| "My, How Convenient" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: Truepoint Wolfhowl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 02:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT. HAD ME LAUGHING ALL THE WAY.
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Reviewed By: Darkness Child [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2006 19:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice job. what more can I say it was so good. I hope you will write more,I really am intrested to see how you top this story. It was perfect. ;)
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Title: Wow!!!
Reviewed By: KACD2 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 00:18 CST
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That was a great story. Please write more... please, please, please!!! It was well done, but could use more. Lots more... It was nice to not see them "over done"... too much fighting... to much yelling... and the such. Too many authors over play things.
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Reviewed By: Goten-Rockz [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 15:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY!...I was like....woah...the whole way through...You're making me feel sorry for Sasuke tho'...Keep up the good work!...Please?... b.t.w...the whole, 'I'M NOT GAY I'M NOT GAY I'M NOT OH FUCK IT I AM'....was genius....:D
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Reviewed By: slash_glory [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 21:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just a little bit more, please?
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Reviewed By: jabbajabbagogo On: September 22, 2005 14:13 CDT
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no. not the end. not the end of this, and NOT the end of Sasuke/Naruto romance. PLEASE no! (but please continue--and quickly, if you can ^.^)
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Title: Aww...
Reviewed By: Choi sama On: August 24, 2005 00:28 CDT
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TT _ TT Nooooo...
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Title: A fellow fanfic writer
Reviewed By: VickiLe (vickiile@yahoo.com.au) On: August 23, 2005 00:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! *Sobs hysterically. It can't end! It can't end! It's too good. You see, I was hopping around on one foot when I saw that you had written another chapter, waiting for the page to load. Then I read the Author's note. I started to cry, but then I read the chapter, and I laughed. I like the confusion felt by Sasuke and Naruto. It gives the story a realistic feel. I loved them waking up entangled together, it made my heart swell. One word, hot! The characters are just perfect. Perfect. Anyway, I do understand your reasons for putting things on hold. I'll support you all the way. So I'll just look forward to your next installment
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Reviewed By: Sahara Storm On: August 09, 2005 10:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Great story you've got going here; I'm enjoying it a lot. It's funny, witty, well-written, and the smut is excellent. :-). Can't wait for the fourth installment! :-) ~Sahara
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Title: I'm Not Gay!
Reviewed By: The Lazy Choi-sama On: August 04, 2005 10:56 CDT
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Haha, poor poor Sasuke... Can't wait for the end, unless this is all. (Yeah, I can't tell if I read the AN only one time, hehe.) It's like I said before, I didn't have to force myself to read this, which is really a big thing to be able to do. Really.
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Reviewed By: VickiLe On: August 04, 2005 03:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I think that your writing style is original and amazing. Your use of sarcasm is very wise ( the is nothing sacred anymore about the water reminding Naruto about Sasuke) The plot is flawless, not farfetched, everything fits perfectly. The sex scene was nothing short of totally mindblowing. This is the best Naruto/Saskue fic I have ever read, and trust me, I have scoured every part of the internet for a fic as good as this!
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Reviewed By: BenDover On: August 03, 2005 00:37 CDT
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Would have been better or Naruto stayed as "Chan" the hole time. but ahh well
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Reviewed By: sasunaru_ai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 11:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O ... *foams at the mouth and faints* Damn! That was a freaking great lemon! *mops up bloddy nose* Very steamy =^.^= I love this story, i can't wait for the next chapter ^_^ Well done!
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Title: Because he's not gay....
Reviewed By: nacht kind On: July 28, 2005 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That::points at fic:: is frickin' hilarious.... I love Sasuke's internal monologue and constant reminder that he is, in fact, not homo-SEX-ual...yeah, sure ¬_¬ I can't wait until the next installment, I'm thrilled at the prospect of some SasuNaru lovin'! Besides, think of how convenient it would be? I mean, in a pervert's room like that, there's bound to be lube somewhere, right? Yea, on that note....I wish you inspiratino and pervy thoughts! ~Nacht P.S. I'm horribly curious as to what Sasuke's going to do once he admits he's a little left of the right wire.....will he snap and just jump Naruto when he's looking particularly ravishable? oh, that'd be fun...Watching Naruto rant and be unconciously alluring, Sasuke not listening to a damn word he's saying cause he's have a rather intense debate going in his denial ridden mind, his coming to a sudden conclusion, a Naruto asking him he's been damn well listening, Sasuke replying no(possibly with a smirk), and then...the move...Oh, it's all so exciting....I CAN'T WAIT! ::claps::
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Reviewed By: MissDbzMedabots [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 18:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ hey great start =p and Sasuke might still act as an iceblock xD he WILL respond to Naruto's humping soooner or later =p muawhaaha! ^_^ nice cliché plot, I lurve it!
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