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| "Kiryu" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: NEW CAHPTER YES
Reviewed By: Dark_Hound [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 20:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
well folk i fixed the upload problem and im now working on chapter 15 i going to make at least 28 chapters so PLZ read it then review i'd really like it if you would
| Title: Good field-work!
Reviewed By: EternalFreedom [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now this my friend is a fic with great potential! You did really well with the ground work and research on explaining the story on how Earth became Zi, and how the Zoids came to be existing. I like the idea of Godzilla sleeping and disappearing for the remainder of nearly 3000+ years and I can't wait to see what kind of havock the flesh and blood Godzilla will do once he's out of the beauty sleep bit! The other monsters, though I haven't seen the Godzilla movies entirely, seem to have been kept in cryo-sleep, so I can imagine what kind of difficulty the Earth had restraining those terrors without the G-Unit to halt them. So, I wonder when we'll get to see those terrors in action when they wake up along with the King himself! You can bet I will love to see some serious fireworks between Harry and Matt when they face off. I'd also love to hear what happens when Harry's new Zoid goes toe to toe with Kiryu. I can relate to you being tired, but that's one of the prices you have to pay in being a writer, believe me, writing GunDread SEED and the Second Stage of the fic wasn't easy at all. But if you really love to write, and you're willing to go the distance, and that's a good sign of the writer! Keep up the work Matt, I'll love to check the new chapters! EternalFreedom
| Title: Good concept
Reviewed By: EternalFreedom [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 05:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good concepts, but it would be a real good idea to explain how Earth became Zi first, and what happened to Godzilla after 3000 years, and what was the old lizrd doing all that time. That's just some ideas, but all in all, the idea is solid
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