Reviewed By: Lynn10 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 20:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was very good. I usually don't write reviews, but I think this one-shot deserved it (Because of my lack of knowledge in reviewing, I don't know how to (of if I am right now?) log in and review at the same time, but my user account on this site is Lynn10). Your writing style is very creative, drawing the reader into the story itself. I liked the fact that you drew out Hiko's emotions, not like the blubbering baby/idiot that I've read (and detest) in numerous fics, but - ...how should I say it - you portrayed him like he probably would have acted if Kenshin really died. I'm also happy that references to "Seisouhen" didn't show up in this story. The movie itself drives me crazy. No more comments necessary on that factor, heh. All in all, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this little one-shot and definately commend you for doing such a good job. Sorry if the review runs together. I have no idea on how to fix that. Write more! ~Lynn10
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