Reviewed By: Sparklefreak On: September 05, 2005 06:36 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Wow gerat fanfic I loved it. I hope you update sometime soon because I want to read the rest of this it's very interesting and I'm not opne to hand out comments like this. Great job. I didn't see many grammer or speeling mistakes and it was very orginal. The way you have wrtten it is impressive aswell. Definatly one of the best I hever ever read