| "Here With You" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Continue
Reviewed By: Sariyona [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 16:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue, you have a very unique story idea! Enjoyed what you've done so far :)
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Title: no title
Reviewed By: shiroduckie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it (don't be upset by the numbers in the review...i give tens rarely in the other categories)! None of it seems cheesy at all, only fluffy at some points (which is not a bad thing). Please continue!
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Title: good job
Reviewed By: Darkangel2379 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 23:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was good, it was very original.
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Title: *Boogies
Reviewed By: Runa Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 07:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story over all. I have to admit, the very end seemed kind of...blegh. The ending seemed like something Iwould write when I was like...twelve. It just seems too cheesy.
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