| "My, How Convenient" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Title: A fellow fanfic writer
Reviewed By: VickiLe (vickiile@yahoo.com.au) On: August 23, 2005 00:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! *Sobs hysterically. It can't end! It can't end! It's too good. You see, I was hopping around on one foot when I saw that you had written another chapter, waiting for the page to load. Then I read the Author's note. I started to cry, but then I read the chapter, and I laughed. I like the confusion felt by Sasuke and Naruto. It gives the story a realistic feel. I loved them waking up entangled together, it made my heart swell. One word, hot! The characters are just perfect. Perfect. Anyway, I do understand your reasons for putting things on hold. I'll support you all the way. So I'll just look forward to your next installment
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Reviewed By: Sahara Storm On: August 09, 2005 10:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Great story you've got going here; I'm enjoying it a lot. It's funny, witty, well-written, and the smut is excellent. :-). Can't wait for the fourth installment! :-) ~Sahara
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Title: I'm Not Gay!
Reviewed By: The Lazy Choi-sama On: August 04, 2005 10:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Haha, poor poor Sasuke... Can't wait for the end, unless this is all. (Yeah, I can't tell if I read the AN only one time, hehe.) It's like I said before, I didn't have to force myself to read this, which is really a big thing to be able to do. Really.
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Reviewed By: VickiLe On: August 04, 2005 03:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I think that your writing style is original and amazing. Your use of sarcasm is very wise ( the is nothing sacred anymore about the water reminding Naruto about Sasuke) The plot is flawless, not farfetched, everything fits perfectly. The sex scene was nothing short of totally mindblowing. This is the best Naruto/Saskue fic I have ever read, and trust me, I have scoured every part of the internet for a fic as good as this!
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Reviewed By: BenDover On: August 03, 2005 00:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Would have been better or Naruto stayed as "Chan" the hole time. but ahh well
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Reviewed By: sasunaru_ai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 11:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O ... *foams at the mouth and faints* Damn! That was a freaking great lemon! *mops up bloddy nose* Very steamy =^.^= I love this story, i can't wait for the next chapter ^_^ Well done!
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Title: Because he's not gay....
Reviewed By: nacht kind On: July 28, 2005 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That::points at fic:: is frickin' hilarious.... I love Sasuke's internal monologue and constant reminder that he is, in fact, not homo-SEX-ual...yeah, sure ¬_¬ I can't wait until the next installment, I'm thrilled at the prospect of some SasuNaru lovin'! Besides, think of how convenient it would be? I mean, in a pervert's room like that, there's bound to be lube somewhere, right? Yea, on that note....I wish you inspiratino and pervy thoughts! ~Nacht P.S. I'm horribly curious as to what Sasuke's going to do once he admits he's a little left of the right wire.....will he snap and just jump Naruto when he's looking particularly ravishable? oh, that'd be fun...Watching Naruto rant and be unconciously alluring, Sasuke not listening to a damn word he's saying cause he's have a rather intense debate going in his denial ridden mind, his coming to a sudden conclusion, a Naruto asking him he's been damn well listening, Sasuke replying no(possibly with a smirk), and then...the move...Oh, it's all so exciting....I CAN'T WAIT! ::claps::
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Reviewed By: MissDbzMedabots [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 18:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ hey great start =p and Sasuke might still act as an iceblock xD he WILL respond to Naruto's humping soooner or later =p muawhaaha! ^_^ nice cliché plot, I lurve it!
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Title: Man, Those Two Have Problems...
Reviewed By: Choi-sama (too lazy to login) On: July 12, 2005 14:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm, all tens... I've been giving out a lot of those lately. Good job, everybody! But seriously, this is one of the easiest fanfics to read that I've ever read. (As in, I never have to force myself to finish the chapters.) In fact, I can't wait to read more! Update soon! ^__^
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Title: My oh my..convenient??
Reviewed By: Yurikai Kurosaki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well...what more can I say but: I WANT CHAPY 3!!! Your fic is really awsome...its funny and sexy! I especially liked the part when Naruto told Sasuke it was is name he actually said and that he had been secretly lusting over him and his thight ass for forever...*pretty hilarious if you ask me*=^_^= I'm really looking forward to your next chap and I'd like to know if you could e-mail me when you'll update... yaminomatsueii@hotmail.com *And NO i'm not a stalker damnit!!!*LOL^^ See ya Kurosaki Yurikai Raiko
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Title: After the second chapter
Reviewed By: spiritdream On: July 11, 2005 15:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was hilarious. Thank you for writing this story. ^^ The sooner he sleeps, the sooner Sasuke can sneak off to the bathroom himself to alleviate his own problem. *cough* of course. He is definitely not turned on by another guy. *nods* He is NOT gay. Of course. ... *snicker* Denial is such a sweet thing. XDD
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Reviewed By: HentaiOnna [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A great fic! I can't wait to read more! Update soon!
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Title: Oh. Wow.
Reviewed By: Choi-sama On: July 08, 2005 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this was actually fun to read! Wait no, scratch that. I could actually read it! Good job! Please update soon because I'll be waiting. ^__^
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Reviewed By: spiritdream On: July 06, 2005 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really nice chapter you have here. Original, funny and suprisingly, Naruto is NOT OOC (or at least I think he/she/ isn't.) [Maybe, you should get a beta - not that it's horrible or anything, far from that - just to correct minor mistakes and mispellings.] Promising fic, looking forward to the next chapter. ^^
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Reviewed By: Twilight Thief (too lazy to sign in) On: July 06, 2005 10:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wwwwwwwwwwwwohhhhhhhhhhh............. this was awesome. more please... T_T
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