Vampire Hunter (Darkstalkers) Fan Fiction / Ranma 1/2 Fan Fiction ❯ Succubus' Kiss ❯ Chapter One ( Chapter 1 )
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Disclaimer: This is a parody inspired
by the work of Takahashi Rumiko and
Capcom. All characters (that I have
not created or borrowed from other
sources) belong to her. This is a
fan fiction, and is not intended
to violate the rights of those who
hold control over the Ranma and the
Darkstalker series. I have no money
for legal problems and would very much
appreciate it if no one tries to sue
me. Thank you very much.
Succubus' Kiss
HVulpes
Chapter One: Going to be Some Trouble...
Ranma sat in the moonlight as he thought about the day once again. Akane
had just broken the engagement once again after a stressful day with the
other girls after Ranma. The fact was that Ranma was kinda glad that she
had broken off the whole agreement. He just didn't want to marry any of the
girls.
It wasn't that they weren't attractive. They were all beautiful women that
any man would kill to date. He just didn't feel right about marriage right
now. What with the curse, the rivals, the confusion of his whole life. But
it was also something else. Something deeper. Like a piece of him was
missing.
Ranma had felt this way ever since he headed off to train when he was
five. 'Not quite back. Some happened early in the trip. Something that
felt important. It has to do with that green haired girl.' Ranma thought as
his memory flared to life.
He remembered meeting this strange little girl in the forest that was
being by this strange monster cat. Fortunately for this girl, she had met
him before he had developed his fear of cats. Looking at this damsel in
distress, Ranma acted on instinct. As she fell helpless, Ranma jumped and
kicked at cat that was hunting her. It pushed back for a moment. Before
turning to Ranma.
A hideous snarling face turned to him with a mouthful of natural daggers.
Ranma got nervous as the first touches a life-long fear appeared. Sabre
like swung at him, missing him by inches. Ranma backed up, only to hit a
tree. He closed his eyes waiting for the deadly strike.
He heard a sound like a knife cutting flesh, only louder. Then he felt hot
blood hit him. he was dying. But he faced it bravely, like his samurai
ancestors. Only he heard laughing. Opening his eyes, he saw a girl his
age standing before him. Behind her was the corpse of the dead cat.
Turned out that her name was Morrigan and she had been suddenly attacks
by the cat. It scared her so much that she ran, forgetting that she had
the power to slay the beast. Ranma asked, "Are you a martial artist?"
Morrigan smiled at this and said, "Of some type." Ranma then thanked her
for his rescue. He was about to give her a kiss on the cheek as thanks as
his mother had told him. Only to have her move and the kiss land on her
lips.
It seemed to go on for hours as he felt energy flow in him and out of him
with that kiss. It would be a kiss that he would remember always and ever
kiss after that was compared to that kiss. Then it stopped and Morrigan
look a little frighten. She then ran into the woods.
Ranma tried to chase after her. Only to find that she seemed to have
disappeared. Ranma searched for a couple hours before he was found by
his father and taken away from the wood.
Still the memory remained. And at times like this he was wondering where
it was that Morrigan was at this time.
Meanwhile in the Makai Realm...
Morrigan Aensland read through the notes that her father had written on
the magic mirror of Anustes. The mirror that had sent her centuries ago
into the present. Where she had met her beloved. Ranma Saotome. Ever since
the kiss.
'It was a rare, deep and powerful magic that binds our souls together.
The unknown kiss of an innocent hold great power over a young succubus.
It can grant her greater powers while giving her deeper responsibilities.'
Morrigan thought as she turned to the orb that was sitting next to the
book on the desk.
She felt her heart tug as she looked at the orb. "Quiet Lilith. We will
soon find the love of my life." She told the fragment of herself that was
closest to her innocence. She moved a hand over the crystal to have it
light the location and the history of Ranma. She needed to know what to do
next, so that their happiness could be.
In moments, a lifetime of events passed. She saw the life of her beloved
and soon developed a dislike for the man who raised him. 'That fool! How
dare he treat his son like that. I swear that man must be part demon.' A
redness cross her face as her rage build.
'Plus all of those engagements that he placed on him. That really brings
my blood to a boil. Of course some of those ladies are not bad. Misguided
but not bad. The one named Akane, however, has me totally discussed with
her behaviour. My Ranma has been nothing but noble to her and she treats
him like a lowly dog.' Morrigan pouted as she looked at things at the
Tendo home.
