| "Pull Over" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: kagome313(nsi) On: August 04, 2010 13:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i was 14 when i first read this O___O My how time fly by!! I still enjoy this!!! I love lemons - what more can i say? lol... This puts me in the mood for role play now lol, all i need now is to buy a cop suit o.~ lol Still loving it!!!!
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No no no Kisshouten. If you read to understand, then you would of notice that she said they went on a few dates n came closer. Tsk...tsk..tsk...always read to understand. Neways, I'm really reviewing to compliment you on a job well done...especially the lemon!! The one in the car wuz hot. With a cop no less! Great job! I luvit!!!^.^
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Reviewed By: Kisshouten On: May 29, 2006 18:47 CDT
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It was okay...but I think that you should have explained more about the relationship development between Inuyasha and Kagome. I thought that the story was kind of rushed. I mean, Inuyasha gives Kagome a ride home and then they have sex on the same day? For goodness sake! You're making Kagome sound like a slut here! And you're also making Inuyasha sound like a man-whore. But other than that, you're story was okay. But you need work (and I don't mean to offend you, I'm just pointing out stuff you need to improve on). I'm sorry if I sound very rude right now! Keep it up. I'm sure you'll get much better.
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Reviewed By: elementalobsession On: August 28, 2005 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mmmmmmmm... That was delicious. Lol.
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Title: PLEASEEEEEEEE!
Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 14:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i loved your story i hope you write real soon. it was awesome. oh and please R&R my story moonlight eyes Oh my name is Nyah. I am 15 and i spend most of my time reading and reviewing lovely stories like yours. and did i say your story is very great. email me at krystalclearkiss@yahoo.com when you update thanks alot. please update real soon. please oh please update real real soon
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Reviewed By: Evangeline_Lily On: August 08, 2005 12:08 CDT
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Good story. I have no idea why but I'm attracted to your stories. It's like a drug, and I'm addicted. So hurry! Produce more of your drug before I get sick from "underuse". (I'm not crazy!) Weell, keep up with the good fanfic producing!
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Title: Pull Over
Reviewed By: mgnc On: August 06, 2005 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi there...again. Well, actually, I'm not really into lemon, maybe 25/100 but I decided to read it coz' I really want to read all Inuyasha stories made by fans too and since I read your other story, I decided to checked this out too which turned out good. You know, you really had some unique style of writing fics and I'm really glad to read this first chappie! So, gotta read the next one if I want to finish this lemonish story of yours! GoodLuck! mgnc
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Title: Good Lemons
Reviewed By: robinstar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 13:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was cute, lol. " Your wasting time Yash." " When I'm done with you I don't think you'll care." I don't know what, but something about those lines made me giggle like a little girl, lol. Is 13 considered a little girl? Ok, off topic...this story was cute and I liked it. No offense or anything but I gotta say the line about the windshield fogging up was kinda...corny, but in a funny way. Men and their one liners...lol. Good story but the spelling...Lol. Bye for now, Hallie (robinstar)
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Reviewed By: black_talisman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 13:57 CDT
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really good idea for a story! If I were you, I would continue it and write some more stories! I love it when Kagome isn't that innocent as in many other stories! Continue!
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 21:03 CDT
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that was pretty good! keeep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 16:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a hot ass lemon I never been so entranced into something. You left me wanting more for some reason and I believe that is the start of a great writer. Anyways, Great fic and I wish you luck and prosperity. ^_^!
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Reviewed By: huh?!?!?! On: July 07, 2005 05:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
was it kagome's frist time? who the hell wants there frist time in the back of a cop car? i am very confused...BUT i still give it a 10 in everything because i liked it
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 02:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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NIIIIICCCCEEEE. good start, that was real hot. LOL. well...it was. i love the inu cop idea. read a couple of them but really got blasted by the thought in this one (guys look so hot in uniforms, damn....). very well done! the lemon was a bit rushed. all of this promises were really seeming to add up to something more then a quick lay in the back of a cop car (again, niiiicccceee). maybe, if you like the deliverance of the story and the way people respond, want to make this a few more chapters that deliver how they met (maybe a similar situation where he pulled her over) and the rest of thier day. very well done though, five stars up!
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: AmonLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
~hotness But wheres the backround on them??? is it PWP cause thats just fine with me sweetie Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: Nick F. On: July 06, 2005 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Definitely nice set-up. Haven't seen any lemon that starts like this before. The lemon is nice though a little...brisk and quick. I think it's optional but perhaps you would consider putting some background info of their relationship in here. All in all, nice for your first lemon :-)
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