Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction ❯ You Must Die ❯ The Carnasword ( Chapter 1 )
[ P - Pre-Teen ]
KG: hi everyone, this is my second fanfic, actually, if you count my songfic, it's my third.
Sasha: wait, who's the guy that's gotta die?
KG: not you Sasha, you're already dead.
Sasha: I know that.
KG: anyways, I don't own Yu Yu Hakasho, please don't steal my work.
Sasha: why not?
KG: I came up with it, so I don't think that it would be very nice if someone took it and called it their own.
Sasha: oh, whatever
KG: enjoy.
The students were leaving the school, each brimming with more knowledge than they had the morning before. A girl who looked barely older than sixteen sat in a tree across from the entrance gated. Her waist length pink hair caught a few strange glances, but she merely brushed off these looks. She scanned the many students exiting the high school with her deep ocean blue eyes searching for one person. This girl has been marked centuries ago by a demon and was forced to wait for his return as she was bound to him forever. This beautiful girl was known as Yumi. The on she was searching fro was known as Yoko Kurama.
"Tch, not in this lot either." she mumbled annoyed to herself. "One day Yoko, one day I will find you, and I will succeed in killing you with my own two hands. Soon Yoko, soon."
Yumi jumped from tree to tree until something caught her eye at a school that had just been released. What caught her eye was the boys uniform. Why, she thought, does this school have their boys dressed in pink? She scanned the students and one specific boy caught her eye. He had crimson red hair and emerald green eyes. Yumi sensed something different about him so she decided to follow this boy to find out more about him.
Yumi followed him in the trees until he met with two boys from another high school nearby. One had orange hair and a light blue uniform, the other had his black hair slicked back and was wearing a green uniform. They referred to the red head as Kurama. Yumi was filled with joy and hatred of finding the one she was looking for.
"Yoko Kurama." Yumi said loud enough for the three boys to hear. They turned and saw Yumi land beside them. Yumi walked up to Kurama and said. "Do you have any idea how long I've been searching for you? How can I remove the mark if I can't even find you?"
Kurama looked very confused. "Um, do I know you?" he asked.
  ; "Are you sure you don't know her?" the one with orange hair said. "I mean, she's quite a looker."
"Yes, I'm almost positive."
"Oh how soon we forget those who we say they will love until the end of time." Yumi said. "Yoko, I would have thought you would remember the one that you marked long ago, the one that you know would just have to kill you to remove the mark. So I look a little younger than I did before, but you knew me when I looked this young, both of the other times. This, I guess, is my third time being at this age." Yumi said.
"I have a very strong memory miss. You seem familiar, but I can't place you." Kurama said.
The boy with black hair started to circle Yumi looking at her very carefully. "I know who you are." he said. Yumi looked confused. "Botan told me about you. Your name is Yumi, you take over barely begun embryos after you've reached a certain age. Then, once you turn twelve, you kill the parents and go off on your own. It's a sick way of keeping eternal life."
"Really, age twelve?" Yumi said sarcastically. "I thought that I left at age six, but they know everything about everyone up in spirt world. Who are you anyways?"
"I'm spirit detective Yusuke Yurameshi."
"Wow, I didn't think that they still had spirit detectives. Well, there are still criminals that only spirit world professionals would be able to handle." Yumi moved around Yusuke and looked at Kurama. "If you honestly think that hiding in a human body would keep me from finding you, Yoko, you're very mistaken. It's taken me ten years, but I've found you and now I can take my freedom from you."
Yumi grabbed a carnation from the flower bunch at her waist. The stem extended three times in length and came to a dangerous point. (*A/N in other words, it's a green sword with a carnation flower on top of it.) "This is m carnasword. (*pronounced like carnation with sword on the end instead of the tion.*) A trick I learned from Sasha, one who I loved and lost after he kissed me because you marked me. He died because you had to mark me! Now you will die Yoko."
