Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction ❯ Double identity ❯ Hormones go unwasted ( Chapter 11 )

[ Y - Young Adult: Not suitable for readers under 16 ]

... Tis been a rather long time since I updated, ne? ^^;; Apologies! Hopefully this chapter will make up for it? I kept putting off... Um, keep in mind this will be my first lemon ever... >.> For those who don't want to read it, just get the idea of what happened and read the next chapter? Or tell me if you want a separate chapter without lemon (it'd be shorter).
 
Note: Before I even put the warnings, there will be mature description. As soon as you feel you don't want to read it, stop. Technically it's not a lemon, but body descriptions, hence why I'm changing the rating of this story. But for the actual lemon, I'll put warnings like so: !Warning! Lemon!
 
Disclaimer: Fairymph, Mizu and all other eccentric ideas (that includes the plot) are mine.
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Chapter 11: Hormones go unwasted
 
Awkward. Never in his whole life did Hiei imagine he would do what he just thought of doing. Sexual intercourse with a perfect stranger!? Come on! As if. But... she really did look beautiful... Ugh! What was his problem? Why was he even having these thoughts in the first place?
 
Maybe being locked in a room for one entire day had something to do with it... No... no, surely that can't be why. For some reason, it seemed the temperature in the room had increased during the minute he was standing there.
 
It was so hot he had to take his cloak off. Bizarre... He swallowed nervously and noticed how dry his throat was. Was that his heart thumping in his ears? Damn hormones. And all this time he thought he had so little of them!
 
Hiei sighed heavily and got to the conclusion that, the fastest way to get out of here, would be to wake that creature up. Gulp. The fire demon took in a deep breath but couldn't help a sigh. He knew the book's instructions by heart, they really weren't hard.
 
It's just-- reading and doing are worlds apart. 'Just get to it, baka!' he scolded himself and somehow ended up with his shirt on the ground. When did he take it off? He couldn't quite remember. No matter, now he finally mustered the courage to sit on the edge of the perfect bed.
 
He re-read the instructions in his head and slowly leaned in, letting his lips cover the fairymph's gently while his right hand slowly went to rest on Mizu's shoulder. But as far as Hiei was concerned, this girl had no name. She was just a mythical creature that supposedly didn't exist.
 
After five seconds, Hiei sat up again and stared at the peaceful figure. No change. Of course, a kiss would have been too easy, too romantic, and too Disney-like. What he was supposed to do though... was far more than a simple kiss.
 
“Carefully sit on her stomach and her mouth will open when you kiss her again.” That's what the book said. Hiei followed the instructions to the letter and sat on her lower stomach before leaning in again, highly doubting that a person in a coma would simply open her mouth to anyone kissing her.
 
How surprised he was when it actually happened! Mizu's mouth had slowly opened, so now Hiei could follow the next procedures. Hence, he let his tongue shyly explore the open mouth and tasted it. Sweet, yet tasteless. What do you expect from a being made of water?
 
Hiei now put both hands on Mizu's shoulders and let one slide down her arm in a soft caress. He was astonished to see her clothing melt away, just like the book described! What was more surprising though, was how soft her tanned skin was, it felt like silk under his slightly rough fingertips.
 
The most difficult part remained though... How on Earth -or Heaven in this case- was he supposed to make love to her!? He didn't know her name, her age, where she came from, her favorite color or food-- Wait! That was beside the fact. A mission is a mission, right?
 
'Oh, hell...' Hiei had just set eyes on the perfect mound of flesh that constituted female chest. Yes, her breasts. So round, firm yet bouncy-- perfect, in other words! The demon couldn't resist the sight offered to him, worse yet, laying beneath him.
 
Wait a minute-- when did she get naked!? And here he thought just her top had disappeared. Nope, the entire outfit. Something in the back of his mind was urging him to take off his clothes. And for some reason, he obeyed that voice, reasoning that right now, he was the one standing out: he was still dressed.
 
Hiei then recalled the book's careful instructions and chewed on his bottom lip hesitantly. So far he had done well, but would he be able to continue? ... Oh come on! Here's the list of why he couldn't possibly resist: first and foremost, he's a guy. Two, he's a demon, and demons don't let their prey get off that easy. Three, he was asked and rather forced to do so. Four... why the hell shouldn't he?
 
Another heavy sigh answered that. Poor Hiei was getting a headache. Stupid mind battles. 'Get a grip, baka.' he scolded himself and decided from now on not to hesitate. He had no choice in the matter, so he should get over it quickly.
 
