| "The Ties That Bind" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: starlight_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2008 17:05 CST
Comment/Review:
This is a great story! I really hope you continue it soon!
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Title: Continue
Reviewed By: Daniel1469 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 13:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is great please continue it
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Reviewed By: Vekkel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed the first two chapters of the story, can't wait to see what kind of trouble Naruto gets into. I also wonder if you'll give Naruto a talent for gambling like Jiraiya suspects he might have. The legendary sucker my just disappear if he becomes her good luck charm. On top of that I'm loooking forward to seeing if Jiraiya can bring out his inner pervert, baachan certainly wouldn't like that. Please don't leave us hanging for two long, I'm looking forward to the next update.
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