| "Double Trouble" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: AshNight [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2006 17:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic!!!!!!!!!!!! Please, please, please, update real soon. I want to know what happens to Hikori.
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Reviewed By: stix On: September 27, 2005 07:42 CDT
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i loved this story. it was so great. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: stix On: September 03, 2005 13:25 CDT
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i loved this chapter. it was so great. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: stix On: August 08, 2005 14:33 CDT
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i loved this chapter is was great.pleas add more to this story soon. Shiroi baby should be a girl, she should have all the abilities of her mother but the many one be fire, and Naoru's babies should be a girl, as for the there stuff i am not sure.
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Reviewed By: stix On: July 24, 2005 18:19 CDT
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this chapter was great. i loved it please add more to this storyy soon.
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Reviewed By: stix On: July 23, 2005 13:48 CDT
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i loved this story. it was great.please add more to this story soon.
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