| "Hard Bodies, Anyone?" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: Chimeara [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2007 00:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quite simply, I think that this is one of the best written two-shots i've ever read. However, the part with a youkai being faithfull and yet, Touga has 2 mates mwho get along with each other, not jealous, and neither being dead like most other storries explain it. Could you please explain this to me?
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Reviewed By: hotstuff2020 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2006 11:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv your story sooo much.Keep updating please!!
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Reviewed By: SoutasSister [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 23:07 CST
Comment/Review:
Kagome said: "I hear youkai take commitment very seriously and mate for life. Is that true?" and Inuyasha said: "Yes, it is. Some youkai can become jealous if their mate hangs around the opposite sex. They can't help it. It's in their nature, though mates won't stray from each other. `Divorce' is not an option," but you completely contradict that by writing that Touga has two mates. It doesn't make any sense. If "mates won't stray from each other" then how does Touga have two of them? He had to cheat on Sesshoumaru's mother to get with Inuyasha's mother. So why was Inuyasha upset that Kikyou had another boyfriend if it is okay for his own father to have two women at the same time?
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Title: CH.1
Reviewed By: Peacemaker(not logged in) On: July 21, 2005 03:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is really good and I hadn't realized exaactly how long the first chapter was until I was done reading it. I like the longer chapters vecuz more happens and it is easier to understanf the overall story that way. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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Reviewed By: Quisty1506 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 14:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hmmm interesting.I like it so far.Update A.S.A.P plz :)
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Reviewed By: Krami [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 23:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very nice story. I am enjoying it quite a bit. Good job!
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