| "Twisted destinies" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: usagibunny325 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2004 20:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Update soon please!!! I wanna read more!!! Please!!!!!
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Reviewed By: AznAngel6767 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2004 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
dat's it?! u gotta finish it grl!
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Title: Twisted destinies
Reviewed By: usagibunny325 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2003 19:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is that really the end?!?!?!?!?!?!? That can't be but it says that it is complete but it ends with "After reading the draft, Endymion took out a pen and signed the agreement. Prince Endymion and Princess Rei were now married. Serena could not take it any longer and decided to leave as fast as possible. Unnoticed, she left the castle and locked herself in her room. Never in her life had she cried so much ... As she managed to stop, she heard a knock at her door. As she opened it, Endymion walked inside and quickly closed the door behind him -'We need to talk' he said"
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Reviewed By: dranged fan fic lover On: July 21, 2003 01:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gr8 plz update soon |
Reviewed By: dranged fanfic lover On: July 18, 2003 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gr8 up date soooooooooooooon.pleaz |
Reviewed By: Qserenity [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2002 22:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please continue!!!
I really enjoy your work on this fic. |
Reviewed By: rino_serenity On: July 01, 2002 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very good so far i can't wait until you write more Hurry please. I hav to know if Serena will ever find out who he is, or what she is. and will serena sneak out of the house to meet Darien. |
Reviewed By: Qserenity [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2002 21:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Any more? I wanna read. MORE MORE MORE MOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEE.
*gets control of self*
Oops sorry * puts on really cute face*
pwease write more. ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Qserenity [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2002 18:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Pretty good! ^ ^
But you need to profread some parts dont really make sense like: Serena observed the man... he was tall, with jet black eyes, and deep blue eyes which seem to contrast with her crystal blue eyes.
but other than a few of those type things it is really good! Please read and review mine (Misleading Star.) I nees an outsiders opion ^^ |
Reviewed By: sailor_soldier_sm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2002 16:18 CST
Comment/Review:
I found the end of the first chapter so cute! I hope you write more soon. |