Yumi charged at Kurama holding the carnasword ready to strike. Kurama quickly dodged causing the carnasword to smash several pieces of the sidewalk. Kurama pulled out his rose whip and thrashed it at Yumi. Yumi pulled the carnasword out from the ground and jumped out of the rose whips path.
"Holy cheese." Yusuke blurted. (*A/N Yusuke uses this phrase a few times in the third volume of the manga, I was just itching to use this phrase in one of my fanfics.*)
"Do you remember me now Yoko?" Yumi asked with a smile.
"I believe that I do." Kurama said with a soft smile. "I don't know how I could have forgotten you hair, your eyes, or that attitude of yours. You haven't changed much since I last saw you. Why do you wish to kill me?"
"Yeah," said the orange haired one. "what'd Kurama do that you'd wand to kill him?"
"Kuwabara, please, you're not helping matters any, just annoying the rest of us." Yusuke said after he knocked Kuwabara upside the head.
Yumi cleared her throat, the attention turned back to her. "Yoko, ko you remember that night whin you made an official note that I was yours and no one else could have me?" Kurama nodded. "That is why I have come. At the time, we were deeply in love and I didn't mind what you did to me when you-"
"Hang on." interrupted Kuwabara. "Could you try to keep this rated PG."
"Kuwabara, kindly remove your mind from the gutter." Kurama said. "Yumi wasn't implying any of those things running through your perverted head."
"Thank you Yoko. As I was saying, at the time, I didn't mind so much what you did to me, but after I escaped from your grasp, I grew angrier. Anger more intense than you or Kuronue could ever imagine. I wanted so bad to bo able to love again, but every time I did, he would die. The only thing they did wrong was to love me in return. I had my heart broken so many times, I just wanted to be able to love and be loved. To show my affection and for him not to die so I could have him forever. Is that too much to ask Yoko? Is that too damn much to ask? Just to have other love, that is all I want Yoko." Tears started to well up in Yumi's eyes. "Just to love, that's all I want."
"Yumi," Kurama said. "you know that you've got me. Why would you want someone else. Besides, you're stuck with me for all eternity. You're my onna and you'll just have to deal with what you've got."
Yusuke and Kuwabara stared at Kurama. This wasn't his normal behavior. Usually Kurama is a sweet and kind guy toward women. "Kurama, what's up with you?" Yusuke asked. "I'd expect that from Hiei, not you. Did you two switch brains or something?"
"Who's Hiei?" Yumi asked. "And what do you mean he's acting different? This is the same Yoko that I thought I fell in love with. The very same Yoko who broke my heart."
"How did I break your heart?" Kurama asked.
"Simple." Yumi said readying her weapon. "You just did, how's that?" Yumi lunged at Kurama ready to strike.
Kurama threw his rose whip. Yumi dodged and swung at Kurama. Kurama barely made a dodge. A few strands of red hair fell to the ground. The battle continued on for about ten minuets until Yumi slipped on a stray newspaper hitting her head causing her to loose consciousness. Her carnasword reverted back to its original state as a carnation. Kurama withdrew his whip and walked over to where Yumi laid. He picked her up along with her carnation. Kurama turned around and started walking.
"What're you gonna do to her Kurama?" asked Yusuke.
"Simple," Kurama said with a smile. "I'm going to take her home and let her rest and heal. This onna has a long way to go before she can kill me, so there is nothing to worry about."
"Kurama," said Kuwabara. "you're really starting to scare me. All this stuff I'd expect for Hiei to do and say, not you."
"Nothing Kuwabara." Kurama said. "I think that you shouldn't worry about me and how I act." and with that, Kurama left and returned to his home. After he set Yumi down on his bed, he sat in his chair and watched her rest. "I still don't see what's caused you to come after me and want me dead." he smiled at her and stroked her bangs off her face. "You look so peaceful while you sleep."
KG: so, what d'you think?
Sasha: I think that you were too mean to Yumi.
KG: who asked you.
Sasha: you just did
KG: I was asking the people that read my work.
