| "The Second Time" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: ZWorld [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2012 05:01 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! I loved every minute of it. I think you got both characters spot on, especially Bulma! I can see her having this problem when she was older. To be honest, your story made me wonder how Vegeta and Bulma's tale went after the end of DBZ.. and whether if when she passed on, Vegeta died along with her. Thank you so much for the lovely story! |
Title: pure Madness :D
Reviewed By: marlene_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2011 09:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A fantasy inside another fantasy. it´s sooo crazy :D great fic! thank you! |
Title: Sweet!
Reviewed By: StarbearerTM [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2006 17:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I first read this on Vegeta Insaiyan. You described Bulma and Vegeta perfectly in their youthed forms. It's hard to combine a lemon with character development sometimes and you pulled it off beautifully!
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Darkangel2379 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 18:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue! This story was awesome. one of the best I've ever read.
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