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Title: Fantastic!!!!!!
Reviewed By: LadY MiyU On: April 27, 2006 10:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well it was really good I dont seem to see the problem it was the first fanfi i have ever read it was fantastic!!!!hope you make more great stories!!!!
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Title: i luv it!!!
Reviewed By: Magic Mistress On: April 25, 2006 22:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
WOW! you really are a great author! i have read all of ur fics. i luved every single one!!! pls. finish ur unfinished fics! okie? I LUV IT!!!
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Title: gresat job
Reviewed By: amru On: February 12, 2006 02:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it. it was totlly dedicated to kanata and miyu. even if u added a bit from the anime it turned out sweet in the end.write more fics of ufo baby just like this one. [p.s -kanta and miyu's kiss was not specified but sti ll kinda nice.
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Reviewed By: MW On: February 08, 2006 06:25 CST
Comment/Review:
thanks Yuchan.. but who is this classmate of yours?
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: Yuchan On: February 08, 2006 05:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like your fanfic because it is so sweet. at first, i thought it was boring so i didn't read it that much. but when my classmate reminded me this afternoon about your fic. so i read it and continued it until i finished it. so consider this a review that is as much as the chapters of your story!
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Title: Cool!!!
Reviewed By: qt_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 20:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow! It's awsome! I really love it! I also hope you write more stories about MiyuxKanata... I love those two!!! :P
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Title: FFARG review Ch3
Reviewed By: SisiXIII [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 22:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
You seem to have the script-writing format going on, and though most readers won't read things like that, the format has it's own appeal and good points. The first thing you need to do is state more clearly to begin with the setting that the characters are in and where each character comes in from, (left set, right set). Are they in a room, a bedroom, a kitchen, where? You have a lot of missing spaces, "Wannyacomes" I'm not sure if this is an anime for real or just something from your head, usually in a script-written play or TV show the characters more or less explain where they come from in the first episode. You haven't explained what these characters relationships are to each other. I like how your character's names are in colour but it would be less glaring if there was more black description in your script. I would suggest reading up on some famous plays to see what you need to do. There are lots of them online I'm sure. Anything by Shakespeare is good but there are other more modern playwrights out there if you can't understand Shakespearean Thou's and thee's.
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Reviewed By: sano izumi On: August 12, 2005 21:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
beautiful..just so beautiful*sniffs* I really really luv ur story keep up the good work i'll be supporting yah!!!!
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Reviewed By: EvilMistress [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 16:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awww! *sniffs* Hand me the tissue! Congratulations, this is an awesome story. :D
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Reviewed By: MiyuxKanata4ever On: August 07, 2005 05:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! what a happy ending! coolness! its nice how you connect some part of the real story to your own version. i like that! would you still write another fanfic? great job! wonderful! wings of heart w- wonderful i- incredible n- nice story g- great job o- outstanding f- fabulous h- happy ending e- exciting a- awesome r- really good t- terrific thats waht i can say bout ur fic... great job! go mika wannabe! ~*MiyuxKanata4ever*~
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Reviewed By: MiyuxKanata4ever On: August 05, 2005 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool! well thats all i can say! its amazing! hahaha yesterday was raining ideas for me. well lucky me... mwahaha well lets just wish me luck on this skit... i hope they memorized their lines! well gotta study later this afternoon my grades are not really failed but just lower than before and now my family is pestering me! after all the hard work of being a leader in our group dont i ever get a break? waah! well, wannya... w- wonderful a- amazing n- nice n- naks ang galing! y- you're lucky u can write good stories a- ako nga eh hirap na hirap sa skit namin! hahaha keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: EvilMistress On: August 04, 2005 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a really good fic, I enjoyed reading every chapter of it. Just watch out for grammar and spelling errors though. But overall this is really good. Hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: MiyuxKanata4ever(i wish i was like aya) On: August 04, 2005 04:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey tnx 4 adding me! its soooo kilig!!!! astig un ha! the day you said goodnight! dba 1 time ginamit mo love moves in mysterious ways doon sa kanata x miyu : aftermath? well keep up the good work! stll need to discipline my group members! (laughs evilly rubbing hands like a mad scientist) just kidding! ayaw mag cooperate! aahh!!! pasaway to the max! well n e wayz ill be cheering u on! you rock! i can just imagine it as if im watching it on tv! hehehe keep it up! okame... o-okay ka! k-keep it up! a-astig ang stories mo! m-ma iimagine mo tlga! e-exciting and excellent! pansin mo tagalog ako ngayon? buwan ng wika sa skul nmin! darating ang mga japanese & taiwanese sa skul at papanoorin ang skit nmin! oh no! dpat ayusin ko na! waah! ok gotta run! sayonara! :)
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Reviewed By: sano izumi On: August 03, 2005 06:22 CDT
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hey!!!!really like your story especially chapter 9 it's so kilig to da max!!!!!!you really update so fast i like it!!!hehehe anyways keep up the gud work i'll be cheering you on!!!!!
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Title: Sorry
Reviewed By: MW On: August 03, 2005 06:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry guys.. I had a lot of things to do today.. I'm going to delay my update... I should upload it maybe 9:00... sorry guys... gomenosai..
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