Yu-Gi-Oh! Fan Fiction ❯ Insert Cool Yu-Gi-Oh! Related Title ❯ Chapter Twenty-one: From Dog to Puppy ( Chapter 21 )

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No, I don't own any Yu-Gi-Oh! related mulargh. If I did, YuGiOh! The Movie wouldn't have sucked. And it would have been about Bakura, not all those other people no one really gives a damn about.


//Are the yami mentally speaking to their hikari.//
/Are the hikari mentally speaking to their yami./
And Italics are thoughts.


Chapter Twenty-one: From Dog to Puppy


I'm set. I'm determined. I'm ready. And before the day is out, I will make Kaiba my friend!

Jounouchi gritted his teeth and took a few steps in the said boys direction. He hauled a huge garbage bag behind his back.

Of course this isn't exactly prime real estate to do that in, heh.

The blond sweat dropped as he dumped his load next to the other boy, who looked about ready to kill the very next thing that so much as spoke a word or even looked at him.

"Community service sucks, huh?" Jounouchi grinned and took a few precautionary steps back, placing the large bag of garbage between themselves.

Just in case, you know. Never can be too careful.

Of course, Kaiba glared. "And I have you to thank for it," he basically spat out with venomous sarcasm dripping.

If looks could kill, Jounouchi would have been battling a very large and evil looking "look" to the death, but instead he was grinning like an idiot. "Well, we only have one more area to pick up, then we're done! I mean, it's not to bad, you know… The company's not too bad either."

Kaiba glared again, as he was accustomed to, but the phrase `the company's not too bad either,' suddenly finished filtering through his brain and he furrowed his eyebrows in shock.

What?! He couldn't possibly mean me?

Jounouchi didn't catch the look of surprise or evident confusion that passed through the brunettes face. He had turned away before hand and was busy trying to not draw attention to himself.

Idiot! I shouldn't have said that! He'll get suspicious! I gotta change the topic now! Um, um!

"So, nice weather we're having, huh?"

Kaiba looked even more perplexed.

OK, something suspicious is going on here.

"No."

Jounouchi sighed.

This offhanded crap ain't gonna work with Kaiba. He's to sharp for it. Guess I should just come clean; stop beating around the bush and all. Who knows, it just might work. Wait! So, you're gonna tell him you like him!?! What?! Hell no! I don't feel like dieing today! No! I'm just gonna be more… Well, myself. I mean… Maybe, Kaiba might like me? You know, for who I am?

Kaiba frowned. He had noticed that ever since detention had been let out, the blond had been acting freakishly peculiar around him.

Acting… Nice? And damn weird. What's his problem?! I can't figure it out! Actually, ever since this morning… And yesterday… And… Wait… How long has the mutt been like this? Why the hell am I just noticing this now?

"Hey, Kaiba?"

"What?!" the cold CEO basically growled. Jounouchi flinched and immediately Kaiba regretted his tone of voice. "What?" he asked more calmly.

Jounouchi hesitated and Kaiba noticed, but he spoke anyways. "You don't have lots of friends, Kaiba."

There were no if's, and's or but's about it. It had been a truthful statement, not a question. Still, it made the brown haired boy shift uncomfortably. And he didn't know why.

"Actually, I don't think you really have any. Any at all," the blond continued, still not looking up at the standing boy. He simply pretended to busy himself fiddling with the large bag of trash he had collected from around the school grounds.

"So?" Kaiba asked folding his arms, become rather irate and aggravated.

Who the hell does he think he is, to speak to me so frankly?!

"Well, I was thinking-"

"Oh?" Kaiba suddenly mused. "So you think now? I was unaware that dogs were evolved enough to do so."

Jounouchi swallowed the lump in his throat and looked up at the smirking jerk. His eyes were slanted and he was obviously ticked off. "Yeah, I do think," he defied Kaiba's insult with his own low and steady growl; his voice just above a menacing whisper. "And I was thinking that maybe you might want one."

"Want one?" the CEO asked, a toxic smirk infecting his face. "Why the hell would I want one?! So he can stab me in the back?! Like they always do?!" A flash of unrepressed anger surged through Kaiba's voice. Jounouchi noticed the split second or fear, confusion and anger that came along with it.