'I would have been willing to let him have his life if it had been happy.
A connection to me might cause major trouble to his life. But to have so
many troubles connected to his life, I feel that I have to act.' Hiding
a sly smile that told lie to this idea. She had a hunger to be with this
man.
She took to the wing. Flying up and over to another mirror. Another portal
to the mortal world. She had prepared for her leave by appoint those who
would hold her kingdom while she was on her mission. Flying through the
portal into the world of humans.
Meanwhile, in a Castle in Europe...
Demetri sat on his throne as he watched for a sign of something he could
use to boost his power. He was a master Vampire who could work in the
daylight by blocking the dreaded sun. Yet he was an outlaw lord, banished
from the land of Makai due to the power of the lords of that land. The
major player being the Aensland clan.
'A clan that is lead by a mere woman. One who should be under my thumb.
Knowing her place as a consort or concubine in my kingdom of Makai. But
she blocks me with her greater power.' Demetri frowned as he held up his
cup holding a red liquid.
Then he felt it. A portal that was opening from Makai to this world. From
the power of the figure that was coming out of that portal, it could only
be one person. That brought his mind to thinking. 'What in the world could
that spoilt princess what with this world? Is she on a simple hunt for the
materials that are rare in the demon world, but plentiful here? Or could
she be after something else?'
Demetri rose and looked in the direction that he had felt the Queen of
Makai had appeared. It was in the east. He would need to consult his
minions to pin point the exact location of the entrance point. That would
give him the succubus. His mouth smiled as fangs emerged from them. 'If
I was to drink of that female's blood, my power would grow as great as
hers.'
'Plus what ever it is that she is interested in, could give me an edge
over her. One that I can use to bend her to my will and to take that
tempting drink.' He looked at his cup and imagined that it was succubi
blood instead of the blood that he milked out of the peasants that
surrounded his domains. He moved it to his lips and drank deeply from
the goblet. 'Victory will soon be mine.'
Meanwhile in Nerima...
Cologne and Happosai could feel the change in the balance surrounding the
district. A coming of great power that could only mean one thing.
Darkstalkers, the warriors of the night. They knew that those who lived
in the night could have good points and bad points. Be great allies or the
bitterest of enemies. Each reacted in their own special way.
Happosai started to practise his stealth abilities. Skills that he would
need for his dreams if he was fortunate. While many Darkstalkers are male
and repulsive, there is also the females who could be quite sexy. And
generous of breast. 'Perfect for an old man to rest his lonely head in.'
Happosai thought as he smiled. "SWEETO!"
Happosai moved so that he could begin the groping of these dangerous
women. The hardest, yet most satifing of all was that of the succubi.
They feed on lust that emerged as a psychic fluid from men and women.
With lust being one of the sources of his power, Happi had to be warey.
But the energy from groping one could power him for years! It was high
risk for high profit.
Perfect for someone who can't resist a challenge.
Cologne was preparing for a cautious approach to demons that were heading
to town. 'It's no doubt connected to son-in-law in some manner. Everything
that has happened since his coming to this district had involved
son-in-law. But how could he be connected to the world of Makai?' Cologne
asked herself.
She gathered what tools that she could for a possible attack. She also
pulled out the scrolls that had contained the information the tribe had
gathered on the Dark Ones. The tribe had learnt the hard way that it is
best to prepare for anything with those from Makai.
'I will have to inform Shampoo and Mr. Part-time about this and the
actions that we will have to take to protect ourselves and son-in-law.'
Cologne thought. 'We will have to keep a close eye on son-in-law. What
ever is coming will be centred on him.'
The next morning at the Tendo home...
It was bright and early. The Saotomes were fighting in the yard as Nabiki
tried to sleep in. Akane was cracking bricks in the dojo while her father
read the paper in the dinning room. So it was Kasumi that heard the
knocking at the door. She went to it and answered it.
On the other end of the door was an attractive woman of her age that was
dress in a manner that bordered on the casual and the seductive. A white
blouse that was solid, yet seem to enhance her curves. Black jeans that
were tight on her long legs. A fine hand moved to her head to toss a strand
of light green hair off her face.
"Hello, is Ranma home? I am a friend of from a long time ago. I just
wanted to see how he is doing." She said, looking into the Tendo home.
It was then that Soun came to the door to look at who it was at the door.
