| "The Coldness" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 18:21 CST
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do not make her have to mate to get an antidote you will not believe how many times i have read a fanfic when kagome has to mate to have something important happen this counts too. also please continue the story i lika it and imma add you to my favs please continue did you forget about this fic?
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Reviewed By: me!! On: October 12, 2006 03:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG YOU HAVE 2 KEEP WRITTING!!!!!!!!THIS IS A WICKED STORY!!!!! PLZ UPDAT ASAP AND I MEAN IT!!!!!
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Reviewed By: nocturnalhuntress On: August 01, 2006 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You rule like Toddler only more efficiantly!!!
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Reviewed By: darkened_soul On: February 25, 2006 21:28 CST
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wow, that was really good. i can't wait untill you update again.
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Title: Kool
Reviewed By: YaY4AiR [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2006 10:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very intersting story. Very original fan fic. plz update soon. : )
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Reviewed By: Setolover2 On: February 19, 2006 13:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Upadte person! Update! I loved the story.
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 16:57 CST
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Please update soon! I love this story!
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Reviewed By: kagsinred [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2006 22:25 CST
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i loved this story. it was so great. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2006 10:08 CST
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I loved this story! Even though Hiei is being a bakayaro... Please update soon!
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Title: The Coldness
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner ^Offline^ On: January 27, 2006 09:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINALLY! YOu FINALLY updated! What took you soooo long?!?! DAMNIT! It's not Boton, it's actually Botan, with an 'a' ebtween 't' and 'n'. What's the deal with Kagome? I thought she was suppose to be mean and evil kind of thing? Anyways, I know this is an Hiei/Kagome pairing and it's a good idea, but what happen to Sesshoumaru? I might forgot about him ... ...
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar09 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2006 19:38 CST
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Well it's not every day that Hiei is speechless lol ^^ U wanted to kno if Boton was spelled right and it's not it's really Botan so I hope that helps ^^ anywho I'm curious on what Kag and Hiei are goin to find on the mission...maybe the one's who killed her parents it's a shame Kags mom died she was really sweet she didnt diserve it *tear* so I hope Kagome kicks there asses.....well tata 4 now Ja!
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Reviewed By: stix On: August 27, 2005 13:54 CDT
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i loved this story. it was so great. please add more to this story soon.
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Title: The Coldness
Reviewed By: Sexi3_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U r an awesum writer, keep writer, ok? and PLZ, pretty PLZ, update a.s.a.p, thanx
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 10:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY!!! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!! AND GREAT JOB ON IT TOO ^_^
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Reviewed By: Chezlesea [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 08:03 CDT
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I love your story! I've been looking for a good HieiKag. Nearly everyone else makes them move too fast. But yours is awesome!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 22:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NICE
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Reviewed By: Elvin Princess On: July 15, 2005 10:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are an awesome writer, keep up the good work! but b4 you post, run it through spell-check on Microsoft Word or Word Perfect. Then read it over to make sure you have all the right words used the right way. The story itself is well thought through and creative. I like it a lot. You should consider being an author.
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Title: chapter 2
Reviewed By: regretfully-yours-cassy-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
yah, uhm, no offence, but i'm not really enjoying this story all that much, i don't mean to be rude, but, why is Kagome acting like that? she's spouting all her secrets to three strangers and a cousing who didn't even react when he found out she had a son, and shes acting all high and mighty and like she knows everything, and hardly anyones asking questions about her and what she knows and stuff, and the whole shippo thing seems rather odd about how cocky he is and how strong he is at such a young age and some of them are a little ooc, so uhm ya, i ask that you consider changing their attitudes as you go on in the story. please update soon
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 18:13 CDT
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WOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!Yet another great story!Update soon...or I'll hunt you down and hurt you....sike...but do please update soon!You rock!WOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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