"Kaiba..?"

Is that why? Is that why he has no friends?! Does he keep them away from himself because he's been hurt before?! He's afraid of being hurt again?! Is he just afraid!?! The great Kaiba Seto has no friends because he's afraid of being betrayed?!?!

"Kaiba! I'll never betray you!!!" the blond screamed out. As soon as the words left his lips his hands clamped over them as he stared up, his features frozen in a complete state of shock.

Oh, God! I can't believe I just said that!!

Kaiba, as well, shared the same expression of absolute surprise and shock.

What?!

"I mean…" Jounouchi tried to cover. "I mean, I… I'd like to be your friend. Kaiba. If you`d let me, that is."

The brunette blinked the surprise away and turned his head. He snorted. "I told you, I have no need for friends."

Jounouchi suddenly grew more bold. "And I told you I won't betray you."

Kaiba turned back astounded. He glared.

What the hell is up with him?! Why is he-?! After all the crap I've done to-?! He can't seriously-?!

"What the hell is your problem, mutt?! Do you seriously expect me to believe you?! Do you think I'm an idiot!?!"

"Kaiba, I-"

"Shut-up! You can go to hell, for all I care! I don't need friends. I don`t care about anyone. I don't give a damn about anyone! Why the hell would I ever think that anyone will ever give a damn about me?! No one ever has! No one ever will! So-" Kaiba stopped his raving. He was looming over Jounouchi who had scooted away while the other boy had grown closer. The blond now looked up into sorrow filled blue eyes clouded with hate and distrust. If Kaiba wanted to, he could easily kick him in the side, or worse. The boy held all the power right now.

Kaiba looked down at the wide eyed boy beneath him. The small blond was laying on his back, the stench of fear emanating off of his body intoxicating the air with his delicious fragrance. Kaiba sighed. Although he normally relished that smell from his business associates and even more from his rivals and enemies, he simply didn't like that noxious smell coming from Jounouchi. It lingered in his mouth like bad wine, and made him want to spit.

He's not lying. I know he's not.

Years of dealing with the world's greatest business scum had given the brown haired CEO an almost supernatural and uncanny ability to see through people's lies and deceits. But Jounouchi read as clear as an open book with very large text.

So what's he doing? What's his plan? Why is he trying so desperately hard to… Be my friend? God… Why? Heaven knows… I'm not worth it.

Jounouchi saw the taller boy step away and turn his back to him. He walked away.

What..? Why did…?

"Wait!" Jounouchi called out, no longer thinking or planning ahead, simply reacting on gut instinct. Perhaps his greatest flaw, and best attribute.

He never really was good at that.

Kaiba thought.

Always jumping straight into the fire. Never bothering to look where he might land. Never thinking with his head...

A shadow crossed his face.

Always thinking with his heart…

"Kaiba! Wait!" Jounouchi bounded up to the other boy, stopping a few feet away. "I'm serious Kaiba. I'm not joking."

An awkward pause followed. "I know."

The small statement surprised Jounouchi. "Um..? Really? Then… Well, so, then, we can be friends?"

Kaiba turned around to stare into the face of the one that just seconds ago had been cowering in fear of him. Now he was smiling, although the look of determination was saturated into every pore of that smile.

How can he say that with… As though he has no care in the world?

"Why do you want to be my friend?" Kaiba finally asked, completely baffled.

Jounouchi shrugged and grinned. "Well… You look like you could use one."

And for once, Kaiba was left completely speechless.

* * * * * * * * * *

"Oi! Yugi!" Anzu waived at her friend. Yugi smiled and waived back as he made his way towards his group of friends.

It was a delicious crisp morning, which was rather unusual, considering summer had just ended a few weeks ago.

"Ooh!" Anzu shivered. "Guess fall's coming a bit earlier this year, huh?"

"Guess so," Honda agreed.

Students milled around the school's entrance, talking with their respective friends and causing all sorts of random chaos.

"Hi, Anzu, Honda, Ryou, um…" Yugi looked around. "Is Jounouchi-kun not here?"

"Not that I've seen," the brown spike haired boy answered.

