| "The Element Warriors" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: make-the-elemnt-warriors-maix-of-grils&boys-sauper-heros
Reviewed By: dr-fan/mai-lover On: February 14, 2009 19:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yah have-mixing boy&gril-team-up-to-combat-eilive wood-aswome to-see-here
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Title: is mai going-a-element-warrior&the hstoy of the elenl-warriors
Reviewed By: dr-fan/mai-lover On: February 03, 2009 10:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hhm what-is the hastoy-of-elenl-warrors-also-mai-is an element-warror-tow
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Title: Queen_Sereaph
Reviewed By: Queen-Seraph [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 01:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I lover your story and I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update when you can.
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Title: Rhenn
Reviewed By: Rhenn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2006 01:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
So cool! Please do more!! I wana see the other warriors!!
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Title: FFARG Review
Reviewed By: Pahhur [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 15:30 CST
Comment/Review:
Okay... The plot seems very interesting. However several serious problems hamper this story. First and foremost is the constantly changing tense. You can\'t have past and present tense two words appart, unless it is speech, and the character talks like that, however this isn\'t the case and I would seriously suggest looking at it. Next you display a large set of typos which I would refer you to a beta for. As well your story seems plauged with logical fallacies. Including begging the question: \"Why don\'t you look for somewhere to sit so whe have somewhere to sit.\" Once again a beta could probably help you out here. Thank you for submitting to FFARG.
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Reviewed By: Angel of Twilight (not logged in yet!) On: September 07, 2005 06:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
YAY! Y/Y PAIRING!!!! R&R PLZ!!!! LOVE Y/Y PAIRING!
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Reviewed By: Gijinka Renamon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 18:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay! Update! But are there gonna be any more warriors or not?!?!?!?
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Reviewed By: Angel of Twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 11:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
plz hurry i'm DIEING over here! Yami: What happened to me anyway? Yugi: ;_; I don't know. *cries* I want Yami to be ok!!!!!! Me: O.o uh oh! *hugs Yugi* Yami: X.x Me: Darn dart thing!!!! Yugi: *still crying* Me: It'll be ok Yugi! *still hugging Yugi* Yugi: I hope this is a Yami/Yugi pairing! Me: O.o That was fast! Yugi: ^__^ Me: *sigh* oh well. your still my favorite character! ^__^ Yugi: ^____^ YAY!!!!!!!!! Yugi and Me: Update soon plz! AND MORE FLUFF! MORE FLUFF! MORE FLUFF! MORE FLUFF!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Angel of Twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 19:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Pleeeeeeeeeeasssssssssssssse hurry!
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Reviewed By: Gijinka Renamon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME! PLEASE DO MORE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!
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Reviewed By: Angel of Twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2005 12:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
an awesum fic! cant wait for other chapters on this! its almost like sailor moon cept with elements instead of planets. which makes it awesum! update soon plz!
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Reviewed By: Gijinka Renamon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 17:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cool! I definetly want to see more!
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