| "Dancing Cherry Blossoms" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: mm..
Reviewed By: Astarael On: September 02, 2005 11:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
come on! finish the story! i have grown a fondness for it.
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Title: I'm loving it!
Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 13:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The more I read this story the more I'm falling in love with it! :) Great job ! I added ya to my watch list. Not many people are doing fan fics on these character and it nice to have found you! I'll be waching abd waiting for more! ~Hugs
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Title: FFRG review (chapter 1)
Reviewed By: BakaBokken [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2005 00:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you for submitting your story to the FFRG. I think that although Sakura is a very interesting character, you're bordering on a Mary Sue with her. I would be careful with how you characterize her in future chapters (i.e. make sure to let us know that she DOES have flaws!). Secondly, although your grammar is quite solid, I noticed several recurring errors (mostly dealing with punctuation/capitalization leading into and out of dialogue). A decent beta reader would be immensely helpful to you in picking those mistakes out. I also felt that the Champloo cast was a bit off in terms of characterization. Fuu, though she does speak rather coarsely for a woman in her time, doesn't seem quite that crude. Mugen was a little too rude to her as well, IMHO... I also felt that Mugen wasn't very upset by losing the mini-match with Sakura (who seemed to beat him just a little too easily). Then again, that could be a matter of opinion. Otherwise, you have an interesting start! There aren't many Champloo fanfictions out there, so it's nice to see someone else dive into the fandom. Polish this piece up a bit, work a little on characterizations, and you'll have a great addition to the SC archive. Thanks again for submitting your work to the FFRG.
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Title: the best!!!!
Reviewed By: mugenlover123 On: August 06, 2005 17:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fanfic is so cool i love PLEASE write more i am very excided to hear the rest of the story the charecters are so cool i can imagine every part of the story i am very plesed with your story dont stop writing
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Title: very nice
Reviewed By: animeempress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 15:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it is really good I like it a whole lot I can't wait to see more from you
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Title: darknessflame66
Reviewed By: darknessflame66 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 15:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey, i just thought i should point this out to ya. it Jean. not Jin.....man that was irritating -_-**. but good story! ^-^
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Title: YourLordAndMaster
Reviewed By: DjRomeo On: July 23, 2005 06:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very impressive fanfic, i like your origninal characters. Please continue, i look forward to reading the next chapter.
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: RadicalEdward911 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 08:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is awasome! I'm really impressed at your creativity and imageation that when into this story....I'm adding this story to my favorite list. Please continue!!!!
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Title: Oh wow
Reviewed By: Mugen_Fun_Jin_3 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 10:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh this is good!! XD i love it!!
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Reviewed By: Theforgottenone [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh. Hey. This story isn't so bad. I actually like it. It's a little OOC but I don't care i still like it. ^_^
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