Yugi looked worried but Ryou calmed him down. "He showed up to detention late yesterday, but he looked…"

//Are you gonna tell them?// Bakura secretly asked his light.

Ryou debated it. /Not yet./

"He looked fine," the white haired kid finished.

Yugi sighed. "That's good. Then, I wonder were he is."

Honda shrugged, "Just late to school probably. He's always getting up late, you know."

"Sheesh! Thanks for your never ending trust," Jounouchi grinned as he stepped up to the group of gathered students.

"Jounouchi-kun!" Yugi smiled. "You do look better! Had a good night of sleep?"

"Actually, yes," the blond chuckled. "Best I've had in a while!"

"It's good to see you looking so happy, Jounouchi!" Anzu clasped her hands together.

"Hmm.." Honda mock stroked his imaginary beard. "Almost too happy, if you ask me." He squinted his eyes at the blond.

Jounouchi sweat dropped and backed away. "What?"

"OK! Spit it out! Who is it!?" the crew cut boy accused the blond.

"Huh?!"

"Don't act dumb! I know that look!" Honda grinned mischievously. "So fess up. Who's the chick, eh?! Is it some girl in your new class, huh, huh? Is it!?"

"Uh…" Jounouchi sweat dropped again.

Yugi laughed. "Is it true, Jounouchi-kun? Do you like someone?! Is that why you've been acting kinda weird these last few days?"

"Uh, well…"

"Of course it is!" Honda cut in. "Love does crazy stuff to ya'! Doesn't it, Jou-kun?" Honda gave Jounouchi a coquettish wink, which made the blond blush in embarrassment, and made everyone else laugh out loud.

/See, Yami! I told you Jounouchi-kun liked someone!/

//So it seems,// Yami softly chuckled.

"So out with it! Who is it! You can tell us, buddy!" Honda continued, now holding the blond in a restrictive head lock.

"Oh, Jounouchi! This is wonderful! You better treat her right, not like that big oaf friend of yours," Anzu giggled.

"Hey!" Honda quirked up. "You better not be referring to me!"

Everyone laughed. Even Jounouchi, who had managed to escape Honda.

//Oh, gods! I think I'm gonna throw up. Let me tell them he's got the hots for Kaiba already!//

/Bakura!/ Ryou chastised, although he inwardly grinned.

"So? Really, now. Who is it, you ol' dog, you?!" Honda laughed again.

Jounouchi blushed again at the reference to him being a 'dog.'

Kaiba calls me that…

The blond looked up and noticed the expectant looks from all his friends.

Damn! How did they all find out!? Ack! Stupid Honda and his big mouth! Oh! What am I gonna do!? Ah, why am I so worked up?! It's not like I got me a boyfriend or anything!

Jounouchi blushed again.

Hell! I just made a friend! That's it! I swear!

"I, uh… Um… Oh, my God!! What's THAT!?!?!" Jounouchi yelled, pointing wildly behind the group.

"Huh?!" everyone turned around.

"What?" Honda asked.

"I don't see anything," Anzu added.

"What are you referring to Jounouchi-kun?" Yugi scratched his head.

//Oh, gods! They are such idiots!!/ Bakura busted out laughing, as he fell to the floor. //I can't believe they fell for that!//

Ryou smiled as he saw Jounouchi hightail it out of the general vicinity.

//Aibou, Jounouchi is gone,// Yami sweat dropped.

"Huh?" Yugi turned around. "Where'd he go?"

"Eh?" Anzu asked.

"Ha! That just proves it!" Honda declared. "Jounouchi has found himself a little someone! And as his best friend, it is my sworn and rightful duty to snoop around and figure out who it is!"

Yami ignored the squabble that Honda suddenly found himself in as Anzu proclaimed Jounouchi's right to a secret love affair or something along those lines. His attention was instead turned to Bakura, who had manifested himself next to his hikari's side.

//Tomb Robber.//

//Pharaoh.//

Ryou looked at Yugi who looked equally as nervous as himself.

//Any specific reason why you're on the floor with that disgusting smug grin on your face?// Yami asked crossing his arms.

Bakura's grin widened as Ryou's eyes did the same. He chuckled. //Don't worry, hikari. I won't tell.//

Ryou sighed as Yami raised an eyebrow. //Won't tell what?// he asked again.

