Pretty Cure Fan Fiction ❯ Pretty Cure SS ❯ 1 ( Chapter 1 )
[ X - Adult: No readers under 18. Contains Graphic Adult Themes/Extreme violence. ]
***Disclaimer***
I do not own, or claim ownership of the caractors. This is a fanfic intended for creative writting and is not intended for sale.
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Pretty Cure just defeated an Uzainaa when Mai gets pulled into a dark hole. She awakens in her human form to Gooyan who has a dark smile on his face.
"Gooyan...-san!"
"Oh, you’re a wake, pretty cure-sama..."
"What do you want?"
"The location of the sun fountain."
"I will NEVER tell you!"
"Oh, but you will, pretty cure-sama. Or should I say Mai-san. Heh Heh!"
"What are you going to do to me?"
"I've been meaning to try this on you for some time, but now that I have managed to capture at least one of the Legendary Warriors, I think I should try my new torture device."
Mai looked at surprise at the new machine Gooyan brought out. "That's..."
"A special way of dealing with little girls like you,” Gooyan said while ripping off Mai's panties and tearing off her shirt. He pulls her down onto all four securing her arms and legs. He pulls the dido part of the device between her legs and inserting it into her slit. "I heard that the young girls from the Land of Greenery are especially sensitive to these kinds of things. So I figure this should be enough to defeat Pretty Cure...Especially since you are in your current human form."
"Aaaahhhahhh!" Mai screams when the machine starts raping her.
"Ora, Ora! I figured I bring both the Legendary Warriors here for a little treat, but I suppose it is best to have just one of you since it takes both for you to transform. Heh heh heh." Mai continues to scream, as the machine picks up pace. "So then Pretty Cure-sama, where is the location of the fountain of sun."
"I don't know! And even if I did I would never tell you."
Gooyan fronds in disgusts, "You're lying! The Legendary Warriors are the protectors of the Land of Fountains! They must know of locations of each fountain if the wish to restore order to the land!"
"I don't know! I really don't know!!!" Mai screams as she lets out an orgasm.
"I see you've just had your first orgasm. Rest sure pretty cure-sama, this machine works, and it works well indeed," he taunts as he massages her breast. "You see, this is not the first time I've used it on the Legendary Warriors, and as you can tell from Kaoru and Michiru, every young girl has her breaking point."
"Kaoru and Michiru??? What do you mean by that???"
"Kaoru and Michiru where once the Legendary Warriors before you, who swore to protect the Land of Fountains and seal Akudaikaan-sama in Dark Fall forever. But one day, Akudaikaan-sama broke the barrier, the Legendary Warriors were defeated, and Akudaikaan-sama began gathering the Drops of Miracle."
"Kaoru and Michiru were once Pretty Cure~aaaahhh!!!" Mai forced out a second orgasm.
"Yeah, that's right, that's right." Gooyan stops playing with Mai's breast. "Kaoru and Michiru were my most awarded prize to Akudaikaan-sama. The darkness flowing through this machine corrupted their bodies and devourered their powers, turning into the servants of darkness you now know of them."
"You raped Kaoru and Michiru..." Mai cries, "Horrible, just horrible. How can you do such cruel things?"
"They were Pretty Cure, The Legendary Warriors, just like you. But then they became the servants of Akudaikaan-sama and warriors of darkness." Gooyan molests Mai's butt. "There is nothing better I could have done for them."
"I will never forgive...~aaaahhhh!!!" Mai lets out another orgasm. "Your machine didn't work. Kaoru and Michiru both had hearts and eventually became our friends."
Gooyan grins. "Don't underestimate me! I might have failed the first time, but I certainly did not fail the second time." Mai looked alarm. "Once they were sealed away, I had slipped out to their dungeon, and broke their spirits, once more!" Gooyan smiles, "I've learned from my mistakes and now they are darker and more heartless then ever, HA! HA! HA! HA! Ha!" Gooyan laughs, "However, Akudaikaan-sama, like you, will 'never forgive' traitors, (or me) for such defiance. So now your beloved friends are held deep within Dark Falls, being raped and brutalize much more horrifyingly than you could possibly imagine," he smiles as Mai lets out an orgasm.
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"Saki, cheer up, lapi!"
"I'm sure Mai's O.k. chopi."
"Aaaaahhhh ahhhhh, I can't find Mai any where. She gets pulled into the darkness, and I can't find any way into Dark Fall,” Saki sighs. "She didn't show up for class, and I don't know what to do."
