Reviewed By: Yoshiro On: January 01, 2002 17:35 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Style of Writing: I think you should add a lil' more detail when you write about more significant things, like the watch.
Spelling and Grammar: Uh..damn girl where'd you learn to spell! For the most part when I talk to you,you talk fine so whats up?
Origanlity/Creativity: I'm not one to critize about the Alucard thing. Sorry for driving you near insanity for him. But I love Castlevania too much, and you asked me. God dammit I couldn't resist Mei-chan.
Enjoyment Factor: Ya know, you writing changed with Chapter 5. I like it like that.
Overall Rating: Being that I,(*insert evil laugh here* Bwhahahahahahahahahaha!) gave you idea's for this story, no mention of me!Hehe. Alucard was my only idea to add! Your evil clone! Bwhahahahahahaha!
(Write more!Alucard! *plays castlevania* (inside joke)) |