//Oh, nothing much. Just that I happen to know who Jounouchi's love interest is, that's all,// Bakura said and disappeared.

//What?!// Yami blinked. //Bakura get back here! Bakura!?//

Ryou was left grinning weakly under the intense scrutiny of Yami's eyes. //You know too, don't you?!//

/Uh… Damned it, Bakura!/ "Well, gee! Look at the time! I should go to class now, and all, ja!" Ryou grabbed his book bag and ran.

"Wait! Ryou!" Yugi called after him.

"Where's he off to in such a hurry?" Honda walked up to Yugi. "And Jounouchi too? Am I missing something here?" He scratched his head.

Yugi just sighed. /This is confusing./

* * * * * * * * * *

Whew. That was close. Hm… I'm gonna have to come up with something to tell those guys or else they're gonna hound me till I crack. Especially Honda. Agk! What am I gonna do?

"What's your problem?"

"Huh?" Jounouchi looked up to find Kaiba leaning against the school building wall. His trench coat lightly billowing in the cool breeze that also took a few stray hair strands for a wild ride, as he gazed almost menacingly with deep piercing blue eyes.

Wow, he looks cool!

"Nothing."

"You're lying."

Jounouchi smiled. "Actually yeah, I am." He grinned and trotted up to Kaiba. "It's nothing much. Yugi, Honda and Anzu are just… Heh, being pushy, I guess."

Kaiba quirked an eye.

Jounouchi continued. "They're convinced that I got me a secret girlfriend!"

Kaiba didn't physically react to that, but he did ask, "Do you?"

"What?! No! I mean… No. Um. I don't have time for that, you know."


Kaiba didn't say anything.

"So…? What are you doing out here?" Jounouchi asked after an awkward lapse in time. He leaned against the wall next to Kaiba, staring into the sky wondering what Kaiba had been looking at.

"Nothing."

"You're lying," Jounouchi grinned even more.

Kaiba snorted. But found himself smiling anyways. "I guess I am."

* * * * * * * * * *

"I wonder who it could be!" Anzu squealed. "I bet she's pretty!"

"I bet she's not," Honda remarked.

"Honda!" Anzu yelled at him.

"Well, what?! Why else would he keep her a secret?! I bet she's a hideous nerd or something!" the brown haired boy's voice boomed.

Anzu put her hands on her hips and deadpanned. "A hideous nerd? In D-12?"

Honda thought about that. "Hm? You got a point. OK, a hideous moron!"

"Sorry, Honda," Anzu smirked. "But he isn't dating you!"

"What?!" Honda near retched.

Yugi laughed. "Come on now. I'm sure she's a very nice girl."

"I agree," Anzu agreeably agreed. "If Jounouchi likes her then she must be nice!"

"Yeah, I know," Honda laughed, then grew serious. "Still, though. Why would he try and keep her a secret from us?"

"Hm… I don't know," Anzu shrugged as they entered their classroom. "But, eventually he'll have to tell us about her, right?"

"Eventually," Honda sighed and went to his seat.

Yugi turned to look at Ryou who was busy reading his book and pretending not to notice that the others had entered the classroom. //Aibou?//

/I know, Yami. We'll talk to him after class,/ Yugi assured his yami.

//He knows something.//

/Yeah, but what?/

* * * * * * * * * *

Jounouchi sighed and looked at the clock one more time.

Argh… Two minutes?! Only two minutes have passed?! Agh! Stupid time! Go faster! Faster!

"Stop fidgeting so much," Kaiba growled at Jounouchi.

The blonde's head dropped to his desk. "But this is taking forever!"

"What is?"

"Class is!"

Kaiba snorted. "You're not even making an effort to pay attention."

Jounouchi grinned and looked at the boy sitting next to him in the back of D-12's room. "Neither are you."

"That's because I'm a genius that already knows everything. You, on the other hand, are not."

Jounouchi sighed, but kept his grin.

Hey, he didn't insult me! Um… Well, sort of.

"Well, why don't you tutor me!?"

Kaiba almost laughed out loud, drawing the random attention of a few of the other students in the class. He composed himself. "I don't have time to pointlessly waste my valuable afternoons on a hopeless idiot inbred mongrel like yourself."