Sasha: ok, whatever.
KG: please comment, and return for my next chapter.
Sasha: wait, who's the guy that's gotta die?
KG: not you Sasha, you're already dead.
Sasha: I know that.
KG: anyways, I don't own Yu Yu Hakasho, please don't steal my work.
Sasha: why not?
KG: I came up with it, so I don't think that it would be very nice if someone took it and called it their own.
Sasha: oh, whatever
KG: enjoy.
The students were leaving the school, each brimming with more knowledge than they had the morning before. A girl who looked barely older than sixteen sat in a tree across from the entrance gated. Her waist length pink hair caught a few strange glances, but she merely brushed off these looks. She scanned the many students exiting the high school with her deep ocean blue eyes searching for one person. This girl has been marked centuries ago by a demon and was forced to wait for his return as she was bound to him forever. This beautiful girl was known as Yumi. The on she was searching fro was known as Yoko Kurama.
"Tch, not in this lot either." she mumbled annoyed to herself. "One day Yoko, one day I will find you, and I will succeed in killing you with my own two hands. Soon Yoko, soon."
Yumi jumped from tree to tree until something caught her eye at a school that had just been released. What caught her eye was the boys uniform. Why, she thought, does this school have their boys dressed in pink? She scanned the students and one specific boy caught her eye. He had crimson red hair and emerald green eyes. Yumi sensed something different about him so she decided to follow this boy to find out more about him.
Yumi followed him in the trees until he met with two boys from another high school nearby. One had orange hair and a light blue uniform, the other had his black hair slicked back and was wearing a green uniform. They referred to the red head as Kurama. Yumi was filled with joy and hatred of finding the one she was looking for.
"Yoko Kurama." Yumi said loud enough for the three boys to hear. They turned and saw Yumi land beside them. Yumi walked up to Kurama and said. "Do you have any idea how long I've been searching for you? How can I remove the mark if I can't even find you?"
Kurama looked very confused. "Um, do I know you?" he asked.
  ; "Are you sure you don't know her?" the one with orange hair said. "I mean, she's quite a looker."
"Yes, I'm almost positive."
"Oh how soon we forget those who we say they will love until the end of time." Yumi said. "Yoko, I would have thought you would remember the one that you marked long ago, the one that you know would just have to kill you to remove the mark. So I look a little younger than I did before, but you knew me when I looked this young, both of the other times. This, I guess, is my third time being at this age." Yumi said.
"I have a very strong memory miss. You seem familiar, but I can't place you." Kurama said.
The boy with black hair started to circle Yumi looking at her very carefully. "I know who you are." he said. Yumi looked confused. "Botan told me about you. Your name is Yumi, you take over barely begun embryos after you've reached a certain age. Then, once you turn twelve, you kill the parents and go off on your own. It's a sick way of keeping eternal life."
"Really, age twelve?" Yumi said sarcastically. "I thought that I left at age six, but they know everything about everyone up in spirt world. Who are you anyways?"
"I'm spirit detective Yusuke Yurameshi."
"Wow, I didn't think that they still had spirit detectives. Well, there are still criminals that only spirit world professionals would be able to handle." Yumi moved around Yusuke and looked at Kurama. "If you honestly think that hiding in a human body would keep me from finding you, Yoko, you're very mistaken. It's taken me ten years, but I've found you and now I can take my freedom from you."
Yumi grabbed a carnation from the flower bunch at her waist. The stem extended three times in length and came to a dangerous point. (*A/N in other words, it's a green sword with a carnation flower on top of it.) "This is m carnasword. (*pronounced like carnation with sword on the end instead of the tion.*) A trick I learned from Sasha, one who I loved and lost after he kissed me because you marked me. He died because you had to mark me! Now you will die Yoko."
Yumi charged at Kurama holding the carnasword ready to strike. Kurama quickly dodged causing the carnasword to smash several pieces of the sidewalk. Kurama pulled out his rose whip and thrashed it at Yumi. Yumi pulled the carnasword out from the ground and jumped out of the rose whips path.
