| "Basic Love" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: The Watchful one On: March 26, 2002 19:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT is a great story keep writing, and write a sequal to the story if you want.""Ireally suggest it"". Your the first person to get a top rating from me.Normally I grade hard, but I didn't because it is about Bra and Goten. |
Reviewed By: mizu megami On: January 26, 2002 13:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was mean of him to say. he hadnt seen her for 3 years and then he realises its her and he says shes dead. that is SO mean. |
Reviewed By: Pan-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2002 13:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BRILLIANT, you must write the next chapter, you absoulutaly must, please, please do. |
Reviewed By: Zowe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2002 23:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic. I kind of wish you said what Bra did when she
gone, but oh well that story is still good. Please post
the next chapter soon. |
Reviewed By: pd_vegeta On: December 24, 2001 20:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is turning out good. one bad thing is though, how come you're not using 'hercule's real name? which is Mr. SAtan, by the way. are you one of those dubbies?
well keep at it and have some swearing in it and change hercule's name to mr. satan like it was supposed to be!!! |
Reviewed By: Miyu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2001 18:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
melikes.......when ya gonna post the next chpt??? ^-^ |
Reviewed By: dog20 On: December 24, 2001 11:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was different from all the other bra stories I've read, I will really enjoy the next chapter. |