"Ow. That one almost hurt, Kaiba," the blond laughed.

Kaiba didn't know whether to be aggravated at the lack of effect his insults now had on the other boy, or to be amused at the fact that his insults now seemed to have no effect on the other boy at all except perhaps for a random laugh. He chose to smirk instead, running with the flow of good humor that was now currently shared between the two.

"I'm serious though. I mean, you do nothing except read that stupid black book of yours during lunch, and I do nothing except… Do nothing, so why don't we get together during lunch and you can, like, I don't know, teach me… Stuff. From class. And stuff." Jounouchi swallowed. His heart was pounding.

I can't believe I just asked him this!

Kaiba narrowed his eyes and turned to glare at the blond. His brows were furrowed.

Jounouchi became increasingly nervous. "What?"

"How do you know that I read a `little black book' during lunch?"

Oh, crap!

"Uh… I was guessing?"

Kaiba quirked an eyebrow, obviously not believing him.

No, of course he wouldn't!

"Actually, I happened to see you there, yesterday. Reading. Under that tree. Um, the one near the bleachers."

"I know where I read," Kaiba snapped, then inwardly smirked. "Were you spying on me?" he asked slowly, pronouncing every word.

Yes!

"No! I was…" Jounouchi gulped. He couldn't lie. Kaiba would know. "I was just lying there, `cause I was, you know, tired, and I happened to see you. That's all." Kaiba continued to stare at the blond. Jounouchi bit his lip and grinned, trying to play it off. "Sheesh, Kaiba. You don't have to be so damn paranoid."

Kaiba made his characteristic `humph' sound and looked away. Jounouchi had learnt in his small time with Kaiba that that meant that the subject had been dropped.

Whew! Man, was that close!

Jounouchi almost jumped in his seat as he heard the bell ring. "Alright! Food!" he turned to hear Kaiba laugh a little.

"How easily you're indulged with the most quintessential form of bribery."

Jounouchi scratched his head, and shrugged. "I like food."

Kaiba actually laughed.

He's so… Innocent. Like a dog, almost. Hm.. No, more like a little puppy…

Kaiba smiled. "Alright, puppy. You can follow me to my tree if you want." He got up and walked out of the classroom.

Jounouchi had to sit back down in his chair.

Did… Did he just call me `puppy`?


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Yoh! Long time no write! Gooooomeeen!!! *sigh* Past month's been hectic. Finals in school, Chibicon, that other stuff that I had to do that I can't remember anymore, and now, the upcoming A-kon! Ah! And let's not forget my severe case of acute laziness! Heh. Anyone else going to A-kon? It's gonna be kick ass! I promise many awesome pictures! Oh, such a long time has elapsed since the last update (three weeks? four weeks?) that I've actually forgotten some of the really cool ideas that some of ya'll gave me. I'm so sad! Like Al, I remember it was really funny the idea I got from you, but… Oh!! I remember now! Heh, heh. Oh, that is funny! I'm going to go write it down! Oh, that's great… Hopefully, I'll remember the rest of the ideas, but enough about that stuff, on to the reviews, part of a daily balanced diet.

Mooselini McSqueegee
Pixie Sticks are crack you say? Well, suddenly it all makes perfect sense… *spirit fingers!* Heh, heh. And your awesome-o-powa name attests to your weirdness, but who ever said weirdness was bad, ne! I like it. You like it! That person over there likes it! We all like it! And I'm jacked up on Houston air, so, I'm not sure if the computer monitor is laughing at me, or if that's just my screen saver, so… Yeeeeah….

JG-chan
NO! A-hahahahahaha!!!!! I'ms goings to drags this ons tills it can'ts be draggeds no mores!!! Hahahahahaha!!!!! Actually, I know what you mean… *sweat drop* Even I didn't think it was gonna go on for this long with out the pointlessly gratuitous yaoi lemon scene, heh. But… I don't want this to degenerate into one of those, `lemon scenes added here for the sake of fan service' type of fics. Now, don't get me wrong, I love those kinds of fics, but I don't feel like writing one. Not yet anyways. After all, only 5 days have passed since chapter 1 *BIG sweat drop* It's slowly making its way there though. Soon, lemon scenes shall abound! That I can easily promise!

