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| "Hikari ken Kuro Kokoro" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: Fangirl Japanese for the lose!
Reviewed By: SleepySango [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 23:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
I haven't read this fic, but I just thought I'd let you know that your stupid fangirl Japanese is grammatically incorrect. I assume you want something cheesy like "Sword of Light, Heart of Darkness" or "Light Sword, Black Heart" or what have you, but yo can't just smash two nouns together and pretend that the first one is going to magically transform into an adjective. Hikari no Ken - Sword of light, a la Gourry's artifact sword in Slayers. Kuroi Kokoro - Black heart. Though why you're mucking around with a language you obviously know nothing about, I have no idea. I don't see the appeal of fangirl Japanese, but that's probably because I speak REAL Japanese, and the situationally and grammatically incorrect bullshit Japanese that fans use sounds RETARDED. I won't read your fic because you (mis)use fangirl Japanese. Please reconsider your decision to maul the language, and stick to one language at a time.
| Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 10:26 CST
Comment/Review:
*giggle* I like the idea of Kagome instigating "Torture the toad." I'm going to watch this one. ;)
| Reviewed By: Irish Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 11:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. who are the parings? You are a great writer.
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