| "The New Cousin" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Umi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2002 17:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the narrator POV, like you yourself were telling the story. I also liked the chapters jumping from one time period, to a few years later, etc. It was similar to a lot of narrated biographical-type movies that I enjoy. Overall, the story was good, the writing was good, though elaboration on some things may have put it over the edge. |
Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2002 18:07 CST
Comment/Review:
NANI! Is that all! *Goes down into a sulking fit* nooooooooo i need more!
*ahem* Sorry don't worry about me.... just go with the inspiration gal
I'll just be sitting around waiting...
impatiently lol |
Reviewed By: Rena Valentine [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2002 03:02 CST
Comment/Review:
Well, I finally found some time and got to reading all of it thus far. I've been reading it mainly as if it were an original, since I'm not too familiar with CCS. So far, I've found it to be interesting and very intriguing, and I'll be lookin' forward to more. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2002 03:22 CST
Comment/Review:
I see what you mean, by saying chapter 8 is different... I like the way the plot is gathering in this... it keeps the reader gripped, and wanting more! Good work... the crying bit at the end was so sad *sniffle* |
Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2002 23:38 CST
Comment/Review:
Thanx for the post letting all know you had a new chapter up. I realy liked it. So sad with Dina in the coma, and her cousin feeling so bad. I look forward to the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Insane Author On: January 18, 2002 14:49 CST
Comment/Review:
Well people, I'm posting this here since I don't feel like logging in and posting it on the summary. I'm glad you all like my story so much. Chapter eight will be out today, Friday, January the 18th, this notice is for all those who aren't part of the forums. I'm also starting to wrap this story up, there's only a four more chapters left to go. And for all those who like Dina, well for me, I don't just make a character up for a story suddenly. I create them in a RP I do and develop their personality in detail. Again thanks for reading and reviewing my story.
Star |
Reviewed By: Dezz [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2002 23:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Honestly, this is the first CCS fic I've ever read. I've seen some of the series on the WB (shame on me hehe) and I've enjoyed what I've seen so far. I really liked this fic. A lot of the scenes weren't as in depth as I expected them to be, like several setting changes would occur within a small span of time. But most of the fic flowed nicely, hence the 9. There were a few sentences that seemed awkward and some spelling errors, hence the other 9. I liked the character of Dina. In my experience, when most authors insert an additional character, they end up just making either an empty shell that has no depth compared to the characters already in the series, or they end up botching the other chars. This was not the case with your fic, Dina was developed quite well. Bravo, Star. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Dilandaus_girl,Tayles,Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2002 20:27 CST
Comment/Review:
what is going to happen now. God you are leaving me with one cliff hanger after another. Thanx for sending me the link. I'm not sure how I'm signed so just to let you know this is Fanilia |
Reviewed By: dave On: January 11, 2002 11:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep with the storyline it looks like a good
one. |
Reviewed By: Tina M.C. [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2002 13:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice indeed! |
Reviewed By: D-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2002 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Since I couldn't find anything that I didn't like, I'll tell you what I did.
Style: The beginning was cute... with Dina waiting to find out if the baby was a boy... I liked that.
S&G: Good. No big mistakes.
Originality: You have some of your own characters. I love that! I really enjoy meeting new people in fics. They add to the story.
Enjoyment: Cute! That's all I can think of.
Overall: 10, because everything else was.
~D-chan
Email: AlloraColleen@aol.com |