"Holy cheese." Yusuke blurted. (*A/N Yusuke uses this phrase a few times in the third volume of the manga, I was just itching to use this phrase in one of my fanfics.*)
"Do you remember me now Yoko?" Yumi asked with a smile.
"I believe that I do." Kurama said with a soft smile. "I don't know how I could have forgotten you hair, your eyes, or that attitude of yours. You haven't changed much since I last saw you. Why do you wish to kill me?"
"Yeah," said the orange haired one. "what'd Kurama do that you'd wand to kill him?"
"Kuwabara, please, you're not helping matters any, just annoying the rest of us." Yusuke said after he knocked Kuwabara upside the head.
Yumi cleared her throat, the attention turned back to her. "Yoko, ko you remember that night whin you made an official note that I was yours and no one else could have me?" Kurama nodded. "That is why I have come. At the time, we were deeply in love and I didn't mind what you did to me when you-"
"Hang on." interrupted Kuwabara. "Could you try to keep this rated PG."
"Kuwabara, kindly remove your mind from the gutter." Kurama said. "Yumi wasn't implying any of those things running through your perverted head."
"Thank you Yoko. As I was saying, at the time, I didn't mind so much what you did to me, but after I escaped from your grasp, I grew angrier. Anger more intense than you or Kuronue could ever imagine. I wanted so bad to bo able to love again, but every time I did, he would die. The only thing they did wrong was to love me in return. I had my heart broken so many times, I just wanted to be able to love and be loved. To show my affection and for him not to die so I could have him forever. Is that too much to ask Yoko? Is that too damn much to ask? Just to have other love, that is all I want Yoko." Tears started to well up in Yumi's eyes. "Just to love, that's all I want."
"Yumi," Kurama said. "you know that you've got me. Why would you want someone else. Besides, you're stuck with me for all eternity. You're my onna and you'll just have to deal with what you've got."
Yusuke and Kuwabara stared at Kurama. This wasn't his normal behavior. Usually Kurama is a sweet and kind guy toward women. "Kurama, what's up with you?" Yusuke asked. "I'd expect that from Hiei, not you. Did you two switch brains or something?"
"Who's Hiei?" Yumi asked. "And what do you mean he's acting different? This is the same Yoko that I thought I fell in love with. The very same Yoko who broke my heart."
"How did I break your heart?" Kurama asked.
"Simple." Yumi said readying her weapon. "You just did, how's that?" Yumi lunged at Kurama ready to strike.
Kurama threw his rose whip. Yumi dodged and swung at Kurama. Kurama barely made a dodge. A few strands of red hair fell to the ground. The battle continued on for about ten minuets until Yumi slipped on a stray newspaper hitting her head causing her to loose consciousness. Her carnasword reverted back to its original state as a carnation. Kurama withdrew his whip and walked over to where Yumi laid. He picked her up along with her carnation. Kurama turned around and started walking.
"What're you gonna do to her Kurama?" asked Yusuke.
"Simple," Kurama said with a smile. "I'm going to take her home and let her rest and heal. This onna has a long way to go before she can kill me, so there is nothing to worry about."
"Kurama," said Kuwabara. "you're really starting to scare me. All this stuff I'd expect for Hiei to do and say, not you."
"Nothing Kuwabara." Kurama said. "I think that you shouldn't worry about me and how I act." and with that, Kurama left and returned to his home. After he set Yumi down on his bed, he sat in his chair and watched her rest. "I still don't see what's caused you to come after me and want me dead." he smiled at her and stroked her bangs off her face. "You look so peaceful while you sleep."
KG: so, what d'you think?
Sasha: I think that you were too mean to Yumi.
KG: who asked you.
Sasha: you just did
KG: I was asking the people that read my work.
Sasha: ok, whatever.
KG: please comment, and return for my next chapter.