"Mai's strong, lapi, and I'm sure she's putting up a good fight, lapi!"
"But, it is a problem still...Her family is worried, and I can't transform if an Uzainaa shows up." Saki whines. "If only we could go to Dark falls, or if I could transform without her, then this would be a lot easier."
"It's O.k. chopi. Mai will come back and everything will be o.k. chopi."
***Months later***
"I'm sorry for being Pretty Cure."
"I'm sorry for taking back the Drops of Miracle."
"I'm sorry for defying Akudaikaan-sama."
Mai lets out an orgasm.
"I'm sorry for not being your type."
"I'm sorry for not being more attractive."
"I'm sorry for not being more sexy."
"I'm sorry for not sleeping in the nude."
"I'm sorry for wearing underwear."
"I'm sorry for having small breast."
"I'm sorry for having stop drinking from my mother's breasts."
"I'm sorry for having stopped taking baths with my older brother."
"I'm sorry for not being my brother's, and his friends, sex toy."
"I'm sorry for not having that kind of relationship with Saki and her little sister."
"I'm sorry for not prostituting myself to my classmates."
"I'm sorry for not masturbating in class or at school.
"I'm sorry for not owning a vibrator."
"I'm sorry for not masturbating at least ten times a day."
"I'm sorry for not cumming more than once when I masturbate."
"I'm sorry for not fingering my ass when I do masturbate."
"I'm sorry for not masturbating in public, or at least making it know to friends and family."
"I'm sorry for never having taken a bath in a public bath house."
"I'm sorry for refusing to take showers in the girl’s locker room."
"I'm sorry for refusing to use a public restroom."
"I'm sorry for not peeing in the forest whenever I have to go."
"I'm sorry for not wetting myself like I want to, whenever an Uzainaa shows up, instead of transforming into Pretty Cure"
"I'm sorry for never having sex with Chuutaro."
"I'm sorry for not letting Hikari stay at my place in exchange for various sexual services."
"I'm sorry for..." Mai winches as she cums.
"That’s right, that's good enough!" Gooyan interrupts. "Now tell me where is the Fountain of Sun."
Mai winches in pain and starts crying. "I'm sorry, I don't know. Seriously! I just don't know! I can’t think of any more places it could be! I really don't know of any more places! I have never, ever, been to any more places! So please let me go! Pretty pretty please, let me go."
"No deal, unless you tell me the location of the Fountain of Sun, I can’t let you go."
"I swear! I swear I'll never turn into Pretty Cure again. I'll never fight another Uzainaa again. I'll never talk again about Kaoru and Michiru! I'll even return the Drops of Miracle we took from you. I'll...I'll…" Mai cums. "I'll even sever as your dork warrior! I'll vowel my loyalty to Akudaikaan-sama! I'll even lure Saki here for your pleasure to show you my sincerity."
"That’s not good enough Pretty Cure-sama..."
"I'll go back! I'll go back and learn the location of the Fountain of Sun! I'll help you destroy the Land of Greenery! I'll help you take back the Land of Fountains! I'll do anything and everything you want me to do! So please, please, just stop raping me!" Mai pauses as another orgasm passes.
"Not a chance Pretty Cure. Kaoru and Michiru already have proven that you're not to be trusted." Gooyan starts to walk away. "If you really don't know the location of the Fountain of Sun, then I have no use for you. The only thing left for me to do, is to relocate you to a deeper darker part of Dark Forest where you will continue your rape forever."
"No way!" Mai begs. "Wait! Please, Wait! Not that! Anything but that! I'll do anything! ANYTHING! Just please don't rape me any more! Please! No more! Ple~aaaahhhhh"
***To be continued***
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Author’s note:
I really hate this recession. I had to cut out virtually all forms of entertainment just to pay my bills. The only thing I have to watch are old episodes of some anime that I downloaded back when I had cable internet. I don't know why I download Pretty Cure, but I really *HATE* it. It's just too dame goody goody. I made it through the original and Max Heart mostly because it was still new to me. But this want-a-be Splash Star just makes me sick. I don't hate Mai specifically, but every time she says something, it's like "Come on." This story makes more sense to me then the original plot.
The idea of Kaoru and Michiru being the former Pretty Cure who was raped into becoming dark soldiers actually makes a lot of sense for their character design. My favorite part is when Mai breaks and she starts apologizing for various things. There is a lot of subtlety to what she is saying, and plus the idea of the bitch begging and cracking is very pleasing. The show is far more bearable now that I've written this story.
