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| "in the late, late afternoon" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] | Title: Agreed
Reviewed By: Triplechaos0 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 23:41 CST
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I agree with Black Moss, People see one person's story and automatically side with them. Not to be a hypocrite, I mean I did side with sercer during "the war"(those who know sercer and dragonwarrior understand what I'm saying, but truth be told, dragonwarrior is a no talent hack. But I digress. Kiddy porn is sick. True, the characters, well most of them, in Sonic the Hedgehog are animals, but anyone that doesn't have their head up their ass can see that they are clearly human-based. Well enough ranting, but as the tree, whose name escapes me, once said, if something is worth being said, it should take a long time to say. Not the exact wording, but close enough to get the point across.
| Reviewed By: vampire lips [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 10:21 CST
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you have serious talent. try writing somthing for fun. It dosn't have to envolv a lemon(though it shouls) But atuly have a plot and stuff. Show me what ch got!!!!
| Title: Yo.
Reviewed By: ComingSoonInc [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2003 20:43 CST
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Loved it. You're right. Now, do me a favor, please? I want to see you write something for fun, rather than to prove a point. I think you have talent, so show me what you can do, okay? Thanks. -Gino-
| Reviewed By: rouge_the_bat On: June 16, 2003 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think i liked the funny stuff better. i gues i just love mindless gags. this was well written, but when i use them they are all atleast 15 at the youngest. meaning sonic is at least 21. but it seems that all these lemons really offend you. simple, just remember that in most lemons the charcters are all at least of age.how about this, you make up your own charcters, it's easy i did! but don't get so upset! this was almost disturbing. a far cry from "you wan't lemons which is the funniest thing in the whole world. you should do more of the funny stuff. because you are really good at it.well see ya later | Reviewed By: Lenoh [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2003 03:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfect, except...
Shadow is over 50 years old! :O | Reviewed By: Black Moss On: June 05, 2003 14:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I completely see your point!
just ignore those biased freaks that say there's something wrong with you & then glorify bahamutdragon. They're completely blind.
It bugs the crap out of me when people act like that. And why are they calling him a great artist? The stories weren't even written that well anyway.
We all realise that animals have sex at young ages, but the characters are human based & run on human biological-shedules. I have friends that were raped at that age & NO child should have to go through that.
Keep writing Latifah27 | Reviewed By: *Starlet Angel* On: June 04, 2003 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want to thank you for putting this up, and you know why. You make a very good point, and you've got a lot of guts to stand up to these people. You go, girl! Don't back down. The others who are against kiddie-porn are behind you all the way as well, I'm sure of it! ^.~* | Reviewed By: Mikey B23 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2003 10:24 CDT
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Mikey B23 here! I TOTALLY AGREE: Underage sex is WRONG no matter HOW you look at it!!! I liked this fanfic!!
Mikey B23 out!!!!!
BTH: BE SURE TO VOTE ON SCENE 23!!!!!
Mikey B23 out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!............................ | Reviewed By: drako3 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2003 09:05 CDT
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I understand your point and agree with you. If it portrays kids, it's portraying kids. BD's stuff is, in my eyes, no different than any other kiddy story. It's wrong. (I realize I'm preaching, but hey. More 18-yr olds should have high morals!)
I saw what you were trying to say with "You want lemon", and I think that you make a valid point when you say about it in this thing. Underage is wrong no matter how you look at it. A lemon is one thing (even if it gets a little dark) if the chars are consenting adults, but kiddy stuff is just dirty.
By the by, you seem a good critic. Would you mind checking out my story? Visions of Darkness, Dreams of Light. I don't get many reviews, and I'm worried that I'm not a good writer. I also worry that I rated it too high. I'm thinking it should be PG-13, but...
http://www.mediaminer.org/fanfic/view_st.php?id=35208
Please check it out and review! Thanks! |
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