willed, vicious-minded, blood thirsty, confused, conflicted, etc. Very well done. You are the perfect amount of detail. The story line is great. I'm just a bit down, due to the fact that you wrote this in 2007, as well as 2007 being your last reviews' dates... Perhaps you will return one day, and continue upon your story? Yes, it is dark. It is demented. It is one of those "fucked up" stories. But the enjoyment.... the entertainment values are through the roof, so far up, they are dancing with the Gods themselves. I, too, have been writing a story, since July of this year (2010). It is called Tattered Soul. It is also extremely dark, demented, fucked up, sadistic, etc. Confusing as all get out, but a definite crowd pleaser, to those of our kind. I'd appreciate if you wouldn't mind, if you ever get back on here, to read some if not all of my story [tattered soul]. As well as leaving review(s) here and there if you want. Great job. ....Absolutely Fantastic. ~~Amanda Wilson/MaroonWolf18 |
Reviewed By: -Satans Spawnishly Daughter- [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 17:37 EDT
Comment/Review:
damn! i love this already and i dont have a fuckin CLUE what is goin on yet! and dont worry about reviews fuckin people here cant review worth a flyin shit it takes 'em forever! update soon ok?
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Title: :3
Reviewed By: destiny dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 15:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it. There is something dark about it that makes me want to read more. A part of me wants to see the girl depend on the men and become more girly but then again, I like her hard core attitude. Great job. Please update soon.
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Title: waiting mode
Reviewed By: wolf000 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 09:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
busy busy busy..... Y_Y new chapter desu~....
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Title: YAY!_!
Reviewed By: wolf000 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2007 03:15 EST
Comment/Review:
awts... @_@ traumatic... damn she killed herself in front of her own kid >.> hm.. wonder why she didn't kill hereself too? wish she killed her bastard of a father *looks around in case own father comes along* heheheh OMG whos Man In Black? more more more!! ^_^
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Title: woof woof
Reviewed By: wolf000 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2007 21:17 EST
Comment/Review:
0.o waaii~! still no update? -.- doshte doshte doshte?? hhuhuhu erinchan!
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Title: quick work
Reviewed By: wolf000 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2007 00:32 EST
Comment/Review:
nyax...much swearing o.0 good work! *glomp* hehehe... the dream was really disturbing...mm...wanna use it..really good work! ^_^ ooh....are those dudes werewolves?vampies? XD nyaaahhh erin!!! cliffhangers!!! @_@
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: wolf000 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 00:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey hey...finish the bit ^_^ its getting interesting and the summary was really catchy, for me anyways... MORE! XD btw, is their some physical violence involved? not that im a sadist..hehehe GOD BLESS
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