Utena, Revolutionary Girl Fan Fiction ❯ Grapes and Flowers ❯ My Blurb ( Prologue )

This is my first Utena fanfic (just for fun.) Excuse my amateur-ness and incorrect information--well, no, tell me what you think and what I can work on, please. I tried to leave as much of Budoo as possible to your imagination--that gray hair thing was kind of an accident. (Budoo is the first name, like "Sally") Once you get to the actual plot, you'll see that most of the story was [stupid] build-up. PS. I'm mixing the manga and anime.PPS. My computer is doing strange things to my documents, so if you feel like you've missed something, you probably have. I am so sorry