| "Succubus' Kiss" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: 117 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 00:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
This story has its good point rather than just the 'boy meets girl, boy makes love with girl story'. A bond between Ranma and Morrigan from childhood. You seemed to have outlined potential situations quite well with how the Nerima Wrecking Crew are taking it as well as other problems on the horizon that have yet to show up ... such as Dimitri and the Queen Bee. Keep up the suspense and the story will be outstanding. Please continue ... I would hate to see this fic die ... before it has even grown.
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Reviewed By: Metal Marco On: December 27, 2006 13:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this crossover that you done. I can't wait fow more chapters. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Zen-Aku On: August 25, 2006 23:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
About time you updated, this is a really good story. Why don't you make it a Ranam/Morrigan/Lilith/Hinako story?
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: blackshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep on goin i like!
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Title: Nice Beginning
Reviewed By: DrewB1442 On: May 21, 2006 21:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Try to write another chapter. I'd read it.
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