"[Kanata X Miyu] : Wings of Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Reviewed By: MiyuxKanata4ever On: July 29, 2005 02:25 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: please update!!!!! i'm super excited to read the rest of your story!!!! write more and keep it up and also, update it!!!! tnx!!!
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Title: miyu...kanata... what a great couple!!! :) Reviewed By: MiyuxKanata4ever On: July 27, 2005 05:06 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: moshi moshi! i love it very much!!! its such a nice story!!! hey your improving!!!! that's great!! we just finished our unit tests and next week come the mastery tests... oh when can i ever have the time to read your fanfic? well whatever! i'll find a way that i can read your super cool fanfics!!! hehehe keep up the good work! remember santa!!! s- spelling and grammar a- are n- necessary t- to make a- amazing stories!!!!! hahaha! i had to think of a daa! daa! daa! character that could give a piece of advice and/or maybe inspiration for you to make more stories!!! hahaha well anyway, keep on writing and keep up the good work as i always say!!! hahaha!!! it's so kusotekina!!(romantic!) that's all i can say!!! sayonara!!!!
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Reviewed By: ...... On: July 26, 2005 05:04 CDT Comment/Review: SWEET! i can't wait for the next chapters! update okay? :)
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Reviewed By: wolfang On: July 25, 2005 08:20 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really like the original story line, everything is enjoyable from top to bottom no questions ask. I didn't even like daa daa daa until I read this story. very nice!!!! keep it up
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Title: mika kawamura fan Reviewed By: MiyuxKanata4ever On: July 25, 2005 02:34 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: great style of writing!!!!!!!!! ur grammar has improved and i'm glad!!!! but just don't forget the spaces between the words ok? very original!! creative!!! it's very enjoying!! naka-kakilig!!!! i could just imagine their face, their epressions, their actions... very very very very well done!!!! ok, not well done but excellent!!!! update pls.... u know what to tell you the truth, even if i'm just starting to open the website i'm already getting excited!!!! hehehehehe continue writing and keep up the good work!!!! luv ur work!!!!! DAA! DAA! DAA! rocks!!! that's all i can say.... sayonara!!!!
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Reviewed By: daa! On: July 24, 2005 22:01 CDT Comment/Review: how cute! i can't wait for the next chapters! update okay?!
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Title: Good! Great! Continue! Or no cookie for you! Reviewed By: Cheesy girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 01:58 CDT Comment/Review: Nice... Continue, please.
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Title: mika kawamura fan Reviewed By: miyu x kanata 4ever! On: July 22, 2005 21:41 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: hi!!! i like ur fanfic.... please update the story!!!! i'm dying to read it!!!
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Reviewed By: ...... On: July 13, 2005 04:39 CDT Comment/Review: i can't wait for those upcoming chapters! please update soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: satsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 23:54 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i'll change my rating! :D i love the part where miyu and kanata's hands are together! SUUUWWWEEEEETTT!!!
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Title: Cheesy says hi! Reviewed By: Cheesy girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 05:37 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I rate everyone! Enjoy! (PS I speak weirdly sometimes. Don't mind me!)
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Reviewed By: satsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 21:33 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: it's a nice story and plot. Lou has a big part in it and yet you managed to put a sweet MiyuxKanata situation. nice job! but it would be better if you would just type Miyu's name in black it's hard to read it if it's yellow. :D update soon! ;)
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