!Warning!Lemon!
Sitting back on the bed, naked this time, Hiei licked his dry lips and once again relied on the book to know what to do next. He had to awake her female instinct basically. To make her spread her legs, nothing better to do than caress her thighs gently.
 
There, it worked. Now he had full access to her womanhood and could continue on with the “waking” process. Slowly, almost fearfully, the fire koorime slipped one finger in between Mizu's thighs and probed his way in until he couldn't push in any further.
 
Even slower now, Hiei pulled his finger out, taking in the tenderness and warmth of the walls surrounding his thin finger. He closed his eyes shortly, licking his bottom lip again. For some reason, that was turning him on and he could feel the blood rushing to his manhood.
 
Carefully, he then slid his finger back into her and continued the process, speeding up slightly with each thrust until he felt enough moisture and added another finger. His other hand, meanwhile, was keeping busy by fondling one breast.
 
Hiei once again licked his dry lips and glanced at the female's face. He couldn't dodge the question popping in his head. Was she feeling anything? Did it feel good if she did? Why wasn't she moving? He whimpered softly as he added a third finger to pump her harder as he pushed deeper.
 
Damn, now he was starting to feel the effects of that. The blood rushing down to his crotch really wasn't helping... He felt like-- he needed her to pump him or something. Of course that was out of the question since she wasn't awake.
 
A soft grunt left his throat. Alright, that was it! He reached his limit... There was no way on Earth he could keep going... That decided, Hiei pulled his fingers out and briefly licked them clean before positioning himself above her but followed the book's procedure anyhow.
 
Carefully, yet impatiently, Hiei found Mizu's entrance and slipped his hard member in her core, shivering at the sensational feeling. Now his demon and guy senses kicked in and it was like-- a trance. He didn't know what to do yet he was doing it, he couldn't think. Pleasure was overwhelming.
 
As he pulled himself out of her, Hiei mourned the loss of warmth and comfort this girl's womb was giving him. So he quickly pushed himself back in, without knocking, as if he owned the place... Which-- he pretty much did at this point.
 
Strangely enough, the girl's body seemed to respond to this kind of stimulus, unlike the poking and calling the ogre scientists had done before. Hiei, for once, felt grateful to Koenma for giving him the mission. At the thought of seeing Kurama, Yusuke or Kuwabara doing what he was doing-- having sex with a complete stranger-- sparked in him a flame of jealousy and possessiveness.
 
The faster he went, the more responsive Mizu was. Truly interesting... For some reason though, he felt tired, but his desire to reach that minute of bliss overrode his physical state and he kept pumping in and out, in and out, rhythmically.
 
Hiei perked his ears up, thinking he heard a soft moan from the limp girl beneath him. He couldn't tell if she was awake, but by the way her legs were coiling around his waist made him believe she subconsciously was.
 
Tension spread all over Hiei's body, even reaching the tip of his toes as he finally reached his peak, his body shuddering at the intense wave of pleasure traveling down his body. He swallowed dryly, feeling a pearl of sweat slithering down his cheek before dripping onto the white bed.
 
He wondered what effect that had on this girl... Blinking lazily, Hiei took long breaths, feeling really out of it. He had trouble keeping his eyes open, the room started to fuzz all around. Strange. Without thinking, he pulled his spent manhood out of Mizu's wet womanhood and somehow got his pants on before he took another step, his face pale, and collapsed on the ground.
 
Darkness.
-End of lemon-
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So... that's that. I tried to make it as long as I could-- Um... how was it for a first lemon? Hopefully you enjoyed it! More twists to come to the plot later. Bwahaha, I might an evil idea for an ending that could lead to a possible sequel. But who am I kidding, I'm not even writing the end yet, so no worries!
 
Reviews and criticism encouraged! Help me become a better writer by correcting mistakes (typos or grammar wise), I welcome suggestions. Remember, English is my second language so, I'm far, far from perfect. =)
 
DamnBlackHeart: Lol, well then, I'm glad I at least made you laugh! xP Something new eh? Good to know! I can be special for one day... Hehe.
 
kasaikage: Haha, that Koenma comment made me laugh so hard! *cough* But um, yeah... this chapter is... special... @.@ Blarg... Thanks for reviewing! ^^
 
Nekomi_Meow: ^^ Yay another addict! ... I mean-- fan! ... I mean-- >.> Hehe ^^; Thanks for joining the craziness, bwahaha! ... I need to stop going insane now... @@ Thanks for reviewing! So glad you like it =D
 
Salanti: Hehe, I'll take that as a compliment ^^ Good thing Hiei didn't go to jail... Koenma as a dead body would just be a burden... :P Thanks for reviewing =)
 
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