Velvetina
Haha, posh, eh? No, I'm from the USA. Texas, actually. The south. The deep south. If I drive four hours even more south I hit Mexico! Oddly enough though, I've been accused of sounding like I'm from Britain. *shrugs* Who the hell knows where I got /that/ accent from. Ah, I just love using words like 'reckon' and 'yonder' and 'hither'. Oh! And 'ya'll', of course, which I think I might have added into a few of the chapters, heh. Go colloquialism! "Ya' git yonder to hither school, now, ya'll hear?" A-hahaha!! Ah… Crazy southern accents. I loves them. Ah, yes, the sexual tension. What can I say, I'm a tease, and I write like one too! (Gomen ne JG-chan!!) Oh! Oh! I agree! The cute nicknames that they have for each other! Hee-hee! Thanks for the idea! I added it into this chapter and now, Kaiba will call Jounouchi 'puppy' and 'mutt' every now and then! Ariiiigatooo!!
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Sakiyama
*nods* Yup! Expect it! Kaiba and Jou will end up together, why? `Cause I likes it that ways toos!! And, actually, ironically enough, I'm toying with the idea of having /Yugi/ take care of Yami, if you know what I mean. Heh, heh. `Cause… It seems more fun that way. Oh, and… Um.. Uh… *cough* I uh… Kinda' did fail my English class. First time I've ever failed a class. Not that I regret it or anything. The teacher (ever wonder what happened to Santa after kids stopped believing in him? He became my English teacher) graded on a bell curve so, two or three people in the class were guaranteed to fail, regardless of what they did. Well, I didn't turn in ONE paper, and, hell, apparently that was enough to switch me into that group. But I don't blame the cynical, old, Santa. I take full responsibility and have no regrets!! Now, though, I gotta re-take the class during the summer, heh. Oh, well. Thanks for caring about my academic life, ne. `Cause I stopped caring a loooong time ago, heh, heh. *sweat drop*

Sakayora
Yup, screwdrivers are tricky things, alright. It's called Japanese Cheesecake, but, it's basically the same think as normal cheesecake. I really didn't see much of a difference. They both taste like heaven though! I did modify the recipe though, 'cause… I could. And I didn't fell like going to the store again. *sweat drop* So, basically, this is what you need: two package things of cream cheese (about 8 or 12 oz. each), about one fourth cup milk, a lemon, about half of a package of flavored jello, about 2 or 3 tablespoons of flavored yogurt, and um… Oh! And a sweet pie crust. The graham crackers kind is really good. You can add about one fourth cup of sugar, but… I didn't bother too, and it came out fine. So, you mix all the ingredients and pour it into the pie crust, then stick it in the refrigerator till it's cold and hard, and at-da! Cheesecake! Depending on what flavor you add, it comes out differently. I made mine strawberry flavored! Man, I love messing in the kitchen! Oh! Brilliant idea! I'm gonna make Bakura mess around in the kitchen too! Hee, hee! Thanks for the inspiration!

RyokoMink
Wow. Your reviews become even more non-senseical as time progresses! I applaud. *applauds* See, I applauded. Any who, yeah, I'm in the twenties. I feel so… Happy. Once I finish this arch of the fic, I'm heading straight to Kinko's to get my fic bound in a nice little book. *sigh* Then, I'll pass it around school! Ah… Hope the teacher doesn't take it up. That would be… odd. And not good. Like when, your *cough* yaoi encrusted *cough* French binder was looked at by Mr. Cheng. And Mr. Bates. And every kid that you've encountered at school. And at DNA Comics, and at the D&D sessions. And… *goes on and on*

Fallin Dark Angel
Oh, no! Is everything OK? What happened? Is Fallens Lovin Angel, good too? *sigh* The net can be a pretty messed up place sometimes. But it gots its up, no da. And yeah, Yami can be so oblivious sometimes. At least he's finally /starting/ to notice Yugi. *scoffs* Although, he's noticing everyone else first, heh.

