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Reviewed By: Finbastard [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2009 16:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why hasn't there been an update? This is so great!
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Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2009 02:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AMAZING!! why havent you updated? its been about four years. i loved it and i cant wait untill you finally finish this 3 shot :D
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Reviewed By: theprophet [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so good i got goosebumps
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Reviewed By: ooOOcrys On: June 17, 2007 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why havent u updated yet!!???? i really wanna know whats going to happen next
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Reviewed By: cryz On: February 13, 2007 18:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!! its my favorite threesome evr...PLZ Update i wanna know how inuyasha punishes sessy(hehe)
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Title: To Be the Alpha
Reviewed By: Kaggami On: May 21, 2006 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW absolutley magnificent i loved it way sexy plz write more im dying to know whats gona happen when inu get back kk luv ya mucho
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Title: To Be The Alpha
Reviewed By: inugomegirl On: May 19, 2006 11:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story who knew that kagome would get both dog and i didnt see what was going to happen next. erite more cant want to read you have a great story ging keep up the go work i cant wait for it
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Reviewed By: gadoury8477 On: May 03, 2006 21:16 CDT
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Great story read it before. Im waiting for the threesome.
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Reviewed By: Mascara Queen On: February 09, 2006 18:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG I LOVED IT YOUR STORY WAS SO WELL WRITTEN I ABSOLUTLY LOVE INUYASHA BE THE ALPHA ITS SO COOL HE DESERVES IT THOUGH REALLY BUT I LLLOOOOVVVEEEDDD IIITTTT!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: To Be The Alpha
Reviewed By: Maiden101 On: February 06, 2006 21:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let Me See KAWAII, SEXY, HOT omfg I loved it, it was amazing you have to please update SOON!!!!
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Title: To Be The Alpha
Reviewed By: YaYa57 On: February 04, 2006 18:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this has to be the sexiest thing in the world i mean really who would have every thought of something like this and you did and its so hawt those three together i mean wow Im so excited for chapter 3 and wehn is that gona be posted beacuse im anxious to read it update soon ok
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Reviewed By: Geisel On: February 04, 2006 18:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NICE YOUR STORY IS THE BEST I HAVE READ 2day so now can you update it soon because uts really good
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Reviewed By: Snowflake101 On: January 28, 2006 16:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
COOL story i loved it the whole Alpha and dominace thing is so hot! I think this story ius very creativley written i give it two thumbs up ^_^
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Title: To Be The Alpha
Reviewed By: White_tigergirl On: January 21, 2006 19:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice this story is so creativley writing i like how you made Sesshomaru Kagome's bitch shows she does have some authority thats so sick (in a good way) I love it you should really update soon cause from what i see its been a while and this story is so tight
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Title: Hello
Reviewed By: DiaMond02 On: January 21, 2006 17:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello ppl still waiting for a update here come on you just gotta update this story its friggin awsome
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Title: To Be The Alpha
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 14:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: To Be The Alpha
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 01:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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Reviewed By: rector On: December 29, 2005 18:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I keep coming back to read it. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Title: To Be The Alpha
Reviewed By: LOri On: December 03, 2005 01:20 CST
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This is the best threesome story like ever you HAVE TO UPDATE IT SOON PLZ I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: duranrox [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! update ASAP. update update update update update update update update update update update update update update......you get the point.
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Title: YeeHaa
Reviewed By: Kadaede NSI On: October 04, 2005 09:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think Kags needs to be carrying a child after an all nighter with Sexshoumaru...
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2005 12:32 CDT
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well, I don't like the idea of Sess/Inu. So I skipped that part. But the threesome and the second chapter were hot.
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Reviewed By: Hentai_Chick [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 20:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good!
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Title: To Be The Alpha
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 00:53 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: bkatty On: August 30, 2005 14:42 CDT
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love this story
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Title: hmm
Reviewed By: tiger_chick On: August 27, 2005 04:15 CDT
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I already read this very chapter weeks ago...when is ch 3?
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Reviewed By: niasa91 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 07:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD!!! That was SOOO good! You wrote that perfectly. Thank you!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: yuni On: August 24, 2005 17:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please hurry and update. I loved the Chapters.
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Title: GO Kags!
Reviewed By: Ummm... Hi? On: July 18, 2005 01:43 CDT
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That was the most hilarious lemon I've ever read! I never knew Kagome had it in her!
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Reviewed By: Freaky Yaoi Girl On: July 12, 2005 09:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I so totoally loved the way you made Inu-Yasha dominate sesshomaru. Yes pleas make a sequal, that would be awsome.
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