The fact that it was the front door and not the rear made him believe that
it wasn't a challenge. 'I hope it isn't another woman trying to steal my
little girl's fiance.' When he saw Morrigan, he leaped to that conclusion.
"Listen, young lady, Ranma is not going to marry you. He is already
promised to my little girl. No matter what dowery that you claim that has
been given, he is not available! So go away, now!" Soun said, trying to
force her to leave.
Morrigan's eyes seemed to flash, but only for a split second. "Now,now.
Mister...."
"Tendo." Replied Soun.
"Mr. Tendo. I have been looking for my friend Ranma. He helped rescue me
when I was younger, so I felt that I owed him a thank you. I have not been
pledged to marry him. But I would feel proud to be given that honour.
Besides no matter what you have said, it is his choice what his future
holds. He does not deserve to have his future forced on him." Morrigan
said, her voice taking on a freezing effect.
Behind Soun, the rest of the Tendo family had gathered. Nabiki and Akane
had been attracted by the yelling of their father. From the tone, they knew
that it wasn't good.
Akane looked at the woman, her face turned to anger and distaste. She
moved so that she was in front of her father and sister. "Listen, you
floozy, you can just get lost."
Morrigan stared at the woman that was in front of her. "Are you
threatening me?" Her eyes narrowing.
Akane narrowed her eyes as well. The fact that she was int erupted by the
appearance of the boy in question. "Morrigan? Is that you?" Ranma said as
he rushed up and hugged the young woman that appeared at the door. He then
brought her in. Akane's eyes took on a deadly glare.
Without a second thought, Akane yelled out, "Ranma no Baka!" She picked up
a nearby statue and then tried to bean Ranma with it. Only to be stopped by
something. A black object that seemed to flowed to the back of woman that
was standing next to Ranma.
The clothing that she had been wearing was now on the floor in shreds. The
woman was now wearing a black leotard with a heart cutout below her ample
breasts. She wore sleeves on her arms that connect to the leotard with
lace, just above the elbow.Leggings that were connected to the leotard,
purple with black bats on them. She ended it with black ankle boots with
narrow heels.
It became clear that the black object that connected to Morrigan's back
was a bat-like wing, ones that matched the ones on top of her head in
between her green hair. With a force, the wing forced back the statue.
Throwing out of her hands. Then with unbelievable speed, Morrigan was in
the personal space of the youngest Tendo.
A hand lifted the head of the Tendo girl. Akane was shaking as she looked
into the eyes of the strange woman. "Now that wasn't nice? Why were you
going hit my friend with that thing?" Morrigan's voice was soft as velvet
but as firm as iron.
"He's a pervert. Having hussies like you after him!" Trying prove that she
wasn't afraid of this woman.
"Having girls chasing after you is not being a pervert. Plus there is not
anything wrong with being a pervert. So stop punishing people for not
living Prudish life that you choose or else I might have to spank you."
Morrigan said, a naughty smile crossing her face.
Morrigan then stepped away and turned to look at the group that had
gather. Most of them were staring at her. "I guess that I'm going to have
to explain." Morrigan sighed like she was bored and looked for a place for
them to sit and talk.
Later...
Morrigan explained who she was and the events that had brought her here.
"So you see when Ranma gave me that kiss in that circumstance, it caused
a mystical exchange of fragments of our souls. Bonding us in a manner."
"So you're telling us that your some type of sex demon that is the queen
of a hell world that just happens to be a soulmate to Ranma." Akane said,
not looking like she believed it. "Bullshit!"
"Akane, I know that this is hard to believe..." Nabiki said, as she
realized this could be true from the other events of Ranma's life.
"Obviously this demon wants to suck Ranma soul out and feast on his manly
nature." Genma said moving between Ranma and Morrigan.
"Yes, that makes perfect sense! Retreat Demon! We will not allow you to
fulfil your evil mission."
"I don't think that Morrigan is going to hurt me. You're both
overreacting. So she some kind of demon, that doesn't automatically
make her a bad person." Ranma said trying to defuse the situation. But that
seems to have the effect of making things worse.
"Pervert! I bet that you're just hoping to hop on her and do something
perverted with her." Akane said, as he anger rose.
"The boy has been bewitched by the demoness already. We must defeat her
so that her mental hold over the boy can be released. To protect the honour
of our families." Genma said.
"For the honour of our families." Soun said as the two of them tried to
launch and attack on Morrigan. Only to be stopped by the movement of her
wings wrapping around them. She then launched them to the back of the room.
