| "Promiscuous Love" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: DaRk_HaLLoW [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of a few stories that made me cry ... congrats !! i never cry when i read stories lol that mean you did an awesome job
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 07:23 CST
Comment/Review:
This is really good. Atemu should be ashamed of himself for taking advantage of Malik at a time like that.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 07:25 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this poor Malik is being abused. Did he kill his sister in the accident? Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Yami_Bakura_Itemri [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2005 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue... I'm just getting into this one...
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Reviewed By: Raist On: September 09, 2005 20:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did a wonderful job on the emotion and actions of the characters this round, baby. The overall factor of this chapter keeps you wanting to read more to see what happens next, and the way they express themselves says even more about each personality. I really like where you are going with this and I cannot wait to read more. Keep up the excellent work!
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