Sonic Series Fan Fiction ❯ in the late, late afternoon ❯ in the late, late afternoon ( Chapter 1 )

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hello. this is the ever-annoying right-winged anal-retentive latifah27. and according to "shaded flames", i'm a pedophile. yep. while bahamut dragons' fics are "art", i'm just a sex-deprived ass with a porcupine stuffed up my ass. and i'm a pedophile. my fic, "stolen innocence", since it involves humans rather than animals, makes me an automatic pedophile, while bahamut dragons' fics, since they involve animal-children having consentual sex, are "art".

yes, i'm beginning to sound like rush limbaugh, but i think i know a bit of what i'm talking about, and i think that portraying sex with minors in a positive light is sick. and wrong. i did that "you want lemon?" fic just to make a point on the inappropriateness of these pointless sex-every-second sonic lemons.

and i'm really passionate about stuff like this. honestly, why would anyone want to write about little kids having sex? and for that matter, why would anyone want to have sex with a child? also, why am i still doing this when i know that most people who read my stuff will think i'm a lunatic and just blow me off? is it because i just don't know when to quit? or maybe i'm just taking a stand. i'm sorry, but shaded flames just infuriated me. go ahead and smack me in the head, but please, don't tell me that it's ok to portray kids like that, 'cause that just won't fly.

also, just in case you were wondering, i'm a girl. so don't go callin' me a faggot or something like that, or even a pedophile! that really makes me mad! and if this poem is too explicit for the r-rating, email me about it, and be polite, instead of reporting the fic!

now read the damn poem and sod off! Grrr...

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think r&b ballad, lauryn hill(who, contrary to the rumor, didn't make any racist remarks), areatha franklin, or beyonce knowles). done sort of in the style of e.e. cummings, with no capital letters.

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in the late, late afternoon

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amy sat down, had a spot of coffee

little glass of wine, turned on the telly

tails walked in, he was nice & young

wanted his way with his girlfriend some

they were only eight years old

and acting like they're grown

sleeping with each other

wild oats were sown

they were only children

growing old too soon

all for little pleasure

in the late, late afternoon

sally was lonely, bored with her royalty

barely age eleven, her body changin' rapidly

so antoine came in, and saw her nubile pose

and he asked if sally, would want him to pick her rose

but it's wrong, all wrong

they were just children, for cryin' out loud

but it's wrong, all wrong

steal their innocence so young

she was just eleven years old

and it wasn't meant to be

creepin' at such a young age

and takin' it so easily

she was just a child

growing too old too soon

all for little pleasure

in the late, late afternoon

and it's all wrong

can't we just let the children be?

instead of lookin' at them

and thinkin' of them sexually

sonic was a little one, running so speedily

no troubles on his mind, no big worries

when a strange hedgehog appeared, black stripes on black fur

he said that he would give this child, a few moments of mirth

but it's wrong, all wrong

they were just children, for cryin' out loud

but it's wrong, all wrong

steal their innocence so young

he was just a little boy

growing too old too soon

all for little pleasure

in the late, late afternoon

yes it's all wrong

can't we just let the children be?

instead of lookin' at them

and thinkin' of them sexually

'cause they're just little children

and they're gowing too old too soon

all for little pleasure

in the late, late afternoon

yes, they're just little children

and they're gowing too old too soon

all for little pleasure

in the late, late afternoon

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now for more rant:

i know you all hate me for this, but i have to say something. even though the characters in the archie-sonic or whatever other sonic world you can think of are just animals, they do act and talk like humans. this may be furry-erotica, but it involves animals that are humanoid, and humans relate to them. sure, it's pretend, but how many people have been led down the path of rape, child-abuse, and other forms of violent sex from reading stuff like this?

we can't go glorifying child-sex, because it's unnatural, and it exploites innocent children. even the operators of shady places on the web that are into peer-to-peer mp3-sharing have morales, since they absolutely won't allow the exchange of kiddie-porn.

i tried to illustrate why stories like "the sonic kids chronicles" are bad by uploading a fic where maria(from sonic adventure 2) is molested by her grandfather. then, bahamut dragons himself emailed me and told me that there was a big difference between our stories, where julyala had sally's full trust, while gerald robotnik was just selfishly using maria. not only that, but he also revealed to me something that i'd rather not print here, since (1) it was way too sickening, and (2), i don't want a flame-war.

the bottom line is that sex with or between children is wrong. most children under the ages of sixteen, and certainly under the ages of twelve, are way too young to understand sex. they are incapable of understanding the physical, mental, and spiritual implications of two people becoming one. when two people have sex, it is more than just giving pleasure; these people are sharing their bodies and minds, and becoming naked and vulnerable to each other.

furry fiction and art isn't just a bunch of animal stories. it reflects the writer and artist's attitudes and views of everything. all the author or artist's beliefs, emotions, and attitudes, as well as experiences, all become part of their works; and just because the characters are animals, doesn't take any of the importance or implications from the stories. these elements are part of the creator, and they come from what goes through the creator's thoughts.

i'm not here to condemn anyone, including bahamut dragons. all i'm saying is that this is wrong. you can get mad at me, ream my bum out, flame me, ignore me, whatever. or you can read this and maybe realize that i'm not an idiot.

besides, if i don't stand for something, i'll fall for everything.