When they hit the wall they were knocked out.
"I guess that I am not wanted around here. So I'll leave... for now. But
I will be back to tell Ranma where my new place is. I plan on staying in
the area until I can speak to my friend." Morrigan said as she walked to
the door. Once outside she took to the air.
Akane then glared at Ranma with an extremely dirty look. One that seem to
tell him that this was all his fault. Before she left for her room.
Ranma didn't know what to think at the moment. But he knew that he didn't
like the actions of his father and Mr. Tendo jumping on Morrigan just for
being who she was. Akane's anger problems was not endearing her to him
either. But the fact that Morrigan had tried to protect him and seemed to
be acting defensively agains two skilled opponents did seem to interest
him.
'I hope that I can see her again.' He thought. 'If only to talk to her
and apologies for the behaviour of my family and my "fiancee".'
Meanwhile, a small pinkish cat crawled out from behind her hiding place
as she headed home to report what she had seen to her great grandmother.
She didn't like the fact that a sexy demon was after her airen. But she
knew that she didn't have the experience with the supernatural that her
granny did.
'Must get to Nekohaten as fast as can.' The cat thought as she ran.
Author's Notes:
I have started the rewrite of one of my first fics. I have been wanting
to do this for a while. First off I have been wanting to remove the sub-
plot of Jedah using Ki and darkstalker energy to gain greater power. I
just couldn't use him as a major villain. At least that the time. The
villain that I did use for effect was Demetri, who seems to work out
better.
Also there is a small change that I have made in this fic that would
allow Ranma to gain the power of a darkstalker in one degree or another.
Of course, many people hate the power up of Ranma as this usually creates
a Ranma God. I will try to limit this by trying to make him work for his
power. Plus he might be the only darkstalker as was seen in the first
Succubus' Kiss.
Then there was the idea of removing Akane as the love interest in addition
to Morrigan. It know there are plenty of Akane/Ranma romances and thought
that it might be nice to use another character. Especially if this
character might be merged with a certain innocent Succubi. The top
two contenders are Shampoo and Kasumi as that seems to be what the people
at my Yahoo site seems to prefer with Kasumi ahead of Shampoo.
If you have an opinion about this revamp of my story or the ideas that
have been suggested above, please write me. Just remember to use Succubus'
Kiss in the subject bar if you e-mail me. Thanks.
by the work of Takahashi Rumiko and
Capcom. All characters (that I have
not created or borrowed from other
sources) belong to her. This is a
fan fiction, and is not intended
to violate the rights of those who
hold control over the Ranma and the
Darkstalker series. I have no money
for legal problems and would very much
appreciate it if no one tries to sue
me. Thank you very much.
Succubus' Kiss
HVulpes
Chapter One: Going to be Some Trouble...
Ranma sat in the moonlight as he thought about the day once again. Akane
had just broken the engagement once again after a stressful day with the
other girls after Ranma. The fact was that Ranma was kinda glad that she
had broken off the whole agreement. He just didn't want to marry any of the
girls.
It wasn't that they weren't attractive. They were all beautiful women that
any man would kill to date. He just didn't feel right about marriage right
now. What with the curse, the rivals, the confusion of his whole life. But
it was also something else. Something deeper. Like a piece of him was
missing.
Ranma had felt this way ever since he headed off to train when he was
five. 'Not quite back. Some happened early in the trip. Something that
felt important. It has to do with that green haired girl.' Ranma thought as
his memory flared to life.
He remembered meeting this strange little girl in the forest that was
being by this strange monster cat. Fortunately for this girl, she had met
him before he had developed his fear of cats. Looking at this damsel in
distress, Ranma acted on instinct. As she fell helpless, Ranma jumped and
kicked at cat that was hunting her. It pushed back for a moment. Before
turning to Ranma.
A hideous snarling face turned to him with a mouthful of natural daggers.
Ranma got nervous as the first touches a life-long fear appeared. Sabre
like swung at him, missing him by inches. Ranma backed up, only to hit a
tree. He closed his eyes waiting for the deadly strike.
He heard a sound like a knife cutting flesh, only louder. Then he felt hot
blood hit him. he was dying. But he faced it bravely, like his samurai
ancestors. Only he heard laughing. Opening his eyes, he saw a girl his
age standing before him. Behind her was the corpse of the dead cat.
Turned out that her name was Morrigan and she had been suddenly attacks
by the cat. It scared her so much that she ran, forgetting that she had
the power to slay the beast. Ranma asked, "Are you a martial artist?"
