Reviewed By: Salem Dae [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
I give this story a 3 because, although it is orginal and Seto Kaiba is in a interracial relationship with a black woman, I think the romance aspect is lost. The author concentration too much on trying to make it a crime and suspence story. Some parts were confusing while some let me wondering "what just happen?" The author should focus more on the romance than make it into a suspence story. The story begin to lose focus after the three chapter. I hope this author learns from her mistake, in case she wants to write again.
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