AcidicDagg@yahoo.com, April 2nd, 2011
I do not own, or claim ownership of the caractors. This is a fanfic intended for creative writting and is not intended for sale.
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Pretty Cure just defeated an Uzainaa when Mai gets pulled into a dark hole. She awakens in her human form to Gooyan who has a dark smile on his face.
"Gooyan...-san!"
"Oh, you’re a wake, pretty cure-sama..."
"What do you want?"
"The location of the sun fountain."
"I will NEVER tell you!"
"Oh, but you will, pretty cure-sama. Or should I say Mai-san. Heh Heh!"
"What are you going to do to me?"
"I've been meaning to try this on you for some time, but now that I have managed to capture at least one of the Legendary Warriors, I think I should try my new torture device."
Mai looked at surprise at the new machine Gooyan brought out. "That's..."
"A special way of dealing with little girls like you,” Gooyan said while ripping off Mai's panties and tearing off her shirt. He pulls her down onto all four securing her arms and legs. He pulls the dido part of the device between her legs and inserting it into her slit. "I heard that the young girls from the Land of Greenery are especially sensitive to these kinds of things. So I figure this should be enough to defeat Pretty Cure...Especially since you are in your current human form."
"Aaaahhhahhh!" Mai screams when the machine starts raping her.
"Ora, Ora! I figured I bring both the Legendary Warriors here for a little treat, but I suppose it is best to have just one of you since it takes both for you to transform. Heh heh heh." Mai continues to scream, as the machine picks up pace. "So then Pretty Cure-sama, where is the location of the fountain of sun."
"I don't know! And even if I did I would never tell you."
Gooyan fronds in disgusts, "You're lying! The Legendary Warriors are the protectors of the Land of Fountains! They must know of locations of each fountain if the wish to restore order to the land!"
"I don't know! I really don't know!!!" Mai screams as she lets out an orgasm.
"I see you've just had your first orgasm. Rest sure pretty cure-sama, this machine works, and it works well indeed," he taunts as he massages her breast. "You see, this is not the first time I've used it on the Legendary Warriors, and as you can tell from Kaoru and Michiru, every young girl has her breaking point."
"Kaoru and Michiru??? What do you mean by that???"
"Kaoru and Michiru where once the Legendary Warriors before you, who swore to protect the Land of Fountains and seal Akudaikaan-sama in Dark Fall forever. But one day, Akudaikaan-sama broke the barrier, the Legendary Warriors were defeated, and Akudaikaan-sama began gathering the Drops of Miracle."
"Kaoru and Michiru were once Pretty Cure~aaaahhh!!!" Mai forced out a second orgasm.
"Yeah, that's right, that's right." Gooyan stops playing with Mai's breast. "Kaoru and Michiru were my most awarded prize to Akudaikaan-sama. The darkness flowing through this machine corrupted their bodies and devourered their powers, turning into the servants of darkness you now know of them."
"You raped Kaoru and Michiru..." Mai cries, "Horrible, just horrible. How can you do such cruel things?"
"They were Pretty Cure, The Legendary Warriors, just like you. But then they became the servants of Akudaikaan-sama and warriors of darkness." Gooyan molests Mai's butt. "There is nothing better I could have done for them."
"I will never forgive...~aaaahhhh!!!" Mai lets out another orgasm. "Your machine didn't work. Kaoru and Michiru both had hearts and eventually became our friends."
Gooyan grins. "Don't underestimate me! I might have failed the first time, but I certainly did not fail the second time." Mai looked alarm. "Once they were sealed away, I had slipped out to their dungeon, and broke their spirits, once more!" Gooyan smiles, "I've learned from my mistakes and now they are darker and more heartless then ever, HA! HA! HA! HA! Ha!" Gooyan laughs, "However, Akudaikaan-sama, like you, will 'never forgive' traitors, (or me) for such defiance. So now your beloved friends are held deep within Dark Falls, being raped and brutalize much more horrifyingly than you could possibly imagine," he smiles as Mai lets out an orgasm.
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"Saki, cheer up, lapi!"
"I'm sure Mai's O.k. chopi."
"Aaaaahhhh ahhhhh, I can't find Mai any where. She gets pulled into the darkness, and I can't find any way into Dark Fall,” Saki sighs. "She didn't show up for class, and I don't know what to do."
"Mai's strong, lapi, and I'm sure she's putting up a good fight, lapi!"