Morrigan smiled at this and said, "Of some type." Ranma then thanked her
for his rescue. He was about to give her a kiss on the cheek as thanks as
his mother had told him. Only to have her move and the kiss land on her
lips.
It seemed to go on for hours as he felt energy flow in him and out of him
with that kiss. It would be a kiss that he would remember always and ever
kiss after that was compared to that kiss. Then it stopped and Morrigan
look a little frighten. She then ran into the woods.
Ranma tried to chase after her. Only to find that she seemed to have
disappeared. Ranma searched for a couple hours before he was found by
his father and taken away from the wood.
Still the memory remained. And at times like this he was wondering where
it was that Morrigan was at this time.
Meanwhile in the Makai Realm...
Morrigan Aensland read through the notes that her father had written on
the magic mirror of Anustes. The mirror that had sent her centuries ago
into the present. Where she had met her beloved. Ranma Saotome. Ever since
the kiss.
'It was a rare, deep and powerful magic that binds our souls together.
The unknown kiss of an innocent hold great power over a young succubus.
It can grant her greater powers while giving her deeper responsibilities.'
Morrigan thought as she turned to the orb that was sitting next to the
book on the desk.
She felt her heart tug as she looked at the orb. "Quiet Lilith. We will
soon find the love of my life." She told the fragment of herself that was
closest to her innocence. She moved a hand over the crystal to have it
light the location and the history of Ranma. She needed to know what to do
next, so that their happiness could be.
In moments, a lifetime of events passed. She saw the life of her beloved
and soon developed a dislike for the man who raised him. 'That fool! How
dare he treat his son like that. I swear that man must be part demon.' A
redness cross her face as her rage build.
'Plus all of those engagements that he placed on him. That really brings
my blood to a boil. Of course some of those ladies are not bad. Misguided
but not bad. The one named Akane, however, has me totally discussed with
her behaviour. My Ranma has been nothing but noble to her and she treats
him like a lowly dog.' Morrigan pouted as she looked at things at the
Tendo home.
'I would have been willing to let him have his life if it had been happy.
A connection to me might cause major trouble to his life. But to have so
many troubles connected to his life, I feel that I have to act.' Hiding
a sly smile that told lie to this idea. She had a hunger to be with this
man.
She took to the wing. Flying up and over to another mirror. Another portal
to the mortal world. She had prepared for her leave by appoint those who
would hold her kingdom while she was on her mission. Flying through the
portal into the world of humans.
Meanwhile, in a Castle in Europe...
Demetri sat on his throne as he watched for a sign of something he could
use to boost his power. He was a master Vampire who could work in the
daylight by blocking the dreaded sun. Yet he was an outlaw lord, banished
from the land of Makai due to the power of the lords of that land. The
major player being the Aensland clan.
'A clan that is lead by a mere woman. One who should be under my thumb.
Knowing her place as a consort or concubine in my kingdom of Makai. But
she blocks me with her greater power.' Demetri frowned as he held up his
cup holding a red liquid.
Then he felt it. A portal that was opening from Makai to this world. From
the power of the figure that was coming out of that portal, it could only
be one person. That brought his mind to thinking. 'What in the world could
that spoilt princess what with this world? Is she on a simple hunt for the
materials that are rare in the demon world, but plentiful here? Or could
she be after something else?'
Demetri rose and looked in the direction that he had felt the Queen of
Makai had appeared. It was in the east. He would need to consult his
minions to pin point the exact location of the entrance point. That would
give him the succubus. His mouth smiled as fangs emerged from them. 'If
I was to drink of that female's blood, my power would grow as great as
hers.'
'Plus what ever it is that she is interested in, could give me an edge
over her. One that I can use to bend her to my will and to take that
tempting drink.' He looked at his cup and imagined that it was succubi
blood instead of the blood that he milked out of the peasants that
surrounded his domains. He moved it to his lips and drank deeply from
the goblet. 'Victory will soon be mine.'
Meanwhile in Nerima...
Cologne and Happosai could feel the change in the balance surrounding the
district. A coming of great power that could only mean one thing.
Darkstalkers, the warriors of the night. They knew that those who lived
in the night could have good points and bad points. Be great allies or the
bitterest of enemies. Each reacted in their own special way.