SkrinkLaDo
What an interesting name. Heh, heh, yeah. All these are my favorite parings too. I've never seen you review before, but it's great whenever new people do! Even if they don't sign in, heh. *wink* Believe me, I think about a good 3/4th of MM.org never bothers to sign in to review. Meh. It's all good. Glad you like the fic so far! And gomen for not updating sooner. I'll really try hard to not let such a long time pass ever again with out updating, so thanks!

Al
Stuck? Huh? In what way? What do you mean by stuck? *confused too* I'm not sure what you mean by stuck, but I like the way that's said. Oh! I'll go to school and be all like, "So… You stuck?" and they'll be like, "Huh?" And I'll say, "You're stuck!" and they'll be like, "What?" And I'll come up with a thousand different variables for the word 'stuck', like, "My, gods! This test certainly is stuck." Haha! Oh, how amusing it will be! "And he was wearing a stuck color dress!" and "The weather looks rather stuck today." Wait, that one kinda' makes sense. *cough* Anyways, your name amuses me greatly. It's so plain. And only two letters long. Hell, you don't even capitalize it! I do though, hope you don't mind. I like going around and talking about my pal Al. And you gave me inspiration. Hence! You are cool. Which reminds me, where the heck did you get your name from?!

Zoey Hellmaster
I'll send it to you! Although… It's long. I'll zip it up and send it. Thanks! Ooh! How exciting! Back all those years ago, I never would have imagined that a fic of mine would be on your site. Eee! *looks around* Damned! No ones here for me to brag to. Hm, I'll find my brother later and make him look excited. I'll make him food while I talk. That'll keep him entertained! Whoo!

RyousGirl567
Ahh… A wheelie. Actually, those are /really/ hard to do on a bike. Considering that the damned bike weighs +280 lbs. And that's the small bikes! I'm getting a small bike 'cause I can't /move/ the big bikes. Hm… I guess if I go fast enough, I can pull it off… And fall and die, agk! Um, I'll just not, and say I did, heh, heh. Malik got a small bike. Oh! And now that I know how to ride, I see the old episodes and notice all the things wrong with the bike scenes, like when Malik rides with only one finger holding the handle instead of all his fingers, and how he rides off with out even shifting gears! And… Stupid stuff like that. I'm gonna stop talking now…. No, I'm not. Oh, a dream with Ryou!?! Lucky!! I've only day dreamt about him! And Bakura! And the other Egyptians. And Trunks for some reason. And it all takes place on the set of Dr. Quinn Medicine Woman…. OK, now I really am going to stop talking.

*+*+*Gemini*+*+*
Yay! The fic direction is liked! Whoo! *nod*nod* Yes, I plan on writing more chapters and getting the pace to go faster. Even I'm getting a little annoyed by the slowness of it, but I still like it you know. I'm glad ya'll people do to! Really, there is very little, aside from winning the lottery, that can make a fic author more happy than knowing that their fic is liked, so, thanks soooo much for telling me, over and over again. It's like crack (or pixie sticks). It's addicting!

*koumori wolf*
Ooh! Another new reviewer! Mans, I loves yous peoples! OK, here's another chapter for you to know what happens soooooo…. No dieing! At least not until you review again! At least. Heh. Here! So, who's your favorite pair, hm?

Sakiyama
Wow… You re-read the whole thing?! So far, you and a few others have done that too. And I'll admit, that's no easy task. The fics gotten freakin' huge! I printed it up, and at font 10, it was over 100 pages! Oh, and I agree with everything you've said. I'm working on it to give everyone a happy ending. I mean, although improvable, I like happy, fluffy, goody-goody, `everybody ends up with their significant other in a typical shojo way, so sue me, but I'm the writer so Ha! I'm writing it like that' kind of ending. *sigh* Call me a hopeless romantic. I made Kaiba start to pay attention to Jounouchi more and starting next chapter, Yami will do the same to Yugi, so that should make you happy, ne! It's kind of funny actually, 'cause in most fics, it's usually Bakura and Ryou that go through angst filled chapters while everyone else is all happy doo-da, doo-da. I figured, "I likes them best, so theys get happy first!" Hmph. I just can't stand seeing Ryou suffer for to long you know! That's why Jounouchi's getting happy next. 'cause I'm prejudice, and I likes him more than Yugi. But, *wink* Yugi'll get his Yami, eventually!

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