"But, it is a problem still...Her family is worried, and I can't transform if an Uzainaa shows up." Saki whines. "If only we could go to Dark falls, or if I could transform without her, then this would be a lot easier."
"It's O.k. chopi. Mai will come back and everything will be o.k. chopi."
***Months later***
"I'm sorry for being Pretty Cure."
"I'm sorry for taking back the Drops of Miracle."
"I'm sorry for defying Akudaikaan-sama."
Mai lets out an orgasm.
"I'm sorry for not being your type."
"I'm sorry for not being more attractive."
"I'm sorry for not being more sexy."
"I'm sorry for not sleeping in the nude."
"I'm sorry for wearing underwear."
"I'm sorry for having small breast."
"I'm sorry for having stop drinking from my mother's breasts."
"I'm sorry for having stopped taking baths with my older brother."
"I'm sorry for not being my brother's, and his friends, sex toy."
"I'm sorry for not having that kind of relationship with Saki and her little sister."
"I'm sorry for not prostituting myself to my classmates."
"I'm sorry for not masturbating in class or at school.
"I'm sorry for not owning a vibrator."
"I'm sorry for not masturbating at least ten times a day."
"I'm sorry for not cumming more than once when I masturbate."
"I'm sorry for not fingering my ass when I do masturbate."
"I'm sorry for not masturbating in public, or at least making it know to friends and family."
"I'm sorry for never having taken a bath in a public bath house."
"I'm sorry for refusing to take showers in the girl’s locker room."
"I'm sorry for refusing to use a public restroom."
"I'm sorry for not peeing in the forest whenever I have to go."
"I'm sorry for not wetting myself like I want to, whenever an Uzainaa shows up, instead of transforming into Pretty Cure"
"I'm sorry for never having sex with Chuutaro."
"I'm sorry for not letting Hikari stay at my place in exchange for various sexual services."
"I'm sorry for..." Mai winches as she cums.
"That’s right, that's good enough!" Gooyan interrupts. "Now tell me where is the Fountain of Sun."
Mai winches in pain and starts crying. "I'm sorry, I don't know. Seriously! I just don't know! I can’t think of any more places it could be! I really don't know of any more places! I have never, ever, been to any more places! So please let me go! Pretty pretty please, let me go."
"No deal, unless you tell me the location of the Fountain of Sun, I can’t let you go."
"I swear! I swear I'll never turn into Pretty Cure again. I'll never fight another Uzainaa again. I'll never talk again about Kaoru and Michiru! I'll even return the Drops of Miracle we took from you. I'll...I'll…" Mai cums. "I'll even sever as your dork warrior! I'll vowel my loyalty to Akudaikaan-sama! I'll even lure Saki here for your pleasure to show you my sincerity."
"That’s not good enough Pretty Cure-sama..."
"I'll go back! I'll go back and learn the location of the Fountain of Sun! I'll help you destroy the Land of Greenery! I'll help you take back the Land of Fountains! I'll do anything and everything you want me to do! So please, please, just stop raping me!" Mai pauses as another orgasm passes.
"Not a chance Pretty Cure. Kaoru and Michiru already have proven that you're not to be trusted." Gooyan starts to walk away. "If you really don't know the location of the Fountain of Sun, then I have no use for you. The only thing left for me to do, is to relocate you to a deeper darker part of Dark Forest where you will continue your rape forever."
"No way!" Mai begs. "Wait! Please, Wait! Not that! Anything but that! I'll do anything! ANYTHING! Just please don't rape me any more! Please! No more! Ple~aaaahhhhh"
***To be continued***
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Author’s note:
I really hate this recession. I had to cut out virtually all forms of entertainment just to pay my bills. The only thing I have to watch are old episodes of some anime that I downloaded back when I had cable internet. I don't know why I download Pretty Cure, but I really *HATE* it. It's just too dame goody goody. I made it through the original and Max Heart mostly because it was still new to me. But this want-a-be Splash Star just makes me sick. I don't hate Mai specifically, but every time she says something, it's like "Come on." This story makes more sense to me then the original plot.
The idea of Kaoru and Michiru being the former Pretty Cure who was raped into becoming dark soldiers actually makes a lot of sense for their character design. My favorite part is when Mai breaks and she starts apologizing for various things. There is a lot of subtlety to what she is saying, and plus the idea of the bitch begging and cracking is very pleasing. The show is far more bearable now that I've written this story.
AcidicDagg@yahoo.com, April 2nd, 2011