"It Came About" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Mysic_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 01:09 CST Comment/Review: I liked it. It'll make a great story. BeeBeez is right it is hard to read. You should paragrah it.
| Reviewed By: BeeBeez [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2005 11:39 CDT Comment/Review: he heh nice sequel! loved the lil story about how it all started, in particular! but you seemed to have a paragrah problem - the entire story was one long paragraph, and got quite confusing to read :P
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