Happosai started to practise his stealth abilities. Skills that he would
need for his dreams if he was fortunate. While many Darkstalkers are male
and repulsive, there is also the females who could be quite sexy. And
generous of breast. 'Perfect for an old man to rest his lonely head in.'
Happosai thought as he smiled. "SWEETO!"
Happosai moved so that he could begin the groping of these dangerous
women. The hardest, yet most satifing of all was that of the succubi.
They feed on lust that emerged as a psychic fluid from men and women.
With lust being one of the sources of his power, Happi had to be warey.
But the energy from groping one could power him for years! It was high
risk for high profit.
Perfect for someone who can't resist a challenge.
Cologne was preparing for a cautious approach to demons that were heading
to town. 'It's no doubt connected to son-in-law in some manner. Everything
that has happened since his coming to this district had involved
son-in-law. But how could he be connected to the world of Makai?' Cologne
asked herself.
She gathered what tools that she could for a possible attack. She also
pulled out the scrolls that had contained the information the tribe had
gathered on the Dark Ones. The tribe had learnt the hard way that it is
best to prepare for anything with those from Makai.
'I will have to inform Shampoo and Mr. Part-time about this and the
actions that we will have to take to protect ourselves and son-in-law.'
Cologne thought. 'We will have to keep a close eye on son-in-law. What
ever is coming will be centred on him.'
The next morning at the Tendo home...
It was bright and early. The Saotomes were fighting in the yard as Nabiki
tried to sleep in. Akane was cracking bricks in the dojo while her father
read the paper in the dinning room. So it was Kasumi that heard the
knocking at the door. She went to it and answered it.
On the other end of the door was an attractive woman of her age that was
dress in a manner that bordered on the casual and the seductive. A white
blouse that was solid, yet seem to enhance her curves. Black jeans that
were tight on her long legs. A fine hand moved to her head to toss a strand
of light green hair off her face.
"Hello, is Ranma home? I am a friend of from a long time ago. I just
wanted to see how he is doing." She said, looking into the Tendo home.
It was then that Soun came to the door to look at who it was at the door.
The fact that it was the front door and not the rear made him believe that
it wasn't a challenge. 'I hope it isn't another woman trying to steal my
little girl's fiance.' When he saw Morrigan, he leaped to that conclusion.
"Listen, young lady, Ranma is not going to marry you. He is already
promised to my little girl. No matter what dowery that you claim that has
been given, he is not available! So go away, now!" Soun said, trying to
force her to leave.
Morrigan's eyes seemed to flash, but only for a split second. "Now,now.
Mister...."
"Tendo." Replied Soun.
"Mr. Tendo. I have been looking for my friend Ranma. He helped rescue me
when I was younger, so I felt that I owed him a thank you. I have not been
pledged to marry him. But I would feel proud to be given that honour.
Besides no matter what you have said, it is his choice what his future
holds. He does not deserve to have his future forced on him." Morrigan
said, her voice taking on a freezing effect.
Behind Soun, the rest of the Tendo family had gathered. Nabiki and Akane
had been attracted by the yelling of their father. From the tone, they knew
that it wasn't good.
Akane looked at the woman, her face turned to anger and distaste. She
moved so that she was in front of her father and sister. "Listen, you
floozy, you can just get lost."
Morrigan stared at the woman that was in front of her. "Are you
threatening me?" Her eyes narrowing.
Akane narrowed her eyes as well. The fact that she was int erupted by the
appearance of the boy in question. "Morrigan? Is that you?" Ranma said as
he rushed up and hugged the young woman that appeared at the door. He then
brought her in. Akane's eyes took on a deadly glare.
Without a second thought, Akane yelled out, "Ranma no Baka!" She picked up
a nearby statue and then tried to bean Ranma with it. Only to be stopped by
something. A black object that seemed to flowed to the back of woman that
was standing next to Ranma.
The clothing that she had been wearing was now on the floor in shreds. The
woman was now wearing a black leotard with a heart cutout below her ample
breasts. She wore sleeves on her arms that connect to the leotard with
lace, just above the elbow.Leggings that were connected to the leotard,
purple with black bats on them. She ended it with black ankle boots with
narrow heels.
It became clear that the black object that connected to Morrigan's back
was a bat-like wing, ones that matched the ones on top of her head in
between her green hair. With a force, the wing forced back the statue.
Throwing out of her hands. Then with unbelievable speed, Morrigan was in
the personal space of the youngest Tendo.
