| "Painful Decisions" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: EnV [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can u make this a kag/hiei only..no kurama in it? hes a great character n all but...i dun like threesomes... [[update soon!]]
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Reviewed By: Kogas_mate05 (not logged in) [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 01:50 CDT
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Great chapter, though i'm a little curious... is Hiei really that old? But then again, this is your story so i guess anything is possible! :-) I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: tiki-chibi On: July 11, 2005 08:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was great! you should give kagome blue eyes though. because in the manga she has pretty blue eyes. sorry i just go by the manga. anyways that was really good so keep writing!
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: sailormoon1996 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 18:47 CDT
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Your joint fan fiction is awesome!!! I can't wait to read more....but exactly is Sota? Priest or something like Kagome. I can't wait to see what they do about Hiei. Is Yoko included in this? Can't wait until the next chapter to your story...please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Vic_18 On: July 10, 2005 15:50 CDT
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Yes! I am so glad someone's starting a Hiei/Kagome fic. Those things are so hard to find sometimes, especially good ones. My favorite chapter was the second one. But you might want to put an A/N at the beginnig of the chapter saying that Hiei and Kurama are naturally in the past and that they haven't met the Yu Yu group yet. That kind of threw me for a loop, I actually thought they were in the future, and then on a mission, before I finally relized what was happening. But anyway it's a good story. I like how your using Souta and I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 14:44 CDT
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Heya Ryu-chan! Hi TK! I'm Fury-chan one of Ryu-chan's biggest fans! ^^ So far I really like the story. Since it's so good I'm gonna check out any stories you might have TK is that ok with yoj? Well even if it isn't I'm gonna do it anyway!^^ Buh-bye!
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Reviewed By: grapejellybean [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 11:32 CDT
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This story really has peaked my interest. It is a wonderful and creative idea to have Souta go through the well. I don't think I have ever come across that idea before. You guys are wonderful authors and I can't wait to read what you have come up with next.
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Reviewed By: Kogas_mate05 (not logged in) On: July 09, 2005 00:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooo, curious to who's spying in the well house! One thing i'm wondering is, is the pairing a three-some or a love triangle? Either is really good to me. I've always wondered, how many years apart are Kagome and Souta? Good chapter and i hope you update soon! Btw, are you ever going to announce what the real summary is? o_0
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Reviewed By: faerygirl44 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 22:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting. I wonder who is watching them and what will Kagome's reaction be to Souta's story? I can't wait to read more...please update soon!
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Title: Love this!
Reviewed By: Shadow Maiden [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Two of the greatest writers I've ever read. Together. Kami, could it get any greater?! You have me intrigued so far, but also confused. I'm sure with progress I'll understand and continue to enjoy it!
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