| "Twilight" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Kasha-TheInuFreak [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story, it's good! The Royai )RoyXRiza) pairing is awesome, so please don't stop writing. I promise to review every chapter. Just email me when you update kay? sharpshooter_riza_hawkeye@yahoo.com Thanks.
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Reviewed By: priestess123 On: September 26, 2005 19:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good grief! I wish you'd update! I love Roy/Riza pairings. The others are right, there just isn't enough of them. I'm not so big on the Roy/Ed stuff (too creepy for me) PLEASE KEEP WRITING!
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Title: Awsome!
Reviewed By: Shadow Alchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 10:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! There aren't enough Roy/Riza, let alone good ones. But out of all the Royia on this site i got to adimmt that this has got to be one of the better ones! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Edge22 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2005 21:18 CDT
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that was great I like roy/riza fics, I did see some spelling errors though you might wanna fix those. update faster I wanna see what happens next.
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Title: Great!!!
Reviewed By: Anime Lover475 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really Good.You Are Really A Good Writer.Pleze Update Soon!!!!*=-p
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Reviewed By: balthasar On: September 08, 2005 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im soo glad you did a royai fanfic!! and its good too! lol i just loev royai and your story is great! but when Riza was kinda passing the vase from one hand to the other i thought that her right arm was all bandaged up. wouldn't it like hurt? well anyways the rest was really really good and i really do hope that you would update way faster and make your chapters longer!!! its good!
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Reviewed By: KagomeMaire On: September 08, 2005 18:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey hey hey i love roy/riza fanfics i know tons of ppl who do and i love your story so far its great!!! ok ok ok u need to update no fair
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Reviewed By: KagomeMaire On: September 08, 2005 18:18 CDT
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hey hey hey i love roy/riza fanfics i know tons of ppl who do and i love your story so far its great!!!
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Title: homgod
Reviewed By: Hikaru-RoseRed [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2005 15:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
you must finish this fic! i like it so far!!
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Title: great fic
Reviewed By: Giggienet On: July 12, 2005 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic was one of the best I ever heard you should make a more chapters because i just loved this one !
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Title: OOhj
Reviewed By: Siobhain On: July 07, 2005 06:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooh. I lurve Roy SO MUCH! And my favorite fma pairing ir royxriza!! And this story is so good. Only thing, I noticed alot of spelling mistakes. But please keep updating!!!!!!!!!
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Title: kewl
Reviewed By: Phoenix9151 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 01:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
first FMA fanfic i've read... i'm not dissapointed keep it up :) *see's the cookie* mmmmmm cookies.....
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Reviewed By: CB-chan On: July 06, 2005 23:26 CDT
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FINALLY! A ROYAI FIC!! I was surprised when all I saw were Ed and Winry fics (not that I'm complaining or anything :P), but I expected some Royai fics! Anywho, Nice start! ^^ Looking forward for more!
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Title: Yey!
Reviewed By: Nikuyoku [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 23:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
A review to encourage me! Thank you! -gives you a cookie- anyway, chapter two is in progress.... -nod nod- Keep reviewing! Please?
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Title: Krilaia
Reviewed By: krilaia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 22:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Niiiiiiiice, me likey! ^-^; keep it up! and don't ask me why I like it --;, I just do really I do! Keepp writing, pleeeeeeeease!
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