A hand lifted the head of the Tendo girl. Akane was shaking as she looked
into the eyes of the strange woman. "Now that wasn't nice? Why were you
going hit my friend with that thing?" Morrigan's voice was soft as velvet
but as firm as iron.
"He's a pervert. Having hussies like you after him!" Trying prove that she
wasn't afraid of this woman.
"Having girls chasing after you is not being a pervert. Plus there is not
anything wrong with being a pervert. So stop punishing people for not
living Prudish life that you choose or else I might have to spank you."
Morrigan said, a naughty smile crossing her face.
Morrigan then stepped away and turned to look at the group that had
gather. Most of them were staring at her. "I guess that I'm going to have
to explain." Morrigan sighed like she was bored and looked for a place for
them to sit and talk.
Later...
Morrigan explained who she was and the events that had brought her here.
"So you see when Ranma gave me that kiss in that circumstance, it caused
a mystical exchange of fragments of our souls. Bonding us in a manner."
"So you're telling us that your some type of sex demon that is the queen
of a hell world that just happens to be a soulmate to Ranma." Akane said,
not looking like she believed it. "Bullshit!"
"Akane, I know that this is hard to believe..." Nabiki said, as she
realized this could be true from the other events of Ranma's life.
"Obviously this demon wants to suck Ranma soul out and feast on his manly
nature." Genma said moving between Ranma and Morrigan.
"Yes, that makes perfect sense! Retreat Demon! We will not allow you to
fulfil your evil mission."
"I don't think that Morrigan is going to hurt me. You're both
overreacting. So she some kind of demon, that doesn't automatically
make her a bad person." Ranma said trying to defuse the situation. But that
seems to have the effect of making things worse.
"Pervert! I bet that you're just hoping to hop on her and do something
perverted with her." Akane said, as he anger rose.
"The boy has been bewitched by the demoness already. We must defeat her
so that her mental hold over the boy can be released. To protect the honour
of our families." Genma said.
"For the honour of our families." Soun said as the two of them tried to
launch and attack on Morrigan. Only to be stopped by the movement of her
wings wrapping around them. She then launched them to the back of the room.
When they hit the wall they were knocked out.
"I guess that I am not wanted around here. So I'll leave... for now. But
I will be back to tell Ranma where my new place is. I plan on staying in
the area until I can speak to my friend." Morrigan said as she walked to
the door. Once outside she took to the air.
Akane then glared at Ranma with an extremely dirty look. One that seem to
tell him that this was all his fault. Before she left for her room.
Ranma didn't know what to think at the moment. But he knew that he didn't
like the actions of his father and Mr. Tendo jumping on Morrigan just for
being who she was. Akane's anger problems was not endearing her to him
either. But the fact that Morrigan had tried to protect him and seemed to
be acting defensively agains two skilled opponents did seem to interest
him.
'I hope that I can see her again.' He thought. 'If only to talk to her
and apologies for the behaviour of my family and my "fiancee".'
Meanwhile, a small pinkish cat crawled out from behind her hiding place
as she headed home to report what she had seen to her great grandmother.
She didn't like the fact that a sexy demon was after her airen. But she
knew that she didn't have the experience with the supernatural that her
granny did.
'Must get to Nekohaten as fast as can.' The cat thought as she ran.
Author's Notes:
I have started the rewrite of one of my first fics. I have been wanting
to do this for a while. First off I have been wanting to remove the sub-
plot of Jedah using Ki and darkstalker energy to gain greater power. I
just couldn't use him as a major villain. At least that the time. The
villain that I did use for effect was Demetri, who seems to work out
better.
Also there is a small change that I have made in this fic that would
allow Ranma to gain the power of a darkstalker in one degree or another.
Of course, many people hate the power up of Ranma as this usually creates
a Ranma God. I will try to limit this by trying to make him work for his
power. Plus he might be the only darkstalker as was seen in the first
Succubus' Kiss.
Then there was the idea of removing Akane as the love interest in addition
to Morrigan. It know there are plenty of Akane/Ranma romances and thought
that it might be nice to use another character. Especially if this
character might be merged with a certain innocent Succubi. The top
two contenders are Shampoo and Kasumi as that seems to be what the people
at my Yahoo site seems to prefer with Kasumi ahead of Shampoo.
If you have an opinion about this revamp of my story or the ideas that
have been suggested above, please write me. Just remember to use Succubus'
Kiss in the subject bar if you e-mail me. Thanks.