| "Crossed Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: AArrrgghhh!!!!!
Reviewed By: cloverfire19 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 14:18 CST
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Oh no!!!!!!!!! Poor Inu and Kags, aawwww...... Please write more, this is so good and i can't wait to see how you spin this off. It should be really interesting to see where you're going with this. Please write some more!!!!!! Pleeeeeaaassseeee!! If you don't i might die!! You don't want that do you??? ^-^ Just Kidding. But please do write more soon!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~NSI On: August 09, 2005 23:28 CDT
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wow. poor kag and inu. that sucks. i like miroku's comment about kagome not being the only victim. to often that's overlooked in real life as well as fan fiction. interesting begining of a story, i can't imagine all the places you can take this to. keep up the good work!
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Title: more!
Reviewed By: more! On: July 20, 2005 16:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: NyteAngelOfDarkness7 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 21:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story....good job and keep it up:P
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Reviewed By: love-me-as-me [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 17:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked ur story and i can't wait for the next chapter and i really like the style but i did find a few errors in grammer but other then that i was great.
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Reviewed By: Say that it's F/F up front On: July 10, 2005 17:28 CDT
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If this is a F/F yuri story, you should be up front about it here like you were on AFF.net. Some of us don't want to read it if it's not Inu/Kag. You are being deceptive by implying in the summary that it is Inu/Kag so change it. I'm disappointed because it had potential...
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Reviewed By: akdreamer38 On: July 09, 2005 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well my friend that really puts a new twist in Naraku's evil ways. This will be a very interesting story, I hope it will all turn out for the best for Inu and Kags. Keep up the great work!!
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: night owl345 On: July 08, 2005 23:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
write more!!
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion(notsignedin) On: July 08, 2005 08:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thats it I'm hunting Naraku down my self. This is sooooo sad!!! and grrrrrness oh how their own low selfesteem mixed with Naraku lies will torment them so. WAAAA. -_- glares at the authors for writing such a great angst begining. Glare glare(feel the intimidation) ;) Orion
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Title: o_o
Reviewed By: Toko Inori [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 01:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Seriously. That was intense. Definite 10 for creativity. Teehee. Awesome job guys!!
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Reviewed By: missbritt [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 22:15 CDT
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hey i really like it its good you or yall should keep it up ok ;)
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 20:53 CDT
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Can we say "wow"? ....sure can! Poor InuYasha...poor Kagome. But InuYasha is having to bear the unearned guilt of his forced actions. There is no way anyone will convince him that it's not his fault. His sence of self-worth was always low, but this could bury him. He would kill himself before doing Kagome harm, and he will just argue that, "I wasn't strong enough..." to resist Naraku's manipulation. Naraku feeds off of the misery he generates; the greater the pain, the greater his satisfation. To purposely taint what once was pure is right up his alley. I know Kagome will forgive him. In fact, she already has...but how can he forgive himself? It would be best if they didn't leave him alone. I fear for what he might do to himself. -- Interesting delemma for the Inu-tachi. I'm tagging this!
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Title: AMAZING!!!!
Reviewed By: flrsblue-not signed in On: July 07, 2005 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome!!! this story is going on my favorites list. i can already tell it's going to be fantastic. please continue dont just stop like so many other writers do. please update again soon.
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Title: great firt chapter
Reviewed By: Silverhair(from fanfiction.net) On: July 07, 2005 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i got to say i really like this story.poor inuyasha being used by that sick freak naraku! grrr i hate him.poor kagome to have to go through that omg i feel for her.and miroku's right naraku basicly rape her and inuyasha, i can only hope that inuyasha doesn't do anything to stupid! you know him, but i can't blame him if he does. this story is good so far and it's only the first chapter, i can't wait till the next chapter!!!!well